Get It How U Live (G-Money Version)

[G-Money]

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[Chrous Twice]

my neck dont blang my wrist dont chill
im steady on the grind tryin get me a deal
when it comes to hustlin gotta get it how u live
and im on the come up so muthafuck! who u is..


[Verse 1]

my neck dont blang my wrist dont chill
i got good teeth so i dont need a gold grill
my whole life ive been rollin downhill
now that im rappin im tryin to get me a deal
im stuck on the grind with my daughter on my mind
cuz on the real i dont leave the block wit out my nine
people who aint equal wanna hate on my mindstate
is it cuz i rhyme great? or cuz i aint got a court date?
i aint gotta prove nothin cuz i never got caught
and everything i own to this date i done bought
enemies i've fought but its nothin to a G
i dont need no "E" to fuck me a skeez, use my mouthpiece
to get em on they knees, waitin for me to skeet babies
i love all the ladies but leave em waitin on maybes
fuck a mercedes, i'd rather roll in a focus
so that all u muthafuckers kno that im focus'd


[Chrous Twice]


[Verse 2]

my outfits clean, so my shirt,pants,n shoes make a team
i really dont need all those un-necessary things
i got real diamond earrings i dont fuck with the cubic zirconia
call me outkast cuz i smoke that bomb that leave that "stankonia"
(stank-on-ya)
u aint a playa if them gurls dont phone ya or bone ya
got three booty calls doin this song from felicia,channa, n sonia
now i aint one to toot my own horn but ive dabbled in porn
shit i was destined to since the day i was born
college bitches hit me in a sworm to have a manage in a dorm
so they gotta sign on a form to make a 20 gurl quorum
gotta rock that authenic Moss cuz on the west imma boss
i aint even paid the cost, but in Cali every dude gotta floss
i dont wear chains i stick to customized dogtags
with backwards hats over du-rags holdin dime bags
i take that cali doja to the face like a soujla
as i relax gettin a tattoo of my daughter on my shoulder


[Chrous Twice]


[Verse 3]

i got eleven pairs of jays n twenty different ways
to make a grip every other seven days
my family dont act strange when i gotta lil change
but since i have aged that shits been re arranged
i got problems in my life but still im grateful
cuz i smoke away my pain with shit more sticky then maple
im turning 20 in april so my mind set to grow up
drink til i throw up n write rhymes til i blow up...


[Chrous Four Times]



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[warchild]

Ive read other pieces from you which i liked but i wasnt really feeling this piece. The story was ok but i just felt what you was saying in the verses has been said a million times before by other rappers and said better. I just didnt think there was anything original in the piece to really grab my attention.
There was no wit in the piece i think you could of mixed in a few sly punches or metaphors to make the piece stand out but you didnt.
Your imagery and vocab was also basic it seemed liked a rushed verse to me.
Next time you write try and think of a better concept and take your time with the verses also work on the flow try adding some multies into your pieces to make them more complex. Keep Writing And Keep Posting.
Return the feed on my new Om:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=240126

[MaRVJay]

lol...be original fam

[G-Money]

jus dropped something quick cuz i havent dropped in a min ... its a remix of a twista song that i put my own perspective on it... last time i dropped a deep piece no one left feedback so i figured i do something thats either gonna get hated on or ppl will like ... thanks for the feed... hey marv next time leave some feedback or dont even waste ur time cuz ur not helpin me none when u tell me to keep it original

[T.F. Lee]

i think what he's sayin is that you can do the on the block shit..but try to flip it...when i was readin this it felt like I'd heard it on the radio on the way to work...when i was chillin in the house...when i turn on BET..you get the idea...but other than that flow was kinda simple...content matched...if you do deep pieces...go ahead and post em...I reply to you champ

[pyro2472]

yo everythin u write is ill keep it comin and keepin reppin cali yeah

[pyro2472]

u defintly goin blow up soon

[J-Hova]

yo the peice wasnt so great but it wasnt bad u jus need to work on ur vocabs ur flow and u straight home keep it up though

[EyeBite]

this was alright, i wasnt feelin this too much, topic really didnt catch my attention, rhymes were good i'll give you that and flow thats about it, thats all i thought was good, aiight drop, just keep elevating and keep it up, overall this peice was a 8.3..peace

[Johnny 6-feet]

Closed, for having the nerve to leave links to your own pieces as feedback.