yo i just was in school today...high as fuck...and i thought id mess wit my wordplay and try to come out with a positive, non braggin verse
i only had bout 20 mins so its the best i could come up wit even tho its a new way to write for me so it might be kinda wack n my structure might be off...o well its my first time doin this kinda poem shit
anyway id like some feedback
THE DAY OF ABBREVIATION
to underestimate the mind is equivalent to hearin a blatant lie
for the remainder of your time plus seven reincarnated lives
it may sound strange, but this source of demise is designed
to assure the human race never understands the truly wise
if the downfall of morality is irreversibly bound to me
then when does the world decline into a sapien-less galaxy?
when does the craft arrive to take us away into an oddyssey
or is it just a simple figment of distorted reality?
this gimmick is un-woven to the truth but if caught untold
the lies can diversify until the fiction is over-exposed
the outer planetary "fact" might be a myth of crossed roads
most scientific knowledge are equations completely false when sold
the population sits inside an enormous trap to over-compensate
---a multi-step trap with cheese replaced with fear as bait
due to the complications of cynical agents looked to as great
i think society's slippin into a deep haze and it might be too late
but the spiritually guided will overcome thru simple registration
as the misdirected spark a flame and sprint towards incineration
each day we come closer to total population obliviation...
...yet the hemisphere stays untouched until the day of abbreviation
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Originally Posted by master theisis
