L.I (1-0) vs. StevieFresh (0-1)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[L.I]

in. im going 10..

[StevieFresh]

check...

[L.I]

SF? who ya kiddin. we all know that reps weak fucks
cause to be true it wont take niner ten lines to beat ya
ur pointless son. dont give me hell
we'll never DL ya verse....just keep it on the DL
hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here
ur annoying as fuck. u cant measure up, ya light
i get told 'bout migrate verse.. we just wish u would to a different site

[StevieFresh]

wit such words like that u must die, wonderin if i should try
cuz if dis kid's da Truth, i stand in disbelief knowin its all L I
at a natural high, gouge out his eye to give him the pound
so his 1st initials would equal his same outcome of dis round
aint puttin me down, u gonna get murked as my words engage
cuz u suck even wit structure.....................................
patterns long to short, it like ya verse resembles a fish's ribcage
thought u was a challenge but u like shootin clocks, wastin my time
confuse L.I verse 4 pedestrian crossin...how i walk all ova his lines
u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

[StevieFresh]

and heres my links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=247407&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=247385&page=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247405
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247419

[young hov]

easy win

nothing
.........................vs

u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

L.I you had nothing good no punches or personals ya structure could of been better and you could of been more creative .................................................. .......................steve you had this won bagged up had way better punches but they weren't the best just were better than his structure was also good.............vote steve for better punches

[rile1]

L.I.
hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here
ur annoying as fuck. u cant measure up, ya light
i get told 'bout migrate verse.. we just wish u would to a different site

SF
u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

L.I. definitely was a bit harder and more consisntent, and had some better wordplay as well, V/ L.I.

[Untold.]

hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here
ur annoying as fuck. u cant measure up, ya light
i get told 'bout migrate verse.. we just wish u would to a different site

vs.

wit such words like that u must die, wonderin if i should try
cuz if dis kid's da Truth, i stand in disbelief knowin its all L I
at a natural high, gouge out his eye to give him the pound
so his 1st initials would equal his same outcome of dis round
thought u was a challenge but u like shootin clocks, wastin my time
confuse L.I verse 4 pedestrian crossin...how i walk all ova his lines
u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

Well, LI had some witty lines, but I felt almost all of Stevie's verse just had more punches. SF had more consistency.

V/SF

[StevieFresh]

2-1
im up

[TaK]

Vote - L I

The only thing i liked from stevie fresh is his closer that nun line was pretty good but besides that i thought your flow was kinda choppy and while you did have punches the concepts were kinda played

L.I your flow was smoother but not alot you didnt have real hard hittin punches but what won it for me was the mediocre line and the wordplay on migrate

[LuStFuL]

wit such words like that u must die, wonderin if i should try
cuz if dis kid's da Truth, i stand in disbelief knowin its all L I
thought u was a challenge but u like shootin clocks, wastin my time
confuse L.I verse 4 pedestrian crossin...how i walk all ova his lines
u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

Whole verse was good, these I felt were best

vs

hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here
Pretty good

Stevie gets this for better punches. LI, sum of ur punches didn't really hit hard enough. I could have put stevies verse with an exception on one bar.

v/stevie

[Philly®]

SF? who ya kiddin. we all know that reps weak fucks
cause to be true it wont take niner ten lines to beat ya
meh,...flow got messed up with second line,.,....and you forced a rhyme
ur pointless son. dont give me hell
we'll never DL ya verse....just keep it on the DL
lol
hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
lol.....nice, but don't like the fact that u ended ya line with YA again
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here
coo
ur annoying as fuck. u cant measure up, ya light
i get told 'bout migrate verse.. we just wish u would to a different site
coo closer


vs.

wit such words like that u must die, wonderin if i should try
cuz if dis kid's da Truth, i stand in disbelief knowin its all L I
nice name play
at a natural high, gouge out his eye to give him the pound
so his 1st initials would equal his same outcome of dis round
basic
aint puttin me down, u gonna get murked as my words engage
cuz u suck even wit structure.....................................
patterns long to short, it like ya verse resembles a fish's ribcage
hmmmm,......meh
thought u was a challenge but u like shootin clocks, wastin my time
confuse L.I verse 4 pedestrian crossin...how i walk all ova his lines
nice.....best punch of battle
u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse
ok closer


this was a very close battle, so i had to break down the bars,..........overall i think stevie jus was a lil better, on the real i think depending on the voter this could go either way, cuz u both gave a good effert, but i have to go with stevie for a better verse

V/stevie for reasons above

[Philly B. Sparkz]

hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here

Vs.

u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

v/ L.I, is gettin played

[Demon Pyrokronix]

hardcore match? please. do make me choke ya
& if you say 'Im just M-e'.. u left out the 'ediocr'
dude your gonna lose. just sign out before it gets wierd
cuz ill have you rockin 02 like most of the vets here

Vs.

u lose and everybody in jrs thought he'd give me a 0 ta duece
u had punches tho, but nun hit me...like catholic school abuse

V/ LI, he isn't as good as I thought he was though.