Demon Pyrokronix (0-0) vs. TaK (0-0)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[TaK]

doobie oobie oooh im checkin in how much you wanna go?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247385

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247389

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247485

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3432756

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Hmm I don't know who you are so 14?

Check in

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245099
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245082
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245090
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245094

I went 14 so if you want you can edit another bar into your verse.

[TaK]

Heres 12 Good Luck D



Ima cocky kid and you cant top these scripts
cause djs'll put ya wax on n take ya wax off quicker then the karate kid
i cannot be hit, and watch me work my way to the top of the throne
cause face it the mag is the only things cats'll read n respond in a positive tone
..cause you gotta understand ya boring dude, ya born to lose
you aint gotta fanbase, ya feet the only thing supportin you
and im reporting duke ya better quit quick before this shit is done
and tak's makes ya career last shorter then nixons run
so voters watch as this kid gets done and i really think its fair to me
to have some shells put a part in your face, like you wanted to braid the hair on your cheek
so its easy to see how your fairing this week, we know the rest can see
that ya record'll be owin one like you were in debt to me

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Beat me? thats like sayin obesity prevents death
You ain seein this vets rep, you ain felt n ill defeat you dummy
Ill fuckin beat you bloody, you ain holdin me ep
Leakin fluids cause epics were supposed to be read

I've never seen a rhyme plot or scheme, cuz they rarely play the deceiver
And them lines make it clear that you've never seen a rhymescheme either
I’ma blead ya, fuck kid I’ma leave you smacked, serious
And quit with the threats cuz we all know a’tak punch is wack, period
Go ahead smoke weed, we’re praying you’ll overdose the sooner
& If dope gives you a kick…
Hopefully it’s lay givin you the boot out of jr
Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious
I'm Charles Bronson, but this fag's a pussy that comes weak in a fight
But it'll be a lie sayin he ain't boxed, coz it's what he sleeps in at night
I'm done with this battle & it's obvious you lost it whore
Coz you're writing's the only Misery Kathy Bates didn't win an oscar for

Now stay the fuck in your place bitch

[Lyrical God]

Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious

Vs.

Nothing


Vote/Demon easily

[Ogadai Khan]

Go ahead smoke weed, we’re praying you’ll overdose the sooner
& If dope gives you a kick…
Hopefully it’s lay givin you the boot out of jr
Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious
I'm Charles Bronson, but this fag's a pussy that comes weak in a fight
But it'll be a lie sayin he ain't boxed, coz it's what he sleeps in at night
I'm done with this battle & it's obvious you lost it whore
Coz you're writing's the only Misery Kathy Bates didn't win an oscar for

VS

NOTHING

This was a good battle, but I think it was a bit unfair though. TaK's concepts were simplistic, not well thought out nor well delivered, and DP is a more experienced battler so I think that the match was slighlty in his favour.

V/ Demon Pyrokronix

[Untold.]

..cause you gotta understand ya boring dude, ya born to lose
you aint gotta fanbase, ya feet the only thing supportin you
and im reporting duke ya better quit quick before this shit is done
and tak's makes ya career last shorter then nixons run
so its easy to see how your fairing this week, we know the rest can see
that ya record'll be owin one like you were in debt to me

vs.

I've never seen a rhyme plot or scheme, cuz they rarely play the deceiver
And them lines make it clear that you've never seen a rhymescheme either
Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious
I'm Charles Bronson, but this fag's a pussy that comes weak in a fight
But it'll be a lie sayin he ain't boxed, coz it's what he sleeps in at night
I'm done with this battle & it's obvious you lost it whore
Coz you're writing's the only Misery Kathy Bates didn't win an oscar for

V/ Demon

[kid sick]

Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious

Vs



Nothing

demon killed this kid.

v/demon

[LuStFuL]

Go ahead smoke weed, we’re praying you’ll overdose the sooner
& If dope gives you a kick…
Hopefully it’s lay givin you the boot out of jr
Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains

vs

manily played lines

v/demon

[TheKing]

I'm Charles Bronson, but this fag's a pussy that comes weak in a fight
But it'll be a lie sayin he ain't boxed, coz it's what he sleeps in at night
I'm done with this battle & it's obvious you lost it whore
Coz you're writing's the only Misery Kathy Bates didn't win an oscar for

VS

the nixon run line

v/ demon

ch-ch-ch eck out my battle NOW

[StevieFresh]

Fuckin loser, Demon’ll be the one inciting the pain
& If ur concepts are food for thought then ur verses are like diets for brains
I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious

Vs

Nothing


v/ demon p

[Possible]

I set fire to lames, gossip sucks coz me falling off is nonesense
But if I ever do hit rock bottom... your fuckin ass'll end up unconcious
I'm Charles Bronson, but this fag's a pussy that comes weak in a fight
But it'll be a lie sayin he ain't boxed, coz it's what he sleeps in at night
Rofl^

vs.

Not to be a dick, but nothing worth quoting, some mediocre attempts at punches, not the worst, yet not worth quoting.

V. DP

[Demon Pyrokronix]

Lmao at everyone who voted on this battle quoting a different one of my lines, I think that says something about my verse yo

[young hov]

easy win

nothing
..............vs
Go ahead smoke weed, we’re praying you’ll overdose the sooner
& If dope gives you a kick…
Hopefully it’s lay givin you the boot out of jr

both drops were pretty weak but I see that demon didn't have to drop hard looking at tak's verse ..............tak ya structure was bad didn't have no punches personals or good wrding you need to elavate don't know how you even made it to this league.......demon you had like 2 good punches all the other stuff weren't nothing specisal...but I give you this win for better punchlines v/demon

can ya hit up my LLL jr battle and just to let you know That verse I drop wasn't my best at all