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Thread: This is How we do-Trymph Ft Pakaveli

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    This is How we do-Trymph Ft Pakaveli

    Pakaveli

    Tryumph

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    Check 2, Colab motherfuckers, Yea Pak and Try, we bussin on ya punk ass bitches all day, patanngggg

    We Fuckin Thug lords, we leave ya read and blue
    The red for the blood, blue bruises, when ya got hit with a cue,
    We fuckin Hustlers, we sell ya shit,
    Make you believe, we actually sellin ya the propa kit.
    Don’t it go to prove we certified Gangsta’s
    While ya dogs out there……..Certified pranksters…hahaah



    Try..Umph...motherfucker its that Colorado Stunna...

    Yeah, Kwabas up on that grind,
    Tryumph is on a mission 2 regain whats mine
    pickin up bitches, females so fine
    Forget about snitches cause i aint got the time
    the countdown begins when am 19
    bumpin nas and mob… turned me into a rap fiend
    Yeah East Coast West coast Down souf on tha map
    Midwest got St. Louie but that Rado aint been tapped
    Thats where i come in, i got the rockies on my back
    Once yall hear my name (KWABA) yall just stumble back
    Now Acknowledge the fact, my words they stroke genius
    enlighten sheltered minds on how NoCo, we live dreamless
    No sleep bitch....its that 24 hour gamble
    while the rest of yall sleep we stay lit like a candle
    ready to sneak up on the game, stick and dismantle
    my heads as big as pikes peak, its to hard for me to handle
    we fightin our way into the mixture of thangs
    Give me a beat and let me release my flames (Goin clang clang)
    openin this gate into a sick twisted brain
    my words reflect years of shit and tweakin in pain
    losin my name; rediscovering myself through writings in vain, I claim
    im too wild to ever contain, are you going insane mayne
    This is Try..umph and this is MY GAME
    Next up on the mic pa,k burns all ya dogs with flames


    We Fuckin Thug lords, we leave ya read and blue
    The red for the blood, blue bruises, when ya got hit with a cue,
    We fuckin Hustlers, we sell ya shit,
    Make you believe, we actually sellin ya the propa kit.
    Don’t it go to prove we certified Gangsta’s
    While ya dogs out there……..Certified pranksters…hahaah



    Paka…..Westcoast Hustler motherfuckers.

    After ya heard Try, u know he on a mission,
    From now on, bfore ya hustle ya gotta ask Pakas Permission,
    Intermission, will be put on ya life if ya try deception,
    So I better mention, that when a menace is lose,
    Better hide, cause he more violent than a hooligan on booze,
    Like I said, am the hustler of…… WestCoast,
    Give me burnt bread; I’ll sell it as if it was French toast,
    U know, I have ta do what I have ta do,
    With Try on ma side, am gonna leave ya without a clue,
    Get a rotted apple, make you believe it’s roast stew,
    Even am on a high, had too much crack,
    True Hustler always has ta lie, gets caught….Goes on attack,
    Now I introduced y’all to my way of live,
    Byatch ya learned too much, damn am gonna have ta stab ya wife
    And you with ma ……………20 inch knife, byatch.


    We Fuckin Thug lords, we leave ya read and blue
    The red for the blood, blue bruises, when ya got hit with a cue,
    We fuckin Hustlers, we sell ya shit,
    Make you believe, we actually sellin ya the propa kit.
    Don’t it go to prove we certified Gangsta’s
    While ya dogs out there……..just Certified pranksters…hahaah

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    is this like a blood crip colab

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    The colours, didn't notice that, good looki syco, anyway how about comments on the rhyme

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    This Was Nice Overall Drop, The Chorus Was Kinda Wack But, Other Than That Its Lookin Really Nice, I Think You Could Have Wrote Aliitle More, Also I WOuld have used somemore wordplay, overall

    7/10
    Last edited by SyCo_187; November 11th, 2005 at 06:36 PM

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    uppin ... c'mon mafuckas...since pak dropped 2 links do i need to throw two in too...ill throw in real quick if i have too

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    Nah i reckon the 2 links count for both of us, uppin for more feeds

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    this was pretty tight....strucutre was good..flow was smoth..rhymes scheme was not simple..props fo that....topic was cool.....i liked both of your verse as well as the both of you verse....nicely dome.overall this was like a 8/10..good drop..keep it uyp...peace and can you check out my battle vs Lyric Striker in my Sig. and vote and pist a good explanation.thanks

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    Aight thanks for the comments, checked out the battle you said. Uppin' leave feed and i'll leave feed on your OMs or leave a link to your battles and i'll give out an honest vote

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    Those open mics are ones you replied to 2 weeks ago! Stick a couple of fresh links in please.

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    i liked this alot.....the flow was consistent the whole way through which made this piece easier to read and comprehend and also made it more enjoyable.....i really liked how yall both came together with this idea....it was creative and i rate it a 8/10....vocab coulda been a little better but thatz about my only complaint....

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    thanks for the comments, keep the feed coming

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    Uppin dogs, bring on the feed, cause i reckon this piece is worth it

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    Uppin for more comments................ Riseeee

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