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Thread: Angel eyes, Devilish Intentions. By Def Reapper and Miss Clit

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    Angel eyes, Devilish Intentions. By Def Reapper and Miss Clit

    Def Is the first verse
    Miss Clit is the second
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    Females, to me thier details are undescribed mentally
    Always have me wonderin' whether or not they're into me
    I don't even waste my energy...well not anymore
    Ever since I met this woman, unlike any before
    She had me sprung from first sight, at least thats how it felt...
    Her beauty was as fiery as her passion, it made my heart melt...
    She had the most beautiful eyes as if they belonged to an angel
    She had my tounge tied in my throat, reminds me of being strangled
    My words tangled and I couldn't express my emotions
    I was caught in the wave of love, as soon as it set in motion
    She held my attention almost twenty four seven
    I was happy even when my mom had post mortem depression
    Its my confession, I was infatuated with her style and features
    And how she kept her nails up and had the flyest sneakers
    But she never paid attention and when she finally took notice
    She had me doing unlawful things, my heart speeding faster than a Lotus
    I couldn't help it I tried to please her in every way possible
    And every time she committed a wrong I held myself responsible
    She was the girl of my dreams, I fantasized about daily
    I prayed to the lord on the regular so that he wouldn't fail me
    I needed her in my life, but started to pull away and recede
    We'd have constant argumentations about her trying to leave
    But...
    She left me out in the cold, after she fufilled her wicked intentions
    Did things so cruel to me, its painful to even mention
    She finally had Karma cathc up to her in masses
    In lawsuits of emotional disorders and cases of harrassments
    It just goes to show that, you can't judge a book by its tempting incentive...
    Cuz this girl had angel eyes undermined by the most devilish intentions


    Wise Advice


    I didn't think you'd be the type who'd mess up my life
    My mom use to tell me to be careful and think twice


    My Feelings in the end

    I thought....you were some one I could trust
    But I got caught in the middle....................
    And you left....me straight down in the dust
    You had hidden agendas, I should've known
    I thought I was going to be the queen.........
    ............................You took to your throne


    How It Began


    I remeber it, like it had happend a minute ago
    I was chilling outside,...... getting ready to go
    It was a warm day,.. So I had on a short skirt
    I saw you walking down the street w/o a shirt
    You were limping a little..............................
    ..........................So I asked if you were hurt
    You said I'm ok, and I made your day better
    I could tell from that.....You were a go getter
    You asked for my number in a polite manner
    My mom lets say she turned into a scanner


    Few weeks after talking

    We've been talking for 4 weeks and been on dates
    I thought to myself what about this boy can I hate
    We continued talking and soon became.......lovers
    Hell I thought about having u at home.................
    ....................................playing under the covers


    The turn around

    I knew it was a mistake, I haven't heard from you in days
    You said you loved me, or maybe u lied, or was blazed
    I gave u a special gift, that you weren't suppose to have
    MY feelings were hurt, I thought lord, I need to go to rehab
    Got blinded by your eyes, all I saw was your sex appeal
    Now I know that life aint doin nothin but makin me ill
    Its been months and I haven't even heard your voice
    Giving you whatuwanted was just simply my choice
    I thought I knew angle, but you were a nothin but a devil
    I told myself, i'll never get another guy that was on you level


    The Conclusion

    I see that you're not at all I thought you were
    I reminese and wish it would just be a blurr
    You had an angles eyes, and devils intentions
    You got what you wanted.............................
    ..........................You completed your mission

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    Clits verse made my twinky possessed..

    nice shit here...good structure, flow and use of emotion and vocab..etc..

    peep my shit..links in my ass

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    fuck you jamal.

    But I agree with you. Links in...

    no where. =/

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Twizted-
    fuck you jamal.

    But I agree with you. Links in...

    no where. =/
    no, no..


    fuck you..

    go get newbs to nominate your om's for legends loser.. :realist:

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    Wowies! This was illy. I enjoy'd how you basically flip'd each others concepts and made it known how ya'll felt. The imagery and vocab was all good. I really enjoy'd miss cummings verse for how she broke everything down and kind of gave me that whole I hate men feeling! Well, just goes to show ya how we can be at times.

    Illy!

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    :noor: <- LOL

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    good peice....rhymes scheme was good..not simple...complex and good

    flow was smooth and structure was even through out the whole peice

    topic was cool...i was feelin it... the peice held a good source of emotion

    well done...good peice..overall 9/10..keep it up peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Twizted-
    :noor: <- LOL
    <---LOL..

    oh thats right....your not important enough to get one...

    oh wait my bad... :homo: <---LOL

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    TWIZ...u know what your doing...

    upping for more feed yo...
    Death to All Comers..

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    Word. Thanks for the feed. Jamal and Twisted get outta here

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    good peice....rhymes scheme was good..not simple...complex and good
    flow was smooth and structure was even through out the whole peice
    topic was cool...i was feelin it... the peice held a good source of emotion
    well done...good peice..overall 8/10..keep it up peace

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    this was a str8 drop.....

    def- your verse was aight you had some good imagry as well as emotion...your flow was good and consistant.... vocab is somethin you could work on as well as multies into your verse....it was overall aight nuttin great but better then alot of the OMs dropped now

    clit- your flow was superb...very consistant throughout the entire verse....the imagry was on and off as well was the emotion....it was pretty simplistic not much complexity to it....work vocab as well as multies into the verse to make it more complex...it was a str8 drop as well....

    overall not bad.....keep it up
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    Thanks for the feed. Uppin for more

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    shit was hot yo,................vocab was str8 structure was coo, and the imagery was ill i think i'm getting a cold...........lol..............overall

    8.8/10

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