should b the top track on their
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...m?bandID=82331
will RTF if i diddnt hit ur shit up already
should b the top track on their
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...m?bandID=82331
will RTF if i diddnt hit ur shit up already
Last edited by Cho-Kahn MiWang'; November 13th, 2005 at 01:00 PM
fix your link connection yo, it says there's a 404 Error and it redirects back to the soundclick Home Page, fix it up and I'll return the feed yo, One
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iight ^^ should b good now
*peepin' track*
hahah, that intro's jokes as fucks damn, the battle beat, nice choice of beat for real, your quality's o.k, could be better, your flow's nice, u're rushin' it sometimes though with the usage of too many words, I have that problem a bit too when I write yo, delivery and emotion are alright, hook's funny, u come back in in the 2nd verse and it's high frequency, but only on that first word, 2nd verse is pretty much better then the first, overall it's alright fam, keep doin' your thing yo, ONe
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thx kiko...
i've ben told quality wise and delevery this is some of my best yet...
^^^^^pnpjnpnpnpn !!
U stole my name........wtf....
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lmao at the intro... beat is cool too... your lyrics are kinda cool... that vocabularical brainy shit... lol... you doin' it though... your delivery ain't impressive... flow is choppy, needs a little polishin' up... quality is not very good... your second verse is like a 180 from the first... this is alright... keep it up man...
I got one up right now...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249827
holla...
Last edited by LionFire; November 18th, 2005 at 12:06 AM
?? wtf u talkin aboutOriginally Posted by DVSMIND
U stole my name....
lmao to that intro...shit was funny...the whole track was funny every time that skit kept comin in... flow was nice u rushed a few times to get words in but that waz koo...quality wasn't too good...delivery was iight...versus were iight...overall good track man keep it up just work on ya quality and flow and you'll b str8
thx ppl..good lookin yo !!!
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