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    Quick Topical. (Life of a Rapist)

    Life of a Rapist


    How dare you stand at the pulpit and preach about the coming of Christ,
    You havent went through hell, because you meet me only once in your life
    Your hands should have caught fire as you dipped them into the holy water,
    Smeared on the cheeks of her face, as I deplete the everlasting life of your daughter
    and I wish you would choke and spit on the hypocrisy of your own words,
    there'll never be a chance again, to hear the whistles of the birds
    Does your conscience bother you at all, or do you still it with the wine
    Living as a slave in your mind, there's no way Earth'll be ever divine
    It is all that I can see, a black rock that hides your sins
    Confessed and cleansed with a rinse, against a child of innocence
    Who will absolve you for you have trespassed in the worst kind of way,
    I carried your guilt for many years, and I felt the shame
    The filth you uttered into her ears,as your satanic hands lifted her skirt
    You can feel the presence of Lucifer, from where and when he would lurk
    It is a secret you told me and I kept it for a long time,
    Though the pain is dense and sane is best, it went along by
    it weighed like a stone around my neck, let your soul puke,
    So I turn it over to you, may it drag you down and expose you.


    May you burn into eternity
    in the flames of Satan's hell.
    I have overcome,
    yet I shudder when I see you
    and I hate all that you stand for.
    Never would I have imagined
    the sights before my eyes
    the odor of flesh was so strong
    and oh so loud were their cries,
    yet silent at the same time
    Can you imagine the sights I saw
    what it was like to see the remains
    of these horrific crimes
    To see blood splattered
    all over the walls
    As I walked through the halls of hell
    I saw the starved and beaten
    the dying and dead
    All enclosed in a box
    which was considered a cell
    They had been mal-nourished
    worked to the bone
    and received no medical care
    They had obviously been misused
    and tortured
    and their lives were clearly unfair
    The dominant ones took everything
    including their hair
    They had no choice but to endure pain
    of which nobody should ever have to bare
    I saw a man too weak to lift his head
    He looked of skin and bones
    I watched him lay there
    A skeleton in the bed
    The barracks contained beds to the sky
    Fifty people could fit
    One hundred and fifty
    were forced to try
    It was during that time
    that I came to discover
    Suffering is universal
    there isn't any cover
    at some time it's eye will see us all
    whether were a man, woman,
    child or mother
    Unfortunately, these poor souls
    were seen by it's eye
    and so many of them happened to die
    Always will I remember
    the memories I contain
    The sights I saw
    The misery
    and the pain.

    Told to be a focused earth, when the enthralled are being knuckled down,
    the crimson shed of man's heart, smears the vivid pure bridal gown.
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    hey man this was real nice, i liked it. I liked your vocabulary in this, good structure and great metaphors as well. I liked how u combined hell and jail into it. Good topic, very creative.

    Your really good at these, so i would appreciate it if u gave me feed, whether good or bad, on my OM. It was my first attemt..

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=256133

    Good job, keep it up.

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    Thanks man, I'll peep urs in a few..
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    this was real Good, i Enjoyed it. I Loved your vocabulary, good structure and great metaphors. I liked how u combined hell and jail into it. Good topic, very creative......8.9/10

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    Hot Work. I like how you incorporated some words with others, and the use of imagery and vocab were beyond good. Keep up that work.~1~
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    nice peice good vocab check mine out song for the streets

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    kool..
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