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    The Lone Chair feat. Atticus

    The Lone Chair
    1st verse - Atticus
    2nd Verse - Nostradomus


    And there, where a kings hand
    once thumbed death for instance,
    heads once rolled, and man's cold
    dammed the gifted... Is a hole.
    The throne of a leader unjust
    has grown ever green in disgust.
    The peasant shoulders soldier
    never more his tyrannical sword.
    Passed to floor with a crash,
    the gluttonous is fumbled back
    and forth as... a crack forms.
    His seat of glee and gluttony
    no longer seen as just a seat,
    As irony grips the kings stomach,
    this fat fuck's consumed by a glutton.
    And wow, its alittle odd now
    how thow who opt. to sit on down
    and be tugged up to your brick structure
    turns to peasant without its structure.
    His once throne holds it capture...
    Throat open, see him trapped there.
    As the King which mimicked hell,
    sits sifting again in all our riches....
    ... But in the belly of this wishing well.


    As I sit upon it, my thoughts come tracing the facts ,
    Of how we loved our children but our children never loved us back
    But the years went quickly by us, our children and you have gone,
    I’m left with only memories, and this chair I sit upon
    Saw my reflection in the mirror, almost broke down and cried,
    So little hope that I'm alive, I wish that I had died
    Feed me your lies, gazing across the table, open wide,
    Though the weight of my heart is oppressive, not even the size
    You know it's not coincidental that you’re lost, no trace
    It’s dripping off of your face, and you’re losing your mind in this place
    When a man loses his mate, many days are spent in years,
    And without belief he knows his empty grief is a name for his own fears
    It's hard enough being alone, sitting here quiet by the phone,
    waiting for my memories to soften my mind, but they're hard as stone
    Light threatens your soul, the way you see it when time has come,
    though when you expire and arise, you feel nothing, your life is numb
    Sitting here solely still, world is silent, but you go deaf,
    because the sound of death is concealed, it closes your chest
    It compresses your story, vanish to dust, it was never meant to be,
    I've been sitting at a table with no one, for years the seat's been empty.

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    This Was A Very Nice Piece of Work.. It Sounded Like Y'all Was Approaching A More Poetic Type of Style On This One.. I Was Defiantly Feeling This Shit. I Liked How Atticus Kept His Lines Very Small.. And I Liked How Nostradomus Brought Some Insane Vocabulary Into His Rhymes.

    All In All.. A Very Nice Piece.

    ~ STAY UP! ~

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    this was more like a poetic type but it was GREAT nice creativity and DEPICTION w/ vocab...........................i liked how it went together and it didnt flow off.......it flwed very consistant and well.

    all in all VERY VERY NICE PIECE
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    Oh, good shit man... Wasn't sure when I was going to actually see this posted. Came out real nice though, we'll have to collab again some time.
    po'ethics /
    abstanticollective.

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    gd drop yall
    2 gd verses
    1st verse
    flowd well
    gd rhymin
    gd structure
    gd to read

    2nd verse
    flowd well, mainly
    simple rhymin
    alrite structure
    alrite to read

    elevate ur vocab
    keep @ it

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    Thanks, up.

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    Amazing Piece! Bottom Line.
    Went Together Perfectly.
    Word To How Dope It Was How Atticus Kept His Lines Short And Sweet.
    And Nost's Vocab He Displayed In His Part.
    You Guys Should Definitely Do Some More Collabs And Post More Of This.

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    thanks

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    *shits on thread*

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    You heard em' Nostra... We've got to collab again
    po'ethics /
    abstanticollective.

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    I think you're right Atty.

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    sorta reminds me opf sum Robert Frost,Edgar allen poe shit..Nice concept...This is a nice read..I want tah break it down..But i have a question...

    Sitting here solely still, world is silent, but you go deaf,
    because the sound of death is concealed, it closes your chest

    ^What was that pose to mean?

    Overall..nice drop..Deep.

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    They say silence is deafening, so that was basically the concept in the first line. In the second, death is concealing. Concealing means, like closed up, or closing. Death closes your life basically. If it closes your chest, it closes your heart. If it closes your heart, it closes your life.


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    a gd drop wiv both verses
    gd 2 read
    gd flow
    gd rhymin
    vocab cud be improved
    keep up workin on dope drops
    keep@it

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