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  1. January 26th, 2006, 04:28 PM #1
    GfXmAsTeR
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    I'm Saying...

    -VERSE 1-
    good girls love bad guys, well I'm the badest
    got these hoes addicted to the dick...I call em' dick addicts
    spit 16 bars each verse, everyone be perfected
    got ya mad b/c I'm takin' pictures of ya bitch butt ass naked
    I combine words................turnin' nouns into verbs
    you listenin' to me now..........my flow is superb
    everybody fallin' in love....me really i just wanna fuck
    I'll give ya bitch back spassims...that bitch tried her luck
    my words, they come out in a mutha fuckin' rhythmic pattern
    I'm in a benz and you still drivin' a fuckin' 98' saturn
    if god didn't give me this skill, then lucifer had to then
    smashin' ya'll with wise words, a peice of paper, and a pen
    with my uni-ball vision elite I am so complete
    you wanna compete, I'll make ya hood status decrease
    words comin out at least 100 miles per hour
    your head is to high, I'll bring ya buzz down like a cold shower

    -HOOK-
    listen I aint sayin' that I'm the best
    I'm just sayin' my lyrics'll have ya in a mess
    if I say something it's either true or about to happen'
    that's why I'm sayin' I'ma make a million off rappin'

    -VERSE 2-
    as I wonder why pussy niggaz hate me so much
    it's probly b/c I make they money disapear like a fat mans lunch
    I'll take you under my wing and teach you the basics
    I'll show you just how much they hate on a daily basis
    how this crazy worlds people can be big fuckin' hataz
    how 50 percent of this crazy worlds people are racist
    see nobody likes to admit they're numerous downfalls
    like how ya girl is forever constantly fuckin' suckin' me off
    yeah she's playin' you like a brand new XBox 360
    everytime you turn around her hands is down my dickies
    while you takin' about all the bricks you been flippin'
    ya bitches ass is what I'm grippin'....I aint kiddin'
    pussy......money.......and weed is my only drugs
    don't talk to me.....I aint got time for you fake ass thugs
    you keep openin' ya mouth but nothin' comes out
    shut ya wannabe ass up....suckin dick is tghe only thing you bout

    -HOOK-
    listen I aint sayin' that I'm the best
    I'm just sayin' my lyrics'll have ya in a mess
    if I say something it's either true or about to happen'
    that's why I'm sayin' I'ma make a million off rappin'

    -VERSE 3-
    man this be my third but lyrics can't re-emburse
    my lyrics can do alot....my words can hurt
    the vocabulary just keeps increasing but your looks balemic
    I see everything...hear everything...my route is scenic
    another 16 bars to get a mutha fuckin' new car
    ya lyrics is simular to golf, they both boreing and not up to par
    your on a level that's 100 percent wack as fuck
    you keep ongettin' by with shit but you runnin' outta luck
    if you scared why not admit it.....you would be better off
    I got connect with dirty cops...you get killed...evidence gets lost
    see ya little crew and ya girl iss all money hungry
    so when you fall off they gonna move on to the next dummy
    I'll be like taco bell and fuckin' spice up your night
    how the fuck you gon' come at me with a swiss army knife
    you keep gettin' mad cuz ya girl keeps suckin' my dick
    you suckin' it too everytime you kiss the freaky bitch

    -HOOK-
    listen I aint sayin' that I'm the best
    I'm just sayin' my lyrics'll have ya in a mess
    if I say something it's either true or about to happen'
    that's why I'm sayin' I'ma make a million off rappin'


    just wrote it today, let me know what you think

    -=MY 2 LINKS=-
    goodBYE -by: soberSEOULja
    here to entertain no one who cares - by: noncentz
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  2. January 26th, 2006, 08:25 PM #2
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  3. January 26th, 2006, 08:47 PM #3
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    not really feelin it, it seems like somthin p.diddy would write, and lets face it, he sucks, sorry homie, talkin bout fuckin otha cats bitches dont really fly by me, imma give it a 5/10...

    maby you should stick to gfx (not a diss, just a suggestion)


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  4. January 26th, 2006, 10:42 PM #4
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    well thanx for the feedback uppin for it
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  5. January 26th, 2006, 11:07 PM #5
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    Not feelin it, On some pop-culture type . .
    I was feelin that "Ya girl money hungry, etc fall off go to the next dummy" .

    Otha then that . jus keep at it .
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  6. January 27th, 2006, 02:31 PM #6
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    thanx for the feed uppin for more and if your gonna leave feed actually give feed no ^^^that shit thats annoying
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  7. January 27th, 2006, 05:27 PM #7
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    this was real dope
    i was feeling the vocab and the flow
    this was really one of the best OM ive read so far
    9/10
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  8. January 27th, 2006, 11:38 PM #8
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    thanx for the feed but its still shitty feed be more in depth
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  9. January 28th, 2006, 09:22 PM #9
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  10. January 28th, 2006, 09:32 PM #10
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    well....i have to say this was organized...with the hook label and each verse.....made it look more experienced..anywayz..this was pretty aight...the rhymes were good..same wit da multies..flow was good...structure was good..nice and even..this wasnt really my kind of liking but this one was pobably one of the top ones ....overall this was aight...keep elevating..peace-
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  11. January 29th, 2006, 03:07 PM #11
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    thanx for the feedback uppin for more
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  12. January 30th, 2006, 12:39 PM #12
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  13. January 30th, 2006, 12:56 PM #13
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    Aight, the structure was prolly the best part of the OM, however the topic you did was played, the flow kinda choppy, the rhymes were aight though.....expect to see a better OM on a better topic next time...stay up though
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  14. January 30th, 2006, 01:00 PM #14
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    it was ok not bad........not that good either.but ok. but u should stick 2 gfx. no hate. 7/10 holla!
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  15. January 30th, 2006, 02:51 PM #15
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    Quote Originally Posted by YungVik
    it was ok not bad........not that good either.but ok. but u should stick 2 gfx. no hate. 7/10 holla!
    yeah right this name is a alias dumbass peep the bottom of my sig I am LyricalyInclined the user not just a saying i am the 1 ande only LyricalyInclined
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