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    Like a whirlwind...

    aiite it might look very long but i think its worth it .. its a collab wit 8lives...

    snypah - in blue
    8lives - in blak



    She's been on my mind all day, and really I can't take it
    I don't think she really loves me, it's possible that she can fake it
    I've been having some weird dreams and she was the main person
    Last night was the worst of all, my birthday, it only was the worst one

    Bway don’t let shiit get 2 u fa real is it worth it
    All this love & care, on a real.. she don’t deserve it
    Dreams can tell lies dont go making accusations
    I’m feelin were u comin from, i know u losin patience


    It started off with my dad and mom throwing me a one in a lifetime event
    All the money they had was supposed to go to rent, and celebrate lent
    And then my girl comes into play, I see a hickie on her boob, that time was spent
    She was walkin with her friend pretending not to notice me, but to ignore me
    Pain and sorrow rushing though my heart, Now I could finally see

    Talk some sense into mami ask her whats her problem
    I mean really go in depth even if she say she got non
    She might think pain is pleasure wait her turn & she want non
    If ya gurl ent treatin ya right then u ent treatin her wrong
    I just hope she learn her lesson after this fuckin song


    That the whole time she has been playing me, It's blind to the eye
    I looked in her phone and i saw numbers of about five other guys
    No wonder why she always told me she would call me back later
    But the time she would take, is like riding a thousand level elevator

    Don’t say she be playin u, bway don’t jump conclusions
    U might say “i just no!” cah really that Can’t do hun
    If u really love her then true evidence is needed
    Most time relationships broken.. why? Cah they misleaded


    Some days I would call her and she would never return my voice mail
    She always been lying to me!! Saying that her pops was in jail
    But I knew it all along!!.....but why didn't her mom pay the bail
    She's been fucking other guys, sleeping around behind me back
    And when I finally found out, it was like I had a heart-attack

    Confront her & ask her why the fuck she lie bout her pops
    If u say she been sleepin & creepin had she been copped???
    No more lying, no more denyin, this is were it all stops
    Bway jus breathe right now & take things real steady
    Mami will holla at cha when she all good & feel ready


    My heart turned black and was now empty with all this hate!
    But maybe this was how it was supposed to be, maybe this was our fate!!!
    Six months later I receive a call from an unknown user
    It was my nigga frank, a.k.a. the child abuser

    Yo friend don’t be hatin ya gurl u should be hatin on love
    Cah love is the agony instead ya be hatin on her
    U say its fate, things can’t be that late, 2 start afresh
    Things can always be better no matter how bad the mess


    Mate told me that while he was in the hospital he saw my ex
    And he said she was having a baby, then I thought of our sex
    One night about 9months ago, we came home from the theater
    She rappidly ripped my clothes off, I thought she needed a heater

    See u father of a yute now u need 2 focus on a plan
    With all the shiit that’s gone on u can stil be her man
    Get ya implement straight & concentrate on tha kid
    Cah if u stil mad, in future u gon’ be sayin “i wish i did”


    There was no use for condoms at that time, what a decision
    She said she wanted my baby, I agreed, but review my revision
    Now its all clear to me....She did have my child
    My brain cells are going nuts!! It's driving me wild
    How could this be, Me having a baby with her
    Next thing I know...my vision ends to a blurr....

    The decision was quick! ya shudda think it & thought it
    Remorse it would have been if ya mami had aborted
    I just hope its all sorted, i hate 2 see a brother down
    Be sensible ‘bout it don’t conflict wit another row
    U gotta face those facts & maybe even face those fears
    Though u gota chase the stacks never place those tears
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    na that shit was deep....................Hot piece!!!!!!!!
    I damn near had tears rolling down my eyes on the last few lines....
    long but strong !! It flowed well & kept me interested throughtout..
    the topic was hot---and real ----
    It seams as though you've actually been through an event similar to the topic....
    overall good drop Laydee Snypah keep that hot shit coming----------------------

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    hey change i never wrote all jus in red... its a collab wit another kat on ere...
    but yeah he was lettin he's feelin's out, get me...
    but yeah thanx for tha feed............1
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    Aw I see now !!!!! (my Bad ) but that shit was hot!!!!!

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    lol its cool... i had 2 edit it cah i forgot 2 say its a collab... lol
    but its cool.... lol
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    don't be scared 2 leave feed.......lol
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    yo guys this was a deep emotional peice. it had imagery an feelins that ery one feels. i felt this peice cause somethin like this happened to me but ya'll did ya thang on this just keep at it. an peace out ma one love an could you guys check out my battle against zhi zhi wang. thanx
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    this my boo.......guess who it is

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    dude thats messed lol owell......

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    ^^^who???
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    hey big j thanx for tha feed aiite...
    upps.............
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    Damn that wuz hott and deap - topic and shit wuz all there - nce ass collab
    that shit wuz real - i felt it
    man keep doin the damn thing

    rtf and hit up this link
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    ay come on lets get some feed in here....and yo snypah.....we otta do this again sometime.......

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    soldier that wasn't feed^^^ *gets upset* lol
    hey its kool man... yep i'll check ya shiit out 2....1
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