Vision of Blind

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=277031


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=277236


Erotic scriptures so divine,now ingraved on the average mind
perpendicular lines,and rare conspitous finds,that actually rhymes
plus multiply how many times,the fact that the dimes,commit crimes
open your eyes and view the vision of the blind,one of a kind
Dark visions of the perspective of under contested,there for elected
multiple reasons why selected,the passion built up as if it was collected
then released,that leading to this soul being deceased
the spirit of this man evolves to lower and decrease
The Blind man see's the world a different way,convienced to say
that "I will see again on a different day",and in an instance slayed
hualted to a praise,then gave birth to children he was unable to raise
On his rocking chair thinking of thoughts,then so fourth on he walks
Then soon later he feels a sudden present of a type salt
running from his eyes,by standers amazed and suprised
concried,the blind man collides,with a jail bird who losts his pride
now it seems as if the eyes,of the blind man were open wide
he then catches his balance and walk,a woman steps to the side
He now see's vision is not the answer to being able to see
Oh have mercy on this blind man,for which he is me

[GrimmyReaps]

talk about multis,...damn y had a whole verse of them...it was good but it was kinda confusin because of all the constant multis...kind of a tougue twister...it was good tho dont get me wrong...it had a good story line and alot of vocab...overall a good peice of work...

8/10

[OPIE TAYLOR]

stupid

[+Glich+]

why?

[Strait|Flush]

im the multi king....and that was pretty good

7/10

[+Glich+]

w/e lol thanks for the feed

[Silas]

I wouldn't call you the multi prince

This was good, but sometimes the multi's killed it, lol. Cause i wasn't just feeling the multis and alot of vocabulary words, usually i would've pick one or the other. But this was good, somerhymes were forced but they still snuk it or squeezd in..I was feeling the vocabulary in this, and the name was decent...Peace.

[+Glich+]

thanks I did this off the dome I didn't have a topic so I made one up after I was done

[eyeQ]

Okay...lets face it guys..im the multi GOD. I do think this piece could have improved the multis a bit...but i was definitely impressed with the rest of the piece. OPIE whatever is obviously a donkey so dont listen to that clown. When i say the multis could have been better...i just mean like more syllable connections instead of rhyme blind line time divine type thing you know? Idk man check out camaracs writtens or some of my shit and ull see what im talkin about. stay up. one.

[Devils_Diamond]

I wouldn't call you the multi prince

str8 drop