16 lines no more no less
no crew, hate or d/r votes
no feeding or recycling
your verse is due by 5:00pm or if you need more time let me know
this is my check ill have verse up in an hour or so
lyrical menace
kronik-boom
16 lines no more no less
no crew, hate or d/r votes
no feeding or recycling
your verse is due by 5:00pm or if you need more time let me know
this is my check ill have verse up in an hour or so
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
A lyrical menace, your not even considered a threat,
you couldn't collect a win, if i owed you a debt.
your first battle is still in polls, your first drop on the net,
your rhymes are weak and childish, i can feel your regret.
homie you need to quit while you still have som respect, don't neglect,
my intellect,can wreck, an emcee's chance for survival in retrospect,
you should have never answered the call, as i recall, you don't rhyme at all,
this massacare ain't over yet i just scored twice and still have the ball!
you couldn't hit back, even if you prewrote your attack, it'd still be whack,
millitary skill you lack, couldn't bomb on me if you were bush and i was iraq!
I'll drop so ill on you, you'll need to run norton anti-virus when im finishest,
your chances for a victory diminish, add another victim to my win-list.
A dangerous plan, to come at me man,u should stick to battlin your hand,
im in demand, while your runnin in quick sand, quit now leave this land,
if hip hop were the car industry you'd be compact, im a luxury sedan,
kid, keep playin the background while i rule with a vicious command
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
checking in be back in 10mins
kronik-boom whats suppose to go boom the kronik?
dog stop rappin your 30 and still hooked on phonics
so go try to find a guy and jump up on it
bc thats the on way u reaching any peak
you couldn't never compete i'm the best on my streets
so come up on my block and i'll be bring the fuckin heat
so you losing to me in this battle is going to be tragic
dog watch out for your life i'll make it disappear like magic
keep fucking with me and all they'll fucking find is body fragments
blood and brains scattered all over the parking lot
so what you trying to be a fake ass poppa doc?
this isn't 8 mile i'll kill you with a smile
cause your punk ass is trying to take me to trail
dont u remember i justed cleaned up the fucking evidence
so why you tryin to cheat the polls like you were the fucking president
so fuck you bitch i just won this battle with my lyrical intellengence
Uppin For Votes#2
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
man nice drop so what u think about my drop?
uppin for votes lets go ppl
I cant vote cuz kronik is in my crew......but if could i would vote for him......He had a very nice flow and good structure.....His rhymesheme and wordplay was good and the only thing that coulda been betta was his punches......no hate to menaice you just need to elevate my nigga...good battle
yeah thanks jumpoff come on ppl uppin for votes
uppin #3 need some votes.....
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
Uppin #4 Once Again, Lets Get Them Votes
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
kronik definently took this one better flow and structure.....menace nice verse jus elevate pa and u'd be go0od
v/ kronik
scytsophrenia
Ima have to say kronik, hes where more to the point which was a big thing in this battle, he had personals, all of lyricals punchs could have been directed towards anyone, and kronik had a btter sturcter, Lyical you need to rhyme.... all the time...
vote kronik
Yo I Think Kronik Boom Gotz Diz Shit He Had Harder Punches N A Better Verse Overall N I Wuznt Really Fellin Lyrical Menace Dat Much.....\\v// Kronik Boom
Fuck this industry, bitch I'm in these streets.
uppin for votes let go ppl
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