Phamily Konnections Feat. Teflon~King

[Killa_King]

Here's my links first:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281957
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281953


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Phamily~Konnections
Intro:
Hey yo it's phamily konnections in this mothafucka
Killa_King holdin this shit down,

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Hook:x2
Phamily Konnections,We got them smith'n'wessons
Poppin off shots make you hoes learn a lesson
Ain't no stressin bout these tracks we blessin
While ya'll suckas in the streets keep on guessing
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Verse:1 Killa_King

I'm thinking bout clappin,You bitches want some action
Drawing out crowds,Like I'm the main attraction
The guage get poppin,The loot start stackin
Running from the one time blue lights flashin
The coke I be stashing,Pig's steadily cappin
People in they yards hollerin what the fuck happened
My heavy,Chevy smashin,Cars be crashin
Them Coppers in them choppers yelling Stop or we're blasting
I've had enough of this shit I ain't going back to jail
Will I get away free dawg,Only time will tell
But if I do I hope the judge cool enough ta set a bail
With hard times,hard rhymes,Hard decisions are hard to prevail
But I know this one thing dawg,That I cannot fail
Guess that's why I'm on this corner slangin this yeo
Victory is not but a step away
Let me make it home safely ta god I pray
Soon as I step in the door my baby mama all on my case
"Turn on the TV all I see is your fuckin face"
I'm leave these cowards stunned without a Fuckin trace
And like some brand new Ree's I'm leave 'em fully laced
You fuckin right I'm coming in first place,
Make no mistake,Cause last place is worst case
Peepin out the scenario,I ain't got time for no scary hoes
Cuzz you with me or against me either way that it go
You can't fuck with my money,or keep up with it's flow
You gonna need a set of ski's for my flock of snow
Put my pistol to ya temple and I'm snatchin that dope
Cuzz it's cuban neck ties when we slit ya throat
Lay 'em flat on his back listen to pussy Mothafucka choke
Man as time pass Losing all hope,You can't cope with reality
Now this shit set in time for a fatality
With that fuckin mac or that millimeter
Like American express never leave my house without heater
You can bet that,Pack an automatic strap
You can think it's a joke until you get ya wig peeled back

Hahahahaha told you phony ass frauds what time it is nicca.......
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Hook:x2
Phamily Konnections,We got them smith'n'wessons
Poppin off shots make you hoes learn a lesson
Ain't no stressin bout these tracks we blessin
While ya'll suckas in the streets keep on guessing
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Verse:2 Teflon~King


Invision my bullets as images leavin you dead
From overloadin these hollow point pictures inta ya head
It ain't a game,Drop ya controllers,We stay fed
Roll up inta ya crib an make ya whole click play dead
And just when this bullshit gets thick,we spray techs
The wind off my shells' will make ya face stretch like latex
We fill u fulla holes,then fill'em wit playtex
We,break necks It's ya time of the month,and you guessin who's next
You didn't want war,But you know you started this shit
You knew from the begining,I squeeze more heat than oven mitts
It ain't funny it's just a lil bit mothafuckin ironic
Bet I make you get a head change way faster than cronic
Broke nicca's dreams seem a tad demonic
You come home lookin for pussy,instead you find me on it
It's all done now,Broke an alone on these streets
And keep my name out ya grill unless you lookin for beef
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Drop ya links if you have any and we will return the favor 100

[Killa_King]

uppin this ishh once before I leave Would appreciate the feed back I'm still new any constructive criticism will help

[AngelHaze]

this was a nice song though i felt that both of you couldve came a bit more hardcore since youre speaking about killing yaknow overall the structure was nice wordplay metz and vocab were tight..... loved it truthfully if it had an audio i would probably blast it like its on deal yaknow.... go0od job ~!~

[Killa_King]

Uppin this shit once again appreciate the feedback will try to work on the strength a little but yeah thx shorty will return the favor 100

[Killa_King]

Man come on uppin for the third time don't sleep on this needs feedback will return the favor 100

[Plain-Thug]

pretty good i have to say..hook was pretty cool...verses were good..flow was as well
i was feelin both verse...they consisted of sum good rhymes...nice flow and a few multies here and there...overall this was a pretty nice read..keep it up both of you

fav. lines in each verse

verse 1

I'm thinking bout clappin,You bitches want some action
Drawing out crowds,Like I'm the main attraction
The guage get poppin,The loot start stackin
Running from the one time blue lights flashin
The coke I be stashing,Pig's steadily cappin
People in they yards hollerin what the fuck happened
My heavy,Chevy smashin,Cars be crashin
Them Coppers in them choppers yelling Stop or we're blasting
I've had enough of this shit I ain't going back to jail
Will I get away free dawg,Only time will tell
But if I do I hope the judge cool enough ta set a bail
With hard times,hard rhymes,Hard decisions are hard to prevail
But I know this one thing dawg,That I cannot fail

^those lines were sick..good rhymes and nice flow and excellent multies

verse 2

Invision my bullets as images leavin you dead
From overloadin these hollow point pictures inta ya head
It ain't a game,Drop ya controllers,We stay fed
Roll up inta ya crib an make ya whole click play dead
And just when this bullshit gets thick,we spray techs
The wind off my shells' will make ya face stretch like latex
We fill u fulla holes,then fill'em wit playtex
We,break necks It's ya time of the month,and you guessin who's next
You didn't want war,But you know you started this shit
You knew from the begining,I squeeze more heat than oven mitts
It ain't funny it's just a lil bit mothafuckin ironic
Bet I make you get a head change way faster than cronic
Broke nicca's dreams seem a tad demonic
You come home lookin for pussy,instead you find me on it

[Killa_King]

Thanx fo the feed much appreciated I'm glad I 've made some improvement would appreciate more feed all constructive criticism will be taken in and the favor will be returned

[teflon~king]

cool need feed

[Killa_King]

uppin one last time bfore I call it quits on this piece really could use some honest feed

[big j da fat boy]

yo you both came hard. you both had good wordplay an imagery. it flowed very well an it had me interested the whole time. you both did ya thang on this an hit me up if you wanna collab......... peace