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    a true nigga

    i writting suttin on a true nigga a nigga who leathel when his hand on that trigga.
    he down to ride wit his niggaz get money wit his niggaz i hope you like the statements... cause im philly'sgreatest.
    im down to eat wit my squad thats why on the beat we drop bomb's like the talliban.
    you can run hide or put the lead in yourself and slowly die.
    because i hate a snitch thats why the last rat got hit by a bannana clip
    we on the corner all night me in my man flipping e's like vanna white.
    if you mess wit are e's we leave yall niggas burning like an S.T.D dont look at me
    to help you out when you down cause when i was down you look at me in frown
    my flow flames thats why put i 23 in your back like lebron james. im stepping up my game.
    im rb's rookie of the year cause i aint never scared squad never blue always stay wit the red... bandana's
    im wit the games ben missing like santana im like muhhamed ali im the champ standing in my ground
    because you got to have some heart to live in my town remind you off some pac shit
    how i get around
    im a true nigga thats what the raps about and i ain't talkin but a grill when its a cap in your mouth.
    Wicked Wicked Wicked


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    hmmm... this was alright I guess. your flow was alright, but sometimes your lines seemed a little stretched. try writing to a beat, it will help alot.
    your rhymes were a little basic, and very generic. in other words, you were just saying things that everyone has heard a thousand times, and your rhyming words were too small and simple. try using more vocabulary on your actual rhyming words, it'll make them better. or you could try some multies.
    stay at it man

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    it was aight could have been better.... Sounds lik u were just rambling but just keep writing mayb u can get better..

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    this is fuir to me
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    iight but is understandable for a newbie on the site but its gone get closed anyway you dont have up ur 2 links

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    yea know ur good

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    Those aren't the right type of links you need. Leave good feedback on two people Open Mics, and post them.

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    yea its ightt keep spittin

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