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Last edited by D. Josey; August 8th, 2006 at 10:27 AM
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That was the first poem I have ever read. It was pretty nice I liked the emotion put into it @ the hate of yellow things. I don't know much more 'bout poetry so I can't say much more besides the fact that I enjoyed this. Very good keep writin.
...Keep It Trill...
Fucc what a nigga gotta say
Fucc what a cracca gotta say
Fucc what a bitch gotta say
Fucc what a tricc gotta say
Fucc what a pimp gotta say
Fucc what a player, AND a hater gotta say.
ok, well youre lucky im leaving feed, normally if people PM me with links i ignore them... well... where to start! the concept was ok, BUT i wasnt too sure about your layout, it made it awkward to follow in places, also it seemed a little on the long side for me to keep interest, saying that though im not one for poems normally, overall id say this was ok, nothing that stands out though... keep doing your thing bruv
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I like this. The imagery was great. I mostly Njoi'd the play in the scheme. The description was excellent. The way everything lined up was nice. I Njoi'd this myself.It was a great read.
This was overall Good.
Defiant Lyricist? Meh never heard of 'em you sure that was me?
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
Yeah, didn't you used to have a Kanye West avatar?
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