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Last edited by D. Josey; August 8th, 2006 at 10:22 AM
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I loved every single aspect about this excpet that stupid ass picture. Lol, it was so slap-stick casual that it kind of killed a very dope vibe that I was getting throughout. But ya, aside from that I really enjoyed this read, and you're really starting find yourself through your writing. Everything seems to be improving and gaining more confidence to me. The one thing that I feel is still kind of underdeveloped with you is your wording... Some of it reads very awkwardly and it feels like it need more punctuation for the reader to be able to get in a breath. But ya, very minor stuff to work on. Glad to see a solid new generation of writers to come and fill in for my fallen-off ass.
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
Thank you.
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this was really nice i liked your delivery/approached really unique and complex in ways...nice multies used and emoption...good!. i liked this read it caught my full attention. i see your really elevating real real fast
RTF on links in my sig if ya canEX...nice job man.
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Saving this post for feed, i didn't realise the time here Exact but when i get time soon i'll edit a good amount in here. Ask El Poeta what i mean by 'good amount' and you won't complain
Sorry, *saves post*
I'll PM you when i've done it.
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Meh.
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Dont over up your poems. It makes your look desperate for feedback.
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