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Thread: Elements - Po'Ethics, Feat. D.H.Brixton.

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    Elements - Po'Ethics, Feat. D.H.Brixton.

    Myself.
    Jekyll.
    D.H.Brixton.
    Myself.

    More of a cypher.. than anything!

    Elements.


    Ride the water body wave's breaks
    to electric shock boogie drop robotic
    internal movies non-stop atomics
    blooming cardboard box rock, astonished
    on watchers feet start moving to beat art
    while styles glide apart on heartbeats,
    frozen mannequins dance with cobra
    kings just as tut breaths in a broken wind...
    Frozen on cold heels bold toes take the lead
    on upright bicycles across a cold breeze
    as Jackson's circuitry warps and it's born...
    Back steppin' tickin' body ready effects
    along brief breaths formed back in 74'
    .

    Scuttling around in the dark again
    I’m like "Jack the Ripper with a fucking marker pen"
    It’s stark and then, I’m sparked again, and tripping out
    Let me explore every avenue, until the bars give out
    The narcs are out in force, but we’re not subdued
    When it’s time to move, it’s time to move
    We bomb the city, while the b-boys break their groove
    Graff writers stay in the shadows misunderstood
    .. and misconstrued
    We can shift the earth, and we can quake the mind
    It’s a sign of the times ..
    When we’re out in force on the train lines
    Style Wars! - We’re seismic in proportion with outlines
    Spontaneous like tremors, but with black book designs
    .

    Rotate to the burning temptress..
    ..watch a mass catch a fever; infectious.
    Bringing down the house like we were playing tetris,
    electric. I'm a vinyl eccentric with a libido for music,
    & I use it, don't abuse it, to start an infusion..
    its a natural illusion when I set fire to the floor.
    The crowd NEVER expire, they just perspire for more,
    aim higher for sure. Cuz I tore gravities law on its..
    backside till it sits.. now the DJ in a pod is a God, but
    I've set ablaze the crucifix, its a pile of useless shit..
    I'm a musical arsonist, an instrumental artist..
    You think spinning truth is the hardest?
    Try spinning ember when your days are the darkest.
    .

    The awe-tamed quake, audience takes shape
    in the audible silence, body of waves break;
    Stage shakes as simple minded symbol breaks
    ripple into sound waves while single sounds
    echo aloud, brave... Bass erases any doubt...
    This is it, this is lyricist now, standing out
    in shallow puddles damming down
    a tongue full of hollow self that's handing out
    free tickets to the every minute: now.
    My sweat and tears, years fears and deaths
    hold this paper boat afloat in my open sets.
    ArtificialIntelligence
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    Myself (V1): Your verse wwas a good read mainly due to the flow the rhymes meshed excellently and thus created that flow. The use of breackdansing terms shows that you put effort to atleast research your topic. The structure was agith though it could have been more even.

    Jeckyll: i liked the Jack the Ripper line, very creative and original. I liked your content however the flow change was notciable. Thye first person perspective was good and the way you tied your verse with the B-Boy ish showed that this topical has either been well thought out or you have had good communication with the rest of the writers. Once again i wasn't much fond of the structure but your verse, overall was good.

    Brixton:Your verse was quite good. I liked the flow and the magery used in parts. The comparisons you used worked well in this and so did the wording of your lines. Structure was aight nothin exemplry, i liked the vocab and overall i reckon this was a very well written verse specially the ending....was the You think spinning truth is the hardest?....was that a dig at the truth...e.g. spinning truth/making truth....maybe it's just me idk.

    Myself (V.2): This was a more usual style than the previous verse. I liked the imagery and the slight abstract elemnts used, enjoyable. Structure was aight and flow was aight too. i just felt the symbol line was awkard...was it missing an extra S or somthin'...idk, Overall, it was a good verse.
    After reading all of your verses i reckon you did this topic justice and made it realistic without the Ganksta language.
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    If possible can you check this topical battle, Me Vs Ace of Aces and lay down a HONEST and EXPLAINED vote as the battle is getting slept on:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300854

    If you cannot vote on the battle then can you check out my latest om, "The Public Execution"
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=301805
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
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    This was an awesome piece. I thought this was bound to be some boring piece about trees, water, fire, air and such, but I loved the imagery and descriptions of Grafitti, Breaking, DJ'ing, and emceeing and how you all fit it together with the vocabulary, and just the higher level of writing all of you brought to the table.

    Balance was not an issue in this, and you all were on the same level, and I can tell the amount of communication you all had for this, and I just liked it all the way through, you never disappointed. Nice.

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    That waz tight, the 1 who had the CD player or w/e it waz, the third 1 I think, that waz great, all of it waz together period tho.

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    Lol, thanks.. back up.
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    Bump...
    po'ethics /
    abstanticollective.

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    Haha loving this piece. flow was amazing throughout. the only time it was a lil choppy was in the middle of the first verse. but other then that it was amazing and had great voice all the way through. and the topic was dope as fuck, very creative. dope shit fellas, keep up the good work.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302409

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    this was hella dope. i was feelin it
    nice shit man eveyr verse was dope
    nice multis nice metas everything was nice

    good shit

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