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    this rap is a lil better (it short)

    yo i sit in my room
    do nothing
    but play with my broom
    my life is so boring
    all i do is eat salami
    cause its my favorite food
    aight dood?
    i like to mack mad chickens
    fuck them
    fuck chicken licken
    you eat the cock
    im so jacked
    my arms are like a rock
    no i do not have rabies
    but i like to make babies
    and i rape homeless people
    i liek dogs i like beagles
    my wife is a seagul...and shes fine
    good thing she mine dawg.


    what do you guys think, im a beginner so i need advice

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    wow... umm.. how can i say this without making you cry...

    read some LLL battles or some dope topicals and then come back...

    i really hope for your sake that this is a joke...

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    i second what step said plus i hope ur name is a part of that joke

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    ROFL i didnt even notice his name was white50cent :P

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    just keep trying and hero worship is bad like...specially 50 cent...he was good not no more....Just read a couple of oms and stuff and start buliding up an idea of how to go about things. Also pick a topic and use worldy issues subtly to tie sub-topics into your topic. Overall, you have work to do so carry on striving...Stay up.
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    this is just not a open mic you gotta have flow or some its like 4 words a line

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    Quote Originally Posted by theXwhite50centX
    yo i sit in my room
    do nothing
    but play with my broom
    my life is so boring

    Rotfl..


    Very sad.

    Change your name as well.
    Last edited by kid sick.; August 3rd, 2006 at 03:06 PM

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    WTF?

    LMFAOROTFL....

    OH HELL NO...

    Not only was this lame, but it sucked too.

    Your a complete joke, from your name to the verse you just wrote.

    100% WACK!

    Check out the OM's in the HOF, and then try again some other time, cuz as it stands now, I wouldn't ever read shit else you dropped honestly.

    This was horrible, elevate and then come back.
    Last edited by Es.Choir; August 3rd, 2006 at 03:41 PM


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