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    Aint it Right? (feat. The Verbalist)

    just a little collabo we did..


    The Verbalist

    Aint it right to vote left wing on warfare petitions?...
    Define a war on oil as targeting terrorism....
    In a system based on secrecy, we caught in the dark....
    Fed lies and indecency by government sharks...
    Aint it right to raise interest rates and federal taxes...
    To lengthen our troops station while they under the axes...
    Axis powers meet for hours, then give ten minute briefs...
    And touch on subjects like peace, hold the rest from release...
    Aint it right to sit idley by, and say nothin...
    Say something, or don't complain about the function...
    Silence in conjunction with an inactive mind...
    Is stagnation, it seems as though that's how we're defined...
    In this nation, plans of action so poorly timed...
    And poor placement, in roles of the leadership kind...
    Has caused hatred.....and war is the sign of the time...
    Got me pacing.....but that's life huh.....aint it right?....

    David Lama

    how many times do I have to see the same shit twice
    I call it whack..,u use it again & expect me to call that lame shit nice?
    aint it right?..,
    I mean if your gonna say something say it right
    its like ya wanna hear whack..,or you’d be ashamed its tight
    this aint just a hobby..,letting go of some pain is nice
    cuz to most of you this net stuff aint a dumb game, its life
    and ya need to be creative..,unoriginality has slain this site
    its like ya all a bunch of aliases and the same kid bites
    aint it right?..,
    I feel like the only straight head left, & I’m not saying being gay is right
    but before posting like ya..,I’d have a orgy with fags till AIDS is mine
    ya getting played this time through what I’ll say with rhymes
    this net shit got ya acting like slacking with grades is fine
    face the facts..,stop acting like you didn’t get raped this time
    or the I’m white and on the net so I can say nigga ways is right
    I had to write this..,cause I really cant take this guys
    its hard to get down to the point when everyone lets fakeness rise
    really though
    ..,,aint it right?
    UA

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    yo this was an aiight collab i wasn't feeling your verse that much it lacked imagery and better figurative language and the vocab was meh but overall this was an str8 pieace. I liked the first verse and some parts of the second verse I loved how you flowed with the topic that y'all choosed good topic.you stayed on topic and wasn't afraid to touch certain points. well like I said nice collab and I'll appreciate it if you ca leave some feed on atleast one of my Om's and PS's It'll be well appreciated.

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