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You'll never be the best warganic, i'm sorry but dude it's true..Originally Posted by $pitacular
..^ Got killed by a fake hensley, imagine what the real one would do to you
Slut, your tricks been around the block.. & that statement is bolder,
I'd collar my bitch, but she can't even brush the dirt off my shoulders
Money, Power, Respect.. everyone wants to be the very king,
That's what LEADS us to war... cos he'll never be 1st in anything!
You admire the legends, biting dude's name.. you're still in the closet,
Who's line is it anyway? isn't just a show..
.....It's also what I'm asking myself when i saw you flip that concept
I spit the truth dude, while ya say your ill & that ya mingle with a ton of hoes,
As a matter of FACT << every verse i read from u lacked a single one of those
Alotta corruption in the world nowadays, but here.. this shit got worse,
Last weeks votes needed more than a fucking bribe to FIX your verse
Dude ain't even got no game at all, this faggot can't even play the role right,
I'm known to cut on a dime.. while you been fuckin fat girls your whole life..
Why am i even battling you? you're a head we never quote..
I know i'm being mean..
But yo, MY BAD- is doper than the best verse you've ever wrote
bump to make sure you see this.
Well its seems as tho we got another no-show
so ill just break down ur verse quick aeral.
You'll never be the best warganic, i'm sorry but dude it's true..
..^ Got killed by a fake hensley, imagine what the real one would do to you
^^lmao nice
Slut, your tricks been around the block.. & that statement is bolder,
I'd collar my bitch, but she can't even brush the dirt off my shoulders
^^ok..it could of been reall good if it was directed at him more.
Money, Power, Respect.. everyone wants to be the very king,
That's what LEADS us to war... cos he'll never be 1st in anything!
^^haha..nice nameplay.
You admire the legends, biting dude's name.. you're still in the closet,
Who's line is it anyway? isn't just a show..
.....It's also what I'm asking myself when i saw you flip that concept
^^seems so simply thought..but ive never heard it..so nice
I spit the truth dude, while ya say your ill & that ya mingle with a ton of hoes,
As a matter of FACT << every verse i read from u lacked a single one of those
^^haha lol..
Alotta corruption in the world nowadays, but here.. this shit got worse,
Last weeks votes needed more than a fucking bribe to FIX your verse
^^not bad
Dude ain't even got no game at all, this faggot can't even play the role right,
I'm known to cut on a dime.. while you been fuckin fat girls your whole life..
^^lmao..
Why am i even battling you? you're a head we never quote..
I know i'm being mean..
But yo, MY BAD- is doper than the best verse you've ever wrote
^^kinda used concept..but turnd out nice.
overall/ you really got me laughing throughout most of ur verse..which i enjoyd..and seeing that he did not show...it was something that got me a good laugh...(which was well needed..after some of the verses ive voted on n stuff.)
good stuff..hopefully you can keep that up..when week 1 rolls around.
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thanks for the feed ^
& WTF at 2 no shows. thats fucken wack
These were good...
lol @ the whose line is it anyway concept...
I used the same thing for Attack of the Clones
but word... not bad
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Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
J.Hens. WINS
Abstract LOSES
You'll never be the best warganic, i'm sorry but dude it's true..
..^ Got killed by a fake hensley, imagine what the real one would do to you
reasonable, simple though
Slut, your tricks been around the block.. & that statement is bolder,
I'd collar my bitch, but she can't even brush the dirt off my shoulders
ok concept, wording a bit off
Money, Power, Respect.. everyone wants to be the very king,
That's what LEADS us to war... cos he'll never be 1st in anything!
eh
Quote:
Originally Posted by Warganic
thats dumb fool, when i spit you'l get whipped good
cuz if your origins illness.. then I guess you got aids too
You admire the legends, biting dude's name.. you're still in the closet,
Who's line is it anyway? isn't just a show..
.....It's also what I'm asking myself when i saw you flip that concept
nah
I spit the truth dude, while ya say your ill & that ya mingle with a ton of hoes,
As a matter of FACT << every verse i read from u lacked a single one of those
not bad
Alotta corruption in the world nowadays, but here.. this shit got worse,
Last weeks votes needed more than a fucking bribe to FIX your verse
decent
Dude ain't even got no game at all, this faggot can't even play the role right,
I'm known to cut on a dime.. while you been fuckin fat girls your whole life..
eh
Why am i even battling you? you're a head we never quote..
I know i'm being mean..
But yo, MY BAD- is doper than the best verse you've ever wrote
decent again
Not a bad verse overall, some wording issues but most of the concepts were pretty decent. Keep it up.
You'll never be the best warganic, i'm sorry but dude it's true..
..^ Got killed by a fake hensley, imagine what the real one would do to you
^Not harsh,but decent opener.
Slut, your tricks been around the block.. & that statement is bolder,
I'd collar my bitch, but she can't even brush the dirt off my shoulders
I like the wordplay..but brush the dirt off my shoulder part was meh.
Money, Power, Respect.. everyone wants to be the very king,
That's what LEADS us to war... cos he'll never be 1st in anything!
^Pretty good.I liked it..just the 'very king' part..blah.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Warganic
thats dumb fool, when i spit you'l get whipped good
cuz if your origins illness.. then I guess you got aids too
You admire the legends, biting dude's name.. you're still in the closet,
Who's line is it anyway? isn't just a show..
.....It's also what I'm asking myself when i saw you flip that concept
^Didnt like this..juss really stretched...an got boring after draggin it out so long.
I spit the truth dude, while ya say your ill & that ya mingle with a ton of hoes,
As a matter of FACT << every verse i read from u lacked a single one of those
^Good.
Alotta corruption in the world nowadays, but here.. this shit got worse,
Last weeks votes needed more than a fucking bribe to FIX your verse
^Good.
Dude ain't even got no game at all, this faggot can't even play the role right,
I'm known to cut on a dime.. while you been fuckin fat girls your whole life..
^The cliche' is 'Stop on a dime'...didnt like this rather that much.
Why am i even battling you? you're a head we never quote..
I know i'm being mean..
But yo, MY BAD- is doper than the best verse you've ever wrote
^Nice..lol...
overall/-very good show.had maybe a couple lines I couldnt quite grasp..or like..but overall..good drop.I never seen your work or text battles...but this was a nice read.
v/-Rezen...lmao.
really.wouldve been a entertaining battle to read..if he'd show'd up.
thanks for the feed peeps.
and "cut on a dime" is a football reference.. meaning the running back can switch directions real fast.
lol...didnt know.pretty good..but you shouldve used that in the set up..my bad..but still I gave you props still..nice drop.homey.
yeah thanks man.
i thought the "no game at all" part would set it up well for both football and the fucking fat girls part. but its all cool.
and i just voted on everybodies battle. that left feed.
not a bad verse. use more multies. and dont use dime lines, no matter what the flip on the concept is. just dont.
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