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Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Last edited by Marvelous_; August 25th, 2006 at 11:36 PM
lets do the lowest 12 lines?
10.
bitch, ur frontin' like your nice.. but ur not, so dont speak..
you ain't the best, you ain't even the best com in the whole league..
son, this ain't no phony shit.. ill send ur ass right to heaven..
this is real, im beating you LIVE.. you could call me nba 2k7..
man ur whole flow is so unpleasant, i should do u up like ether..
we all laboured reading your verses.. n it wasnt hard either..
this is a league you can't make.. u'll witness a lyrically raid..
and it hasn't been ten years.. but i'm leaving his verse decayed..
kid your a nerd.. fucking geek, n dont try makin an argument..
so if i say u're so rad.. i wouldn't take it as a compliment..
pz.
Respect dude?Plz man im not rude,But seriously who checks in your crew?
Their the Chosen Few..of faggots who was desprete enuff to except you..
Give two shits..realize you will lie in shit..Dont know nothing about fuck...
I admit ppl tell me to pick up the paste...And glue your fuckin mouth shut..
Have you on the wall..honestly im not trying...Your tempted to flee
We heard about adequit.
And hopefully after this you'll drop a at-a-quits..end message and leave
Im going for the kill.You bore fool..Chosen few?Son quit bizz..
And Stop makin a episode man...ur ratings is low enough as it is...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297487
Cut your wrist...Bitch your a waste..When its a DQ...You pose to care.
Ill join that crew any day of the week...
.................but shit..its been about two since anybody posted there
eh 10 =\
eh 10 =\
voteeee..
Give two shits..realize you will lie in shit..Dont know nothing about fuck...
I admit ppl tell me to pick up the paste...And glue your fuckin mouth shut..
Vs
man ur whole flow is so unpleasant, i should do u up like ether..
we all laboured reading your verses.. n it wasnt hard either..
bitch, ur frontin' like your nice.. but ur not, so dont speak..
you ain't the best, you ain't even the best com in the whole league..
^im not sure if this is a little played of not
meh i didnt really like much from this battle both came quite weak comrad your verse wasnt that good your wording was ok but your concepts were a little weak and WTF man your conceots were a little weak aswell your wording was better.
V.WTF
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
very one sided battle imo WTF man came consistant with an average verse i just wasnt feeling the 2k7 line as much as for the rest looks like you didnt try as hard comrad had played concepts and poorly worded punches the paste line was okay but overal not a good verse
vote....wtf man
vote WTF
This seemed kinda of one sided to me, that Wtf, came consistant throught the whole verse, nothing to amazing but good punchs all the way through, Comrad came pretty off and on, like a decent punch about how his low rateing is, then dissing him for a inactive crew? like im saying i dont think comrad came hard enough... at all
When I was 10 I was a hip hoppin shorty wop,
known for rockin microphones n twistin off a 40 top.
bitch, ur frontin' like your nice.. but ur not, so dont speak..
you ain't the best, you ain't even the best com in the whole league..
^^ok..could of been word'd a lil differently.
son, this ain't no phony shit.. ill send ur ass right to heaven..
this is real, im beating you LIVE.. you could call me nba 2k7..
^^ok ..meh
man ur whole flow is so unpleasant, i should do u up like ether..
we all laboured reading your verses.. n it wasnt hard either..
^^ok
this is a league you can't make.. u'll witness a lyrically raid..
and it hasn't been ten years.. but i'm leaving his verse decayed..
^^ok wdplay
kid your a nerd.. fucking geek, n dont try makin an argument..
so if i say u're so rad.. i wouldn't take it as a compliment..
^^ok
vs
Respect dude?Plz man im not rude,But seriously who checks in your crew?
Their the Chosen Few..of faggots who was desprete enuff to except you..
^^good pllay on crew
Give two shits..realize you will lie in shit..Dont know nothing about fuck...
I admit ppl tell me to pick up the paste...And glue your fuckin mouth shut..
^^ok
Have you on the wall..honestly im not trying...Your tempted to flee
We heard about adequit.
And hopefully after this you'll drop a at-a-quits..end message and leave
^^ok
Im going for the kill.You bore fool..Chosen few?Son quit bizz..
And Stop makin a episode man...ur ratings is low enough as it is...
^^would of been better w/o 1 line
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297487
Cut your wrist...Bitch your a waste..When its a DQ...You pose to care.
Ill join that crew any day of the week...
.................but shit..its been about two since anybody posted there
^^okl...but indirect.
overall/ wtf man you were consistant wiht ur punches, but you had nothing that rlly wow'd me...kinda ok ya verse.... comrad you had some ok things aswell, seemd a lil generalized in some lines...and rlly could of been more direct.
vote/ imo its NOT 1 sided..i think it wasnt that great of an overall battle........WTF MAN
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v/wtf man
his verse wasn't particularly dope or anything but i think he got this by a fair distance. com and decade were the best bars, although i thought your closer was awful lol. sorry. comrad your verse was a bit weird, your wording was off and it hurt you. the paste bar was forced, cos it should have read pace. no one says pick up the paced. also your shots at his crew just didn't work right man, wording hurt the first one and the second just wasn't a great diss. work on wording and the directness of your punches and you should be fine.
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