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Thread: Last Dedications pt.II

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    Last Dedications pt.II

    People and Roles

    When the depressor gets to your head get a Komic Relief
    Smoke the leaf cause in Poetic its Justus, so fuck a beef
    Get Datboip to ring up the Vortex, then multies will fly
    Bloodz supporting the red dye now he’ll Verbally fry
    Anyone messing gotta meet the Verbal Insanity flow
    Poetically speaking you gotta let the Exact rhythm go
    Don’t talk about guns or the GrimReapa might appear
    Steer clear when Dat’s got his sarcastic flair near
    We don't need Jehovah, Witness will get to ya head
    A bit like Scratch, Sniffing the dread's weed spread

    Change the track let’s get DJ to replace the play list
    Phait giving me my first topical loss but I ain’t pissed
    Pissed at lies but I’m a lawyer so I’ll back the Client
    Clients defiant so he flows on the Omega wave reliant
    See i remember Thomas as well, call me nostradamus so i can predict
    That the future HOF's will include new kids who'll get easily picked
    But then I wouldn’t be here without the constructive talk
    With Evingale, Vortex & Bounce flaring eyes of a Hawk
    But a toast to DYL the real Soul Shocker on the evolution
    That’s Imminent, shout out to my homeboy revolution
    Confusions at name changes so don’t fret if I miss you out
    It’s about to end but then again I still gotta give Supanat a shout

    Isis bringing it dope with an MC whose Mystique like Whoa
    Also there Mal now Metaphive waging against a kid or another ho
    Let’s not shout out his name ‘cause this is all about homies
    Fuck the phonies haters come in dozens so fuck them cronies
    Ayo I remember the 2 AOD’s as well as the Laydee Snypah
    Shit I remember when Ghostflow made noob’s wet there diapers
    Then I had Inst1gator he a real old dude man remember the shit
    The only Witness was the one who saw Da King’s punch Blitz

    You ever saw the Black Ninjah, It a Kaotic Theory
    Fuck Smog, where the fuck MCBIGL, man he's lost like lost queries
    Ayo, remember E.Z. Eddie his hat got too big for him
    Tell me why the fucks Killamami fronting like Lil Kim
    Lil Homie Cliff getting Educated on the Topical scene
    Rhymescheme, Diamond Mind where the fuck they been
    Ayo, this dope cause I’m playing Xtreme Malice’s beat G
    Simply I bring Ta2 to get more Chedda Cheese quick-aly
    Also a hout out to Tim for the reasons he leading the next level
    Now let's go back & create another Sig for Lex, this time emboss & Bevel
    Why you get happy, understand you don’t want to meet Mista Grim
    Fuck where you been understand that the future for me maybe creatively dim
    Now i paint abstract words a bit like contradicting Myself in words
    I remember old homies giving props on me talking bout the Demonic Curds
    Ayo I get the shit 1Up and mourn the death of Aghzbackward
    Get Tryupmh and lace up 20 colabs dog what y’all heard

    This wasn’t meant to be a dope ass om or anything like that, just a long ass read with shout out’s to various heads, I most likely have missed out a lot of heads whilst writing this and if I have don’t mind it just flow along cause I’m cool with y’all na mean.
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    Not much of a practical OM, so I'll leave a couple of comments.

    Nice intergration with the names and wordplay, sooooooooooo. . . just a knockaround sort of thing.

    Clever.

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    Yeah it's just a name dropper na mean.

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    I know, Exactly what you mean.

    LMAO.

    Nice picture.

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    Thanks lol...

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    Nice way to incorporate people's names and make sense, lol @ "Time to make LeX another sig"..
    not really easy to feed on, just thought it had a nice touch on it.

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    Lol...i know.

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    Lol very very clever idea.You have to be one of the best writers on here and you always have my respect.Clever piece
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....

    But how you fall doesn't matter
    Its how you land

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    I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kid Blitz
    I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...
    seriously? WTF are you talking about?

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    Paka Paka Paka.... Whats up homie. This is Tryumph. PM me when ya can. Ive been locked up since december 1st of last year but im in a halfway house now. i spent the last 8 month on nothing but my raps and freestyles. We need to hook up again.
    Nice OM and thanks for the shout out. One.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kid Blitz
    I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...

    I appreciate that, but the first part to last dedications was written a long LONG time ago and i doubt you could have read it.
    Also, thanks to all the other comments.

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    lol gd way to remind th older users about th ppl hu jus disappeared...like me but im back now

    this is a hard piece to leave feed on really, as its jus several shout outs linked together
    i flow is consistent, and i can feel a sorta thankful feel to th piece
    i liked this, put the title suggests ur leaving (i think) plz dnt leave lol
    keep up, ill luk out for more of ur stuff since im back now

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    Thanks for the comments....unfortunantly i will have to leave soon na mean.

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