Sacred Scriptures 2006/07: Week 4.
Tik. Vs. Atticus.
YOU CHOOSE YOUR OPPONENTS TOPIC.
Check In Early to Confirm You Will Show.
Verses Due: Sunday 29th October, 11:59PM (Both Sides Of The Pond)
Voting Ends: Wednesday 1st November. (When New Battles Are Made)
TOPICS.(This is a link)
Choose as many topics as you wish.
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Good luck, don't drop late, & make this dope.
Last edited by fastforwords; October 26th, 2006 at 10:28 AM
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po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
1960-1977
In 1976 several of the same engineers who had designed the Atari VCS were already laying out plans for a new set of chips with so much power and abilities for graphics and sounds that Atari's next game console would far overshadow its first creation, the VCS.
Player 1: 3 Lives
Round 1: Pong
Score: 500
between bars of candicane - paddles passing stars
balance these late majestries -blip- saddle bashing arms
between Viet.conflict and scars - whittled by charm,
...................... sickles hammers and battle arms.
sorry's in the -blip- boarded closet, we're whored by Mcarthy.
board games to war play on play dates for foreplay -
importing tv's to Kennedy's, resting in Atari scores saved.
X X X X X X X
-100
Player 1: 2 Lives
Round 1: Pong
Score: 400
we'll kick -blip- cannon balls with a sable sanded boys limbs;
napalm Niagara fall-outs along a single handed joy stick. + 200
between a rock and a grid blip we've got a lot to compete with;
beeps in a data stream bread limbs in a weathered sequence.
scene destruction is -blip- on the breach of reconstruction,
graphic custom in the peoples eyes of vietna-geo-sumption;
our country rest solely on -blip- cartridge tongue holes,
and hours of pong: in technology we march, a carpal tunnel.
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Player 1: 2 Lives
Round 2: Tank
Score: 600
The fields been leveled up again - level 2 yields republicans
as steel tanks take the maze of semi-full metal subsiquence.
artificial incognito - NATO digital tape starts to mark the fiscal
in hearts of tech elite ... enemy in sight start the lists roll:
enlist all able hands and greater fingers, play war little gamers -
wined the maze in brazen time, sifting multi-mines to single craters.
X X X X X X X
-100
Player 1: 2 Lives
Round 2: Tank
Score: 500
passing musket fat packs for chattering red tap pads;
bayonets replaced by ravonettes along a generals last pass. +200
techno-anti seldom, as radio control fancies well-done
under napalm handy upper hand and we hum their antebellum.
the toggle wobbles across the wheat grass valley reach
reaching civilian city street ways and wayward alley sheep.
killing on synthetic latex with prosthetic pace legs tilling,
we walked before they learned to crawl away with haydays willing.
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Player 1: 2 Lives
Final Round: Pacman
Score: 700
kicking rocks across a broken hot box, hope it's dead.
i hope this top wont blow across my open head. -400
with a joystick bound in each little boys grip we comb vietnow
with remote controlled trolls, sweeping city coves we prowl
skipping TNT and bleeding stones, a rebel ghost moves in ...
searching trebled homes through thin settled scopes of tin - -200
i need an outpost! screams the yellow bellied sweep,
the rebels are gaining speed he needs a fellow allied team! -100
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GAME OVER!
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
At the white house waits pacing crews
With late breaking news, of a state faking truth
The nation’s breaking truce, and testin weapons
you're restings endin', as Bush teaches a lesson
on what happens to fools when they keep steppin'
At the white house bush stands proudEmcee Dubya in da WHITE hizzouse.
Fuck this DJ, I demand you to cease and desist
Cause how can WMD’s front – they don’t even exist.
You’re shit’s wack, Iraq?! You wont see a bush defeat
Cause I stepped up to this DJ and couldn’t feel the beat
I fucked Afghanistan & iraq, now North Korea tag’s along?
Get the fuck outta here kids, cause bush is droppin’ bombs!
For a roaring crowd, after his mushroom cloud
As DJ steps up it’s his turn now, he gets his instruction
but still nothing, DJ’s gonna choke – then he thinks of somethin’
As the DJ’s turn to drop the mic the crowd erupts,Check Check, It’s the DJ of Mass Destruction, yall..
Fuck America! Big shots? Well you can’t demean facts, kid
And I’m rippin’ off Bush like givin’ bikini waxes!
And fuck Condelizza I’ll leave her scared with amazin’ hits
Cause I’m eatin’ up Rice like hungry Asian kids!
And what to say about Dick, other then the fags a mistake
& no need to slay yankies when they shoot themselves in the face!
DJ’s of Mass Destruction exist, kid, we’re just not mainstream bound,
I mean, you must of heard by now, North Korea drops bombs underground!
The world’s corrupt, and Bush has heard enough,
His word is tough, he steps out and draws a gun
The crowds starts to run, but it’s just begun
DJs MD has not time to react, the bullets to fast
As they come flying past, he feels the last blast
And with final thoughts, he hears bush state the plot
his brain's rot when he hears "war's what they got"!
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both tried going creative. Atticus' was better. I really liked it, never seen something like it. The use of outside pictures was cheating a bit (maybe?) but it was cool. I mean, it flowed surprisingly well in its own way, it didn't really read like a typical topical though. Sicks, yours was technically good, flowwise and stuff, but I wasnt really feeling your take.
/v Atticus. Pretty rad shit.
up over no-shows.
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yeah decent verse phrantic f'sho.topic could of been a little more explicit tho i reckon coz nothing really jumped out and hit me as unique.
atticus..outstanding creativity and relentlessly tight rythm n flow.........f'sho
crisp vocab tecnique......... the whole approach to the concept was totaly craclers
so vote atticus.
for more crativity and originalty witht the concept
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Vote -Atticus
That shit was dope lol. Can`t say nuthin` else about it. Original as hell. And I dug it. Tik had a nice drop on his topic. Nicely written verse. But I gotta go with Atticus on this based on the creativity alone. Dope shit man.
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V/Atticus
I can see Phrantik getting back in to the swing of things every week, and this week he came with a very nice peice, and had he been up against someone else, he may have won. But Atticus is one of my favourite writers on the site, and his shit was simply dope as fuck, so original and interesting, too bad he signed out. Anyway dope battle guys. props to both.
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Gotta give it to atticus, here, that was probably my favorite verse of this week. And yea, Phrantik you got stuck in the wrong battle here, atticus turned that goofy picture into a hell of a good concept and just went with it, plus the way he rhymed it was pretty close to flawless. He had a storyline, it tied into his topic extremely well, and the rhymes were creative and non-stop.
v/ Atticus NICE job, it was really fun to read
A.I.
"She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."
yeah these where both good original ideas.... i just thoguht the way atticus blended his topic was fantastic... video games with real wars... its just worked so well.. and i dunno his verse was just flawless in many aspects and just was more enjoyable to read... tik you did well and would have taken a few other heads or maybe atti on an off day... but i just thought he came out on top here...
Vote - Atti.
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