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T. Wizzle
yung ghost
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The fuck ever.
Chess.
you dope, so i better come nice? yea rite i`ll kick ur ass first
Cuz last time Ghost was nice - i was 8 still watching casper
Sir, u make hits, but when i hit you, u`ll be laying on the tile
Cuz Yung Joc - EVERYSINGLE one of rb`s dope heads` style
How much wood could a wood chuck chuck, a riddle hard 2 beat
But i Wood Chuck - Ghost of a building, if i saw him in the street
Blah
Blah
Its an ever lasting chain, L, L, L, but after this your loses are big
Cuz your the fuckin` weakest link - who cant put one in his sig
8 Minute Key?
Lmfao,
Bye.
fuck the wizzles....there crew,someone should bann it
ima expose u lil fags like justin did janet
he's just askin 2 get beat....his sig says "set it"
we all know ya verse is gonna be wack,they voted for me before they read it!
when i cock back that iron im aimin at ya head
the wizzle crew
^^ is a gay pride thread!
my punches gonna blow out ya chest....i hope ya vests tight
let me break down the wizzles
J for jackass...G for gay....and last but not least T for transvestite!
Ok,
Um...
Yea Good Verse I Guess.
Up #1.
And...
Up #2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322764
^^ Good one
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yung ghost
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fuck the wizzles....there crew,someone should bann it
ima expose u lil fags like justin did janet
Nope, not good
he's just askin 2 get beat....his sig says "set it"
we all know ya verse is gonna be wack,they voted for me before they read it!
In this context, 'read' and 'set' dont even rhyme. Plus, this aint true
when i cock back that iron im aimin at ya head
the wizzle crew
^^ is a gay pride thread!
Poor example of using arrows. The line is WAY too short, and the arrows aren't even necessary
my punches gonna blow out ya chest....i hope ya vests tight
let me break down the wizzles
J for jackass...G for gay....and last but not least T for transvestite!
Pretty stretched, blah concept...
Overall, this was a Noob Verse. Wasn't even 10 lines! It doesn't seem like you have seen a good verse at all. If you can't come up with good concepts on your own, go read some LLL, and try to set up your verses similar to that. Or, better yet, read my battle at the top of this post. 2/10
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T. Wizzle
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you dope, so i better come nice? yea rite i`ll kick ur ass first
Cuz last time Ghost was nice - i was 8 still watching casper
funny bar... this battle is over
Sir, u make hits, but when i hit you, u`ll be laying on the tile
Cuz Yung Joc - EVERYSINGLE one of rb`s dope heads` style
weak, but good wordplay
How much wood could a wood chuck chuck, a riddle hard 2 beat
But i Wood Chuck - Ghost of a building, if i saw him in the street
Nice set-up, so-so punch...
Its an ever lasting chain, L, L, L, but after this your loses are big
Cuz your the fuckin` weakest link - who cant put one in his sig
Um.. so-so
Not much to say. No effort really in this verse, yet more than enough to win against a noob. It was overkill after the 2nd bar. 5/10
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VOTE: T. Wizzle
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*Insert Sig Here*
ight...droped weak....but...uppin
Up 3 Dickheads
wizzle took this with his very first line, yung work on your punches man, try to be a lil more clever. Not hatin, just the truth.
If ya'll could vote on mine, id appreciate it. . .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=323053
one.
Truth.
Sir, u make hits, but when i hit you, u`ll be laying on the tile
Cuz Yung Joc - EVERYSINGLE one of rb`s dope heads` style
Mk..
Vs.
Nothing.
Very Weak Battle. T-Wizzle Came Weak, But Half Assed. None Of Ur Linez We're Quotable besides the one quoted.
Yung Ghost................Wow....U need alot of work.. You didn't even half ass..U prob. tried. But keep elevating kid.
V// T. Wizzle
1x LLL Jr. Voter Of The Week
Maintenance
My niggas block huggas, you not hustlas
We charge fiends late fees, call us block bustas
Gernades like the A team, i got ya block fucka
I give em 24 like the shot clock buzza
Up # 4.
you dope, so i better come nice? yea rite i`ll kick ur ass first
Cuz last time Ghost was nice - i was 8 still watching casper
Sir, u make hits, but when i hit you, u`ll be laying on the tile
Cuz Yung Joc - EVERYSINGLE one of rb`s dope heads` style
vs
nothing
v/Wizzle
ghost's shit was horrid, all those short ass lines werent effective...wizzle could have done better as well but for the most part his shit hit harder
DNT SPEAK.
Up # 5, Sonz.
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