Week 8 - ~MVL~ (2 - 4) Vs B.Nesse (1 - 1)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
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If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

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Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

New No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[B.Nesse]

check 10 or 12, too busy for anymore

*edit votes*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327296
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327310
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=5531605
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=5531643
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327325

[~MVL~]

check. rnd. 2. good luck.

Lnx.

1. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327310
2.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327325
3. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327316
4. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327309
5. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327299

[~MVL~]

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class.

[B.Nesse]

check. rnd. 2. good luck.

round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory

lost souls? too ez...if ur slow dont vote plz

[one way]

mvl
Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
wtf
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
na
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
weak as shit

and I'm not going to find a bunch more ways to tell you I didn't like it and I thought it sucked.............

round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
what
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
um
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
weak
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
um, I dont know
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
na
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
na


well that was about even..........

*playes eni meni mine mo*

b ness for structure I guess

[B.Nesse]

i dun care, im busy as hell i jus threw it together im in college homie.

nice battle vl...uppin

[Blackflags]

LMFAO.......Man, I don't know how justified I can make this....

Nesse took this with ease

MVL- U had a decent verse....you're punches were strained though.....Definately worded them wrong, so in result of that fact, it left them not hitting very hard at all!
you're creativity for your verse was very Low, so that's out......all in all, should have been way better

Nesse-you're verse was pretty good...Punches were good, nothing spectacular...But with enough correct wordplay, you took this down with ease....

MVL, use a lot more multi-syllable lines...It' appealing to the eye...and if you use a played punch, flip it in the means of no one has heard it that way before


So yeah, my vote goes to Nesse

pz.

[one way]

this guy wants that voter of the week award

[Bob B.]

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled
^^^^way too simple and horribly worded bad opener

Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser
^^^????that doesnt even make sense so no

basically MVL that sucked horrible wordplay, bad multis or should i say attempts at, wow im just not impressed at all in fact i am the oppisite im am appalled



round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
^^^lol well done didnt know you were a chick


dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
^^^thats pretty good


those were your two dopest lines, the rest EHHHHH wasnt horrible good structure, multies, work on ya punches and you will be dam good, but yeah you win just wit those two lines they took his entire verse so....

V/B. Nesse

[kid sick']

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
wtf
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
wtf negro
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
no
This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
meh
i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
mcdonalds? you ARE using fillers
i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class.
um ok?


vs




round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
ok
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
cool
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
na
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
meh
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
meh, ok
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
not really..


v/B.Nesse


Lot better punches and MVL had shit, sonz you need to elevate for real

[darealMaRV]

MVL
Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
^^^WHAT?? LOL
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
^^SHE DOESNT LIKE DICK SON
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
^^^NO..U JUS SAID SHE LIKE'D DICK
This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
^^NO
i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
^^LOL NO MAN
i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class.
^^NO


b.nesse
round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
^^^LOL GOOD OPENER
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
^^^U COULD OF WORDED THIS BETTER
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
^^MEH
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
^^MEH
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
^^LOL
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
^^^NAH

V/NESSE

[Rule.]

mvl -

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
- nah

So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
- nope

Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
- nope

This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
- wow, no

i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
- nah man.

i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class.
- fell off .. punch was weak.

vs

b.neese -

round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
- eh

mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
- decent. a little forced, but decent.

dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
- nah

i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
- ehh.. pretty weak

your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
- ok

smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
- eh, ok.

overall, this is pretty self explanitory. mvl didnt come very good, had a lot of played lines, and the sex jokes were overwhelmingly old. Neese dropped aight.. but both need elevation.

v/ neese

[Relli_Mak]

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
nah..
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
um..okay i guess..
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
hell no..
This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
weak..
i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
nope..
i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class
gym class..?
3.0/10

Vs.

round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
meh..
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
aight..
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
nah..
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
decent..
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
cool..
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
meh..
4.0/10

Above reasons, v/ Nesse

[JDoe]

Id slap you, if i wasnt sure the doc dropped you on your head,
your 10x worse at rapping....than all the times in life ya cunt has bled,
ok.
So your a bitch, an thats how your going to get ahead in life,
but how can a slut?..hold a dick as bad as she holds the mic?
ok good.
Your scheme is too neat spend too much time on it dyke skeezer,
way to butchah rhymes almost so much couldnt be a lesbian pleaser,
nah.
This is a teaser, you used car salesmen looking like a fuckin hero,
ya matrix for tips but on kids ya got even Neo acting like the Zero,
ok concept, meh punch.
i can use fillers but theres not enough in the world for ya teeth,
shit i'd make a fucking McDonalds...with the way you sweatin grease,
ok.
i heard the quote "wtf is IJL?" that crew is going nowhere fast,
s'why they accepted you..since you always got picked last in gym class.
ok decent.

vs.

round 2? should be ashamed ima broad & u never whore me bitch
but i'ma quit gassin' u... 'til the day u can actually afford the shit
lol ok.
mvl? the lil' bitch has got no heart, nobody dreads the fool
ya lost it from the neck up... s'y embrace is where ur headed too
nice concept.
dunn, u may reek but on a scale of 1 to 10 your far from scarey
so if i smell pussy... just means this fishy muthafucka is near me
meh concept, ok punch.
i got a grimey past, so fuckin w/ me is like mama holdin the belt
s'why i know if u throwin up the rock... ur probably stonin yaself
lol ok.
your not fuckin amazin, i recall u always pm'n nesse for votes
& if "its a small world after all"... u give new meanin to the quote
ok.
smartest in his class? explains why your going down in history
but if ur soul's so fuckin lost... u literally gave away the victory
good finisher.

*MVL had the battle till i read Nesse' and i felt more like her verse was battle type shit, read through it like a battle n' the shit she said would be good for reality as well as text, so i felt the shit she dropped was much harder n to the point.

V/B Nesse.