Week 8 - Licorice (2 - 2) Vs one way (0 - 2)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

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Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

New No Editing of your verse.

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Good Luck to you both

[one way]

hahaha, he must have been writing up a verse the whole weak, try to at least come with some punchlines.


You couldn’t match my lines if you ripped off skin from my fingertips
Yea, we got some similar shit, Im sick - minded while your ill - Literate
I don’t like rap, I just like to talk shit and have fun like a laughing rebel
the real reasons they call you lic is because your at about half our level
Fucker I’m blasting dicks, fifth line of my verse and your ass is kicked
Oh shit I’m afraid I may kill this foul…….so its safe to say Ima pacifist
He must be a paperboy with mono…. when he’s giving me his speech
Cause the way you throw those head lines around your delivery is weak
You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
You aint sick to me, but we’ll find the real truth when the people come
I’ll poke out your left eye…… so you in the right mind to see who one
I stolen the crown, I suggest you quit why your ahead, I’m helping you clown
If you let them get on too much liquor-ish, they wont end up holding you down



16

[Taz™]

lmao @ you....
g/l anyways.


OneWay.

I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!
Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
This fag eager to get wasted, curious of those exotic bloody spot’s
That’s y when Liquor-ish comes.....One is down w/ body shots!
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
Its known that, this fag is clearly favoured to blow the opposition
I apologize& take things back, but that only shows ur fav. Position!
One's a chick in sight, u are so all over you as if bitch your tight
Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!
Check his sig ,no doubt man, One is proud,.....to let his mouth run
I wanted One& his ego, to spice things, D made us a 3 way bout son
Now try n keep sober slim, & front to take this cold shoulder win,
One can smell success,...............since I just walked all over him!


16.
I can pwn if i want to.

[Alphabetized]

You couldn’t match my lines if you ripped off skin from my fingertips
Yea, we got some similar shit, Im sick - minded while your ill - Literate
(Nope, Sick and Ill. fucking playeddd son.)
I don’t like rap, I just like to talk shit and have fun like a laughing rebel
the real reasons they call you lic is because your at about half our level
(Nah, doesn't seem very hard hitting.)
Fucker I’m blasting dicks, fifth line of my verse and your ass is kicked
Oh shit I’m afraid I may kill this foul…….so its safe to say Ima pacifist
(Forced wordplay.)
He must be a paperboy with mono…. when he’s giving me his speech
Cause the way you throw those head lines around your delivery is weak
(Wording was way off.. concept was mehish.)
You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
(Nah, didn't like it.)
Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
(This was very forced, could've been much better.)
You aint sick to me, but we’ll find the real truth when the people come
I’ll poke out your left eye…… so you in the right mind to see who one
(Statement-like. Doesn't hit very hard.)
I stolen the crown, I suggest you quit why your ahead, I’m helping you clown
If you let them get on too much liquor-ish, they wont end up holding you down
(Used before on him, meh.)

Weak verse.

VS.


I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!
(This was alright, seems a bit forced, not bad tho.)
Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
(Watch your typos. This was meh. Self glory shit.)
This fag eager to get wasted, curious of those exotic bloody spot’s
That’s y when Liquor-ish comes.....One is down w/ body shots!
(You'ved used this before too, havn't you? Weak anyways.)
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
(So obvious there was no punch)
Its known that, this fag is clearly favoured to blow the opposition
I apologize& take things back, but that only shows ur fav. Position!
(Meh, ite I guess.)
One's a chick in sight, u are so all over you as if bitch your tight
Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!
(First line was worded weird, second line was meh. lol tho.)
Check his sig ,no doubt man, One is proud,.....to let his mouth run
I wanted One& his ego, to spice things, D made us a 3 way bout son
(Noopee.)
Now try n keep sober slim, & front to take this cold shoulder win,
One can smell success,...............since I just walked all over him!
(Self glory, wack.)

Weak Verse.



Weak battle.

Licorice get's it barely though, slightly less wack verse.
In my mind, the first bar got it.

[one way]

lmao @ you....
g/l anyways.
U]

I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!

thats was cool

Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!


please explain that for me, I think I'm missing something


the rest was glorofication Im disapointed........

(Nope, Sick and Ill. fucking playeddd son.)

the ill and sick were not part of the wordplay moron, 'sick minded' and 'ill literate' as two words, mean basically the same thing. The wordplay was with the wrod illiterate, played would be 'your only sick in the hospital'..............read the punch not the first few words you see

[Alphabetized]

I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!

thats was cool

Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!


please explain that for me, I think I'm missing something


the rest was glorofication Im disapointed........




the ill and sick were not part of the wordplay moron, 'sick minded' and 'ill literate' as two words, mean basically the same thing. The wordplay was with the wrod illiterate, played would be 'your only sick in the hospital'..............read the punch not the first few words you see

I did read the punch, and the emphasis was on sick and ill, it was a flip on a very played concept, so you can shut the fuck up.
Either vote yourself or shut your mouth, you don't critique other
peoples votes you fucking idiot.

[Icarus]

You couldn’t match my lines if you ripped off skin from my fingertips
Yea, we got some similar shit, Im sick - minded while your ill - Literate
ehhh
I don’t like rap, I just like to talk shit and have fun like a laughing rebel
the real reasons they call you lic is because your at about half our level
????
Fucker I’m blasting dicks, fifth line of my verse and your ass is kicked
Oh shit I’m afraid I may kill this foul…….so its safe to say Ima pacifist
*looks up pacifist* Aite...decent
He must be a paperboy with mono…. when he’s giving me his speech
Cause the way you throw those head lines around your delivery is weak
paperboy's give speeches? or throw text?
You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
liked this one. it was coo
Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
*looks up O.R.* aite...it okay...
You aint sick to me, but we’ll find the real truth when the people come
I’ll poke out your left eye…… so you in the right mind to see who one
spelled won wrong. destroyed the punch but it werent that strong anyways
I stolen the crown, I suggest you quit why your ahead, I’m helping you clown
If you let them get on too much liquor-ish, they wont end up holding you down
for the love of god, ppl stop trying to flip licorice. not only does his opponents do it but he does it too and its WACK



I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!
EHH
Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
coo
This fag eager to get wasted, curious of those exotic bloody spot’s
That’s y when Liquor-ish comes.....One is down w/ body shots!
wack and played out. stop flipping ur own name, ur opponents do it enuff
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
LOL niceness
Its known that, this fag is clearly favoured to blow the opposition
I apologize& take things back, but that only shows ur fav. Position!
coo concept just not executed great
One's a chick in sight, u are so all over you as if bitch your tight
Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!
LOL
Check his sig ,no doubt man, One is proud,.....to let his mouth run
I wanted One& his ego, to spice things, D made us a 3 way bout son
nah
Now try n keep sober slim, & front to take this cold shoulder win,
One can smell success,...............since I just walked all over him
ehhh

not a bad battle. Licorice made me laugh a couple times. One way, u came kinda decent, I cant see why you 0-2, you seem halfway decent and that can get you at least one win in this league. Stay at it man.

V/ Licorice

[one way]

One way, u came kinda decent, I cant see why you 0-2, you seem halfway decent and that can get you at least one win in this league. Stay at it man.

It's because I talk too much shit..............lmao at *looks up* made me laugh and peace for taking the time to do so.


0-2 lic

[take.O.ver]

v/ Lic

one way, your verse was alright, you had some decent lines, some of your lines however were only fillers/statements.

Lic, you had some nice flips, your punches were on point too. some of ya shit was a little bit played, but overall you had the better and harder punches.

Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
nice punch.
i also like the philly .. pic line. that was a good personal.

just try not to use as much self glory in ya verse.

[Mr.Mal]

LMAO i saw sum funny punches in this battle man i have to admit.

LIC
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
^^ wording cwas cool, punch was fubnny as hell

Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
^^ aight

ONE

You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
^^ barely

v// lic

[Nashvillain]

best bar from one

Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
^this was ight

best bars from

Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
^this was mad funny

this was a pretty weak battle,but lic came wit some witty punches,and they hit harder

V//lic

[kid sick']

You couldn’t match my lines if you ripped off skin from my fingertips
Yea, we got some similar shit, Im sick - minded while your ill - Literate
na
I don’t like rap, I just like to talk shit and have fun like a laughing rebel
the real reasons they call you lic is because your at about half our level
no
Fucker I’m blasting dicks, fifth line of my verse and your ass is kicked
Oh shit I’m afraid I may kill this foul…….so its safe to say Ima pacifist
meh
He must be a paperboy with mono…. when he’s giving me his speech
Cause the way you throw those head lines around your delivery is weak
ok
You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
no
Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
meh
You aint sick to me, but we’ll find the real truth when the people come
I’ll poke out your left eye…… so you in the right mind to see who one
no punch.
I stolen the crown, I suggest you quit why your ahead, I’m helping you clown
If you let them get on too much liquor-ish, they wont end up holding you down
meh



vs


I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!
ok
Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
no
This fag eager to get wasted, curious of those exotic bloody spot’s
That’s y when Liquor-ish comes.....One is down w/ body shots!
na
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
no
Its known that, this fag is clearly favoured to blow the opposition
I apologize& take things back, but that only shows ur fav. Position!
meh
One's a chick in sight, u are so all over you as if bitch your tight
Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!
na
Check his sig ,no doubt man, One is proud,.....to let his mouth run
I wanted One& his ego, to spice things, D made us a 3 way bout son
NO
Now try n keep sober slim, & front to take this cold shoulder win,
One can smell success,...............since I just walked all over him!
no



v/Licorice

[Piff Jones]

You couldn’t match my lines if you ripped off skin from my fingertips
Yea, we got some similar shit, Im sick - minded while your ill - Literate
old wordplay
I don’t like rap, I just like to talk shit and have fun like a laughing rebel
the real reasons they call you lic is because your at about half our level
....no
Fucker I’m blasting dicks, fifth line of my verse and your ass is kicked
Oh shit I’m afraid I may kill this foul…….so its safe to say Ima pacifist
cool wordplay
He must be a paperboy with mono…. when he’s giving me his speech
Cause the way you throw those head lines around your delivery is weak
nah
You wack at this, tighten up your bars, think you can diss me you shook
Lic your a crook, cause I’ve saw better battles In Canada’s history books
needed wording but ok
Next time I wont be polite, so don’t just say that you reached new heights
I’ll rip you to pieces, leave Lic headed to the ‘O.R’ as cold as ice
too complex, need to be more basic
You aint sick to me, but we’ll find the real truth when the people come
I’ll poke out your left eye…… so you in the right mind to see who one
meh
I stolen the crown, I suggest you quit why your ahead, I’m helping you clown
If you let them get on too much liquor-ish, they wont end up holding you down
played nameplay?



I stress herbs, leave ur head lines blu, deeppressed& axhausted
We know textwise that your Nuts!.........best served assaulted!
ehhh
Don’t be taken back & expect to see, you projected & love b
When the victor is shining, we see you............reflecting of me
ok
This fag eager to get wasted, curious of those exotic bloody spot’s
That’s y when Liquor-ish comes.....One is down w/ body shots!
flipping your own name is the worst thing to do
Your one tight whore, pocket wise meaning you are quite poor!
I’ts no charity when I throw beef for u....& ur family to fight for
wow @ a beef line being funny, good
Its known that, this fag is clearly favoured to blow the opposition
I apologize& take things back, but that only shows ur fav. Position!
nah
One's a chick in sight, u are so all over you as if bitch your tight
Soon will see One & Philly battle out.................for picture rights!
ok
Check his sig ,no doubt man, One is proud,.....to let his mouth run
I wanted One& his ego, to spice things, D made us a 3 way bout son
nah
Now try n keep sober slim, & front to take this cold shoulder win,
One can smell success,...............since I just walked all over him
no

You guys both seemed to elevate. One that pacifist line was the best punch of the battle, but I didn't feel anything else really. You need more concistency. Licor your improving too. You had like 2 or 3 witty punches and that's what we like to see. Keep at it dude.

V/ Licorice, he had the punches and concisteny. This was close.

[one way]

haha, I bet you thought I was bitching


18-0 or some shit...............close this

[Taz™]

now I hope , you and ur buddy ego, would come to terms.