Week 8 - Emanate (5 - 2) Vs Tebo. (2 - 0)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

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Lines
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Match whoever drops first.

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New No Editing of your verse.

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Good Luck to you both

[Tebo]

Check

Em I'm going to drop 30, unless you drop before me
EDIT: nvm already dropped
Match if you can...

*This will be edited to put links of votes up*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25#post5525925
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327297
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post5526173

[Tebo]

Your a hustlers biggest break, I always tell you "what's good budd" as you wait
Knew you were a gullible herb, as I shammed you; as you pay I handshake
You know you ain't that dope, verses considerd jokes, FACT not thesis
Cause everytime you try to showcase ya dope Ly... we interABRUPTLY ricist
But ayyo on tha Down Low 8===========D-------------------
This guy's the new teacher tho. Goodbye... Sue from the Sunday Night Sex Show
This guy can just teach us more, like............. all the write ways to literally blow

no surprise you beat me. as I said earlier this season, you won't lose.

good battle anyway.

You caved in like a bitch, you & I both know this
The vote was 2-4... still a chance...
Then in a sudden glance... Em says words similar to hocus pocus ^^^
Even I voted for you... Now I wish I hadn't, the will to win you lack
You'll never get a re-champ match
Ya name fits ya well cuz... Eman - Fuck It! WE Don't Want You Back!

don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
lame, played wordplay

No suprise, he wack all the time, not just his raps but his whole persona
This dude feeds from more hooks than fisherman compared to this piranha
I know you wish I was dead, glad Nicole Smith dead, necrophiliac
Jumpin on every overplayed/dead line like a effortless rape attack

so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
lol, ok
Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
lmfao, coo
some of it was filler, but some punches were pretty nice in the wordin.. some setups werent direct enough. these two lines i think had the most impact and held the consistency up tho.

Yea my first 2 battles both bitches no showed/withdrew they verse
So we've both won by DQ
But b4 voteing was threw with, saying Penlord had won was worse
I'm defined as better, compromise this you could neva ' ever rebuild
Develop a new flow, cause yours always leaves the filler unfullfilled

#2

Emanate

Well I am the first head this season too retain the title. Based on my achievements, I have to put myself second to best. If you think this is cocky I apologize.

Don't make me cock my glock back, lyrically spit shells that flatten
They peirce through your ego like ya cockyness never happend
Your last weeks attraction, but I know your the Big Cahoona
Cause your full of shit, so much infact you fuckin balooned up
I'm here to pop ya.......... as I pull out a needle you scream 'N give me a flinch
You lost face it bruh,
I know you were harroin so I hate to burst ur bubble by pullin down the syringe

Verse of the week
( I won by DQ, gotta give it to this guy <3 )

What's the heart for fag? Were not allowed to dickride & your dickrideing Alph
Your a washed up 'ol bag, knowin you were holdin the belt belonging to somebody else
Full clip mag, in the dome where you tie the bandana like a du-rag
Dick ride, as I implied; dead guy perma fried, he had 1 final taste
That ^ line was filler bitch, like the cap about to be in ya brain
This ya final match, title shot's passed, that was your last shot, BANG!

[Piff Jones]

wow your really making me waste 30, fuck you.

check.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...67&postcount=6
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&postcount=13
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&postcount=10
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&postcount=12

[Piff Jones]

i'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
your NEVER mentioned in the mags, & you suck to be undefeated
so watch me make another headline.... up against the wall & beat him
i beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
tubby, theres a key word that always starts the play son
when we hear the QB say hike! your fatass just needs to go take one
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
i'm not dropping a fully thirty, cause i can save the rest fam
even if it was your first year of HS, you couldn't ever be freshman
you can't even taste victory, so winning shouldn't be one of your hunches
hey guys look, D. Silver made a thread to quote all of his punches!
scared shitless. your a pussy because i gave you the reason to be
you'd think I was an NFL kicker the way i'm taking the balls off of t
must not know me by coming wack, but i'm not one for teasin'
so the next time me and you verse, at least drop one half-way decent
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back
bitch, i choose the night life, when your life is rather boring
who the fuck else on RB drops their verses at 9 in the morning?
you poor loser, you live in a dirt shack and your a clown
i wouldn't ever shed a tear, just tear this faggots shed down

[-Coop-]

Lol.
Emanate
i'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
I beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
bitch, i choose the night life, when your life is rather boring
who the fuck else on RB drops their verses at 9 in the morning?
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back

Everything was good or decent, but these stood out imo.

Tebo
Please don't go anymore than 12 next time. The quality of your lines are DEFINITELY more important than how many lines you got. I really don't even feel like readin your verse, but I will... then pick out what was ok...

Ok... If I had to pick SOMETIHNG, I would pick:
Even I voted for you... Now I wish I hadn't, the will to win you lack
You'll never get a re-champ match
Ya name fits ya well cuz... Eman - Fuck It! WE Don't Want You Back!

Just for the fact that it looked like it took some research.

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VOTE: EMANATE
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[one way]

tebo

know you ain't that dope, verses considerd jokes, FACT not thesis
Cause everytime you try to showcase ya dope Ly... we interABRUPTLY ricist
that was clever, nice shit
o suprise, he wack all the time, not just his raps but his whole persona
This dude feeds from more hooks than fisherman compared to this piranha
conceptwas cool, but wording was not
What's the heart for fag? Were not allowed to dickride & your dickrideing Alph
Your a washed up 'ol bag, knowin you were holdin the belt belonging to somebody else
yea, what the fuck was up with him giving up against penlord, have some confidence you insecure fuck, if thats not dickriding than what is


wasn't feeling the rest 1st was solid rest were ok


emanate



i'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
weak delivery, concept was decet
your NEVER mentioned in the mags, & you suck to be undefeated
so watch me make another headline.... up against the wall & beat him
weak, tough talk gets you no where
i beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
weak and played as shit, lmao at your set up
tubby, theres a key word that always starts the play son
when we hear the QB say hike! your fatass just needs to go take one
hike, i thought it was hut
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
weak, and according to the played thread played as fuck
i'm not dropping a fully thirty, cause i can save the rest fam
even if it was your first year of HS, you couldn't ever be freshman
that was ok
you can't even taste victory, so winning shouldn't be one of your hunches
hey guys look, D. Silver made a thread to quote all of his punches!
what
scared shitless. your a pussy because i gave you the reason to be
you'd think I was an NFL kicker the way i'm taking the balls off of t
weak, another football line
must not know me by coming wack, but i'm not one for teasin'
so the next time me and you verse, at least drop one half-way decent
nothing here
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back
no, lame, your making fun of his weight, thats real old
bitch, i choose the night life, when your life is rather boring
who the fuck else on RB drops their verses at 9 in the morning?
anyone who doesn't live with there mommy and has stuff to do in the real world, you choose the night life......lol your 14
you poor loser, you live in a dirt shack and your a clown
i wouldn't ever shed a tear, just tear this faggots shed down
thats the weakest wordplay ever

this was not a one side battle, tebo had a solid punch, but the rest was weak, chop off the fat and make your punches tougher, also try to tighten up your flow. Em, you were on sometimes, alot of weak shit and poorly executed concepts, one nice line, flow was fine, more consistant........get that shit outa your head that your better than everyone except penlord, its really effecting your proformance

vote em

[Icarus]

This guy's the new teacher tho. Goodbye... Sue from the Sunday Night Sex Show
This guy can just teach us more, like............. all the write ways to literally blow

vs

i'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
your NEVER mentioned in the mags, & you suck to be undefeated
so watch me make another headline.... up against the wall & beat him
i beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
tubby, theres a key word that always starts the play son
when we hear the QB say hike! your fatass just needs to go take one
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
must not know me by coming wack, but i'm not one for teasin'
so the next time me and you verse, at least drop one half-way decent
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back
you poor loser, you live in a dirt shack and your a clown
i wouldn't ever shed a tear, just tear this faggots shed down



S_me_ne G_t Sh_tted _n
Alex I'd like to serve the puzzle....

v/ Em

[Alphabetized]

Once again.. Emanate has never defeated me.

'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
I beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back

Vs.

edit:
Alright, since I was pm'd and bitched at about how he had nothing
I'll change my vote.

What's the heart for fag? Were not allowed to dickride & your dickrideing Alph
Your a washed up 'ol bag, knowin you were holdin the belt belonging to somebody else
^
That was cool.. but wording was a bit off.

Interabruptly is deffenetly not a word.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/interABRUPTLY

Emanate still wins. Hoorah.

[Tebo]

What the fuck is your point Alpha if I have "nothing", what the fuck does it matter if I don't go 30 or less?

If this verse doesn't even have a quoteable or what the hell ever... I'm obviously the worst in this league. Cause that was the best I could do.

I can't do any better...

0-6 for Em

Eyyo Tebo you rap so wack, give me a L O S E
I lost my match, like 50 couldn't buy out Pelle Pelle
Worst in the league, least Lymph's won sumthin
I got 2 DQ's under my belt & 1 loss up 'N runnin
Steady gunnin, I guess if everyone say I wack
I'm wack... Cows will fly if I ever get a tittle match

[Ra Ill]

scared shitless. your a pussy because i gave you the reason to be
you'd think I was an NFL kicker the way i'm taking the balls off of t
must not know me by coming wack, but i'm not one for teasin'
so the next time me and you verse, at least drop one half-way decent
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back
bitch, i choose the night life, when your life is rather boring
who the fuck else on RB drops their verses at 9 in the morning?
you poor loser, you live in a dirt shack and your a clown
i wouldn't ever shed a tear, just tear this faggots shed down

E - yeah this was ya highlight of ya verse clean cut dogg, nice work, punchs were hittin.

Your a hustlers biggest break, I always tell you "what's good budd" as you wait
Knew you were a gullible herb, as I shammed you; as you pay I handshake
You know you ain't that dope, verses considerd jokes, FACT not thesis
Cause everytime you try to showcase ya dope Ly... we interABRUPTLY ricist
But ayyo on tha Down Low 8===========D-------------------
This guy's the new teacher tho. Goodbye... Sue from the Sunday Night Sex Show
This guy can just teach us more, like............. all the write ways to literally blow

hmm... tebo. to me you quoted way to much it was like explaining ya verse should have just mentioned it in ya verse like a joke we'd know what your talking about and reserched the shit but none the less was ok..

vote - Emanate

[take.O.ver]

v/ Emanate..

Overall Em had the better/harder punches .. by far.

i'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
your NEVER mentioned in the mags, & you suck to be undefeated
so watch me make another headline.... up against the wall & beat him
tubby, theres a key word that always starts the play son
when we hear the QB say hike! your fatass just needs to go take one
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back

^^ punches i liked the most

Tebo - like Coop said, the consistency of your lines wern't there. drop 12 or 14 quality lines instead of 30 weak ones.

my favorite punch from your verse:
know you ain't that dope, verses considerd jokes, FACT not thesis
Cause everytime you try to showcase ya dope Ly... we interABRUPTLY ricist

no hate.

[kid sick']

'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
I beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back

vs



What's the heart for fag? Were not allowed to dickride & your dickrideing Alph
Your a washed up 'ol bag, knowin you were holdin the belt belonging to somebody else



v/Emanate


Easy..

[Piff Jones]

7-0

good battle man.

[Tebo]

Once again.. Emanate has never defeated me.

'm a Florida Gators fan, so step away cause I don't wanna be mean
but bitch when I tell you to back up, that was just Tebo's role on the team
horny fag, why you here? shoulda stayed in FL cause your not invited
when the voters are really hard-on you, you STILL shouldn't get excited
I beat apex & alpha, you can say I'm a true textual member
your wack ass only beat test, and some other dude no one remembers
the gym ain't working for you, your out of shape body is just funny jack
cause when Boflexed his muscles, 30 thousand people wanted their money back

Vs.

edit:
Alright, since I was pm'd and bitched at about how he had nothing
I'll change my vote.

What's the heart for fag? Were not allowed to dickride & your dickrideing Alph
Your a washed up 'ol bag, knowin you were holdin the belt belonging to somebody else
^
That was cool.. but wording was a bit off.

Interabruptly is deffenetly not a word.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/interABRUPTLY

Emanate still wins. Hoorah.

It was spose to be interuptly, but if ya add the AB in the middle interABRUPTLY, like interupt & abruptly in 1. Ehh... I wouldn't get it if I didn't write it myself either but yea.

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