Week 9 - ~MVL~ (2 - 6) Vs MaRVJay (2 - 4)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

Missing/No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Legislation.G
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[JayUNZ]

check...10 lines


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328035
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328023
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328022
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328030
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328033
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328025

[~pE$t~]

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[D.Silver]

~MVL~ your rec will be corrected next week.

[~MVL~]

Marv, you got a bad record..and im not just dissing you on this...
Speak with a stutter...but your lyrics come off with a skip,
Why call you names, when your alias's speak for themselves,
Ya Adlibs are advils..try to many man its bad for your health,
The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,
Shit sucks...... your name is synonamous with unproffesional and scary
Dentists can lie but damn man...your teeth even scared away the tooth fairy!
This dude is reminiscient as old literature...he reminds me of Oedipus Rex,
Cuz you'll gouge your eyes soon...and you love your mom...but for sex,

pz.

[JayUNZ]

jus like i told wyte fuck battlin son i got knuckles that a sting that face.
if mvl get beat up he not goin to get a gun..this 50 cent fag gon bring back mase.
you cant do shit me lyrically...now u bout 2 get merk its 2 late for a warning junior.
your name is this battles prediction...........a Marv Victory and your the Loser.
what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.
nigga you a joke forreal ask around rb if mvl's hott..nobody's this guy fan.
ya wonderin what his user title is...well thats how they spell bin ladens name in iran.
i aint famous home's but my name alone...got little loser sweatin.

~MVL~ your rec will be corrected next week.

....................lol yeah it will be to ummm about 2-7

[Kris Stubbs]

one sided battle.

mvl clearly took this. started off nice as fuck. and kept on goin. your opener was dope in my opinion. and your 2nd bar flowed nicely, and had good wording. last 6 lines was descent...not much i didn't like.


Marb-your shit was forced...stretched..blah..waek..i thought for somereason
this would be a good battle but it wasn't.


v/mvl

[Nashvillain]

Marv, you got a bad record..and im not just dissing you on this...
Speak with a stutter...but your lyrics come off with a skip,
^na
Why call you names, when your alias's speak for themselves,
Ya Adlibs are advils..try to many man its bad for your health,
^played
The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,
^na
Shit sucks...... your name is synonamous with unproffesional and scary
Dentists can lie but damn man...your teeth even scared away the tooth fairy!
^wack
This dude is reminiscient as old literature...he reminds me of Oedipus Rex,
Cuz you'll gouge your eyes soon...and you love your mom...but for sex,
^weak closer

***VS***

jus like i told wyte fuck battlin son i got knuckles that a sting that face.
if mvl get beat up he not goin to get a gun..this 50 cent fag gon bring back mase.
^ok
you cant do shit me lyrically...now u bout 2 get merk its 2 late for a warning junior.
your name is this battles prediction...........a Marv Victory and your the Loser.
^coo
what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.
^lol
nigga you a joke forreal ask around rb if mvl's hott..nobody's this guy fan.
ya wonderin what his user title is...well thats how they spell bin ladens name in iran.
^na
i aint famous home's but my name alone...got little loser sweatin.

Quote:
Originally Posted by D.Silver
~MVL~ your rec will be corrected next week.



....................lol yeah it will be to ummm about 2-7
^good closer

this battle was on sided to me 2,but twords marv,not a very good drop by mvl ive seen harder from you,marv had some pretty good punches and was consistant

V//marv

[JDoe]

Marv, you got a bad record..and im not just dissing you on this...
Speak with a stutter...but your lyrics come off with a skip,
ok.
Why call you names, when your alias's speak for themselves,
Ya Adlibs are advils..try to many man its bad for your health,
lol.
The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,
ok.
Shit sucks...... your name is synonamous with unproffesional and scary
Dentists can lie but damn man...your teeth even scared away the tooth fairy!
meh.
This dude is reminiscient as old literature...he reminds me of Oedipus Rex,
Cuz you'll gouge your eyes soon...and you love your mom...but for sex,
meh finisher.

vs.

jus like i told wyte fuck battlin son i got knuckles that a sting that face.
if mvl get beat up he not goin to get a gun..this 50 cent fag gon bring back mase.
LMAO.
you cant do shit me lyrically...now u bout 2 get merk its 2 late for a warning junior.
your name is this battles prediction...........a Marv Victory and your the Loser.
ok.
what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.
lol.
nigga you a joke forreal ask around rb if mvl's hott..nobody's this guy fan.
ya wonderin what his user title is...well thats how they spell bin ladens name in iran.
lol.
i aint famous home's but my name alone...got little loser sweatin.
Originally Posted by D.Silver
~MVL~ your rec will be corrected next week.



....................lol yeah it will be to ummm about 2-7
lol...finisher.

*THis battle seemed one sided...but good both yall.

V/MarVjay.

[Taz™]

MVL.

Marv, you got a bad record..and im not just dissing you on this...
Speak with a stutter...but your lyrics come off with a skip,
^ok-ish

the rest i left unquoted are , pretty much quite weak.
lacking potential even concept wise.


vS

Marvjay.


what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.
^ok.

well nothing spectacular either.
similar to MVL's.

Out. from the quote you each had. & from the rest of your verse.
Marv. wins, due to having slightly better un-quoted lines.

VOTE:Marvjay. w/ a better verse

.

[JayUNZ]

3-1........

[B.Nesse]

The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,

vs

jus like i told wyte fuck battlin son i got knuckles that a sting that face.
if mvl get beat up he not goin to get a gun..this 50 cent fag gon bring back mase.
what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.

v/Marv
mvl your verses seem bland as hell homie, seem like you dont put nothin much into it, basically none of em have cool concepts or tight punches, most of ya concepts are far from witty and very wack, thats why you losin so damn much....marv had an aight verse, nice opener n decent closer liked the week 3 line a lot, the lines in between ya verse were blah tho they werent that effective, funni but not effective, none of mvl's lines were effective therefore marv got it

[OnKor]

Marv, you got a bad record..and im not just dissing you on this...
Speak with a stutter...but your lyrics come off with a skip,
Weak
Why call you names, when your alias's speak for themselves,
Ya Adlibs are advils..try to many man its bad for your health,
Ok
The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,
Decent
Shit sucks...... your name is synonamous with unproffesional and scary
Dentists can lie but damn man...your teeth even scared away the tooth fairy!
Eh, kinda weak
This dude is reminiscient as old literature...he reminds me of Oedipus Rex,
Cuz you'll gouge your eyes soon...and you love your mom...but for sex,
Bad closer


vs.


jus like i told wyte fuck battlin son i got knuckles that a sting that face.
if mvl get beat up he not goin to get a gun..this 50 cent fag gon bring back mase.
Decent
you cant do shit me lyrically...now u bout 2 get merk its 2 late for a warning junior.
your name is this battles prediction...........a Marv Victory and your the Loser.
Nope
what makes u think you'd have a chance 2 beat me?.....shit it beats me.
your weak see....we at 9 now & your ass aint have a W since about week 3.
Lol
nigga you a joke forreal ask around rb if mvl's hott..nobody's this guy fan.
ya wonderin what his user title is...well thats how they spell bin ladens name in iran.
Nah
i aint famous home's but my name alone...got little loser sweatin.
....................lol yeah it will be to ummm about 2-7
Loll


Vote: Marv
Marv had dropped decent. Mvl you need some better concepts cause your punches hardly hit at all. So, I got Marv winning this for actually throwing some decent punches

[Jonezy]

The sparring bag is still..your hits just dont pack a punch,
When it comes to shooting blanks...your pretty much MARVelous,
this was cool from mvl..not much else i liked tho


marv came alright nothing stood out but it was more constant..so

v/ marv

[JayUNZ]

6-1....