Up.
sickness up.
voice is gay
flow was iight, I don't think this was freestyled
agree^^^ The voice was kinda annoyin
But this wasn't a freestyle ben.... it was wrote on how he shuld write a book over it........
Flow wuz decent..... Delivery was shaky cuz sometimes it seemed ya slurred ya words or maybe it was the effect ya put on ya vocals cuz i couldnt really understand em for like the first 30 seconds...... Lyrics couldn't tell cuz it was hard to understand ya but im sure if ya worked on the way ya delivery was and made your voice more clear this song would be good...... Can't give all that much feed as i couldnt really hear the lyrics and beat wuz wierd also.....
RTF - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329284
Music is Art and Art is beauty
So If
Music is in the eyes of all
And
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Does That Give Us All Beauty?
i dunno the effects sorta do fuck it up... but it sounds like your tryna 2 sound like lil wayne on this track too.... i cant really give feedback.. hah cuz i dont want 2.. all i can say is work on it mann...
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yea it was aight tho still
but freestylin isnt about a book...
its all in your head
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I'ma be rippin the mic till I'm a hundred n ten,
Have ya'll niggaz like, damn that nigga just done it again" R.I.P BIG L
Nice Track . keep it up .
Word again your quality is bizzare but still I aint gonna lie your lyrics on this were sick. I dont get why a lot of people hating on this lyrically this was very sick your style needs working on just cause sometimes its not that clear I think its just ur mixing you need to get down and then youll be str8.
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326130
get a new mic, freestyle is okay. the way u flip is cool
i couldn't really tell what u was sayin most the time, but id freestyle battle you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329360
get at that
preciate all the love & hate..
& to those who think its not freestyle....thx, thats a compliment...
& I aint try to make the qwality good, I was just bull shittin......
Just provin my pointe that rappin is to easy....gone
oyea check out the other freestyles under the battle section of my siggy.......thx
Originally Posted by Edward Casey
dog... respect is respect... but this wasn't a freestyle... in the least. and when are you going to try to make the quality good and stop bullshittin..?
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maybe by freestyle he means, i wrote this very fast!
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no way was this a freestyle you are so full of shit
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