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    Freestyle, literaly done in 3 minutes

    I dont rap about experience, cause I lie too.
    I dont falsely rep LA & then bang it on Pyru.
    I dont mix for fame like Khalled & Dj Clue.
    I dont need a Moon Man, just to stay cool.
    Ive been behind bars & forced to fuck wit the politics.
    So yo boy went broke & got dumped by my prada chick.
    But my man Jay, put a nigga on a scholarship.
    He brought the camera, I shot the snitch.
    Im about the dollar bitch, you can call it revenue.
    This some baller shit, talk about me, never dude.
    Im the chocolate kiss on a cookie, im ery' bithces dream.
    The underdog w/o the rookie, gunnin for the CREAM.
    Cuz cash rule ery'thing around me, you can put a nigga on a team.
    Its a fact we move it by the pound G, add a figure to the green.
    Yo boy rising to the top, gimmie the ten digit salary.
    Im like an astronaut & yall still got gravity.
    Where the hustler's at man, get yo bucks up.
    Im on deck drinkin like a pirate, gettin fucked up.
    And yall still on the block, doing overtime.
    If you a true G, why you buying QP's & sellin dimes?

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    Re: Freestyle, literaly done in 3 minutes

    Nice little boast piece, especially for a quick key. Smooth multi's which helped the flow along. Some standard gangsta stuff so i can't comment on the originality of it. Vocab was solid, good rhythm for most of it too.

    Keep on posting, and please rtf, fuckers be sleeping: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328993

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    Re: Freestyle, literaly done in 3 minutes

    not bad you came alright for a 3 minute keystyle. keep up the good work, man. and welcome to RB. maybe soon ill get to read somethin' a lil longer. the flow was a nice and smooth one. vocabulary was on point. overall not a bad piece at all... stay cool, my nig..

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    Re: Freestyle, literaly done in 3 minutes

    respectable for 3 minutes...but every now n then one just has the feeling he could go on flowin forever...love those minutes...hehe
    but back to the drop...good wordplay...good flow...alrght vocab...nothin more to stay...keep spittin'...try to tackle some topical shit...out
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