12-20 lines
Agree on limit or match 1st poster
Check in by thursday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due friday 1159 pm eastern
Winner will be crowned new FL HW Champ
A.T.
King
12-20 lines
Agree on limit or match 1st poster
Check in by thursday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due friday 1159 pm eastern
Winner will be crowned new FL HW Champ
Good luck to you...
DayumNation
and to you as well sir. 14 lines.
The Last Level
14 lines...
Bitch, when you swing, the sting lacks, nobody feels a thing when king raps,
I leave u with ur head ducked more than usual...... around Arch's knee caps,
Now he's in the champ match, but this fagg keeps missing with weak disses,
Cause your battle with EMC was so neck to neck, I'd swear y'all was kissing,
So now Im calling your bluff, the gig is up, the title is mine cause king sucks,
So roll with the punches or ban urself, either way... u wont be missed much,
Cause King was a bitch in his past life, now he just sits around an acts tight,
Dude can't be tight lipped for shit.......... so just imagine what his ass is like,
Oat's had his run... right through you in Abattoir, I know you wanna go back,
Took your place on the throne......... and now? this king sits on an Oat sack,
Your dad's ashamed he's got a fag for a son, I'd trade you in for a few coins,
We've all heard the expression....... but literally, you are the fruit of his loins,
Bitch, you better just quit jerk, before you get all bent, ripped, and dick hurt,
Cause honestly, a battle with you is like doing dishes... it's simply bitch work.
DayumNation
Quest threatened to erase ya wins n I'd like to see him try son
Cuz he really would've done that shit if wasn't so fucking hard to find one
I'll murder his family n have him tortured for three days
A bitch like you is so rare you must be worth a fucking fortune on ebay
Can't speak to women like a mac, he gets too nervous n anxious
You might hear AT hollering "Yo bitch", but thats him speaking spanglish
We aint on the same page, I don't even speak with cats this bad
I'd put it in terms you could understand but I cant type with a lisp, fag
Ya tourny runs are terrible, you get beat in the worst way
If AT raped "The Gauntlet" then he must've tried some Marv J wordplay
This dude aint eye level with king, of course this don't sound fair
Bitch you're waiste level at best...so um, while you're down there.....
Over...I'ma KO you and there isn't any doubt bitch
I'm only here so no one wack champed FL...
...You're only here cuz Per$ forgot all about this.
The Last Level
A.T.
funny how your verse is almost perfectly box shaped lol
Bitch, when you swing, the sting lacks, nobody feels a thing when king raps,
I leave u with ur head ducked more than usual...... around Arch's knee caps,
descent opener
Now he's in the champ match, but this fagg keeps missing with weak disses,
Cause your battle with EMC was so neck to neck, I'd swear y'all was kissing,
lol
So now Im calling your bluff, the gig is up, the title is mine cause king sucks,
So roll with the punches or ban urself, either way... u wont be missed much,
kinda weak diss here
Cause King was a bitch in his past life, now he just sits around an acts tight,
Dude can't be tight lipped for shit.......... so just imagine what his ass is like,
lol and mildly homo
Oat's had his run... right through you in Abattoir, I know you wanna go back,
Took your place on the throne......... and now? this king sits on an Oat sack,
descent flip on a tired concept
Your dad's ashamed he's got a fag for a son, I'd trade you in for a few coins,
We've all heard the expression....... but literally, you are the fruit of his loins,
lol
Bitch, you better just quit jerk, before you get all bent, ripped, and dick hurt,
Cause honestly, a battle with you is like doing dishes... it's simply bitch work.
good closer
VS
KING
Quest threatened to erase ya wins n I'd like to see him try son
Cuz he really would've done that shit if wasn't so fucking hard to find one
good opner
I'll murder his family n have him tortured for three days
A bitch like you is so rare you must be worth a fucking fortune on ebay
so so hit here
Can't speak to women like a mac, he gets too nervous n anxious
You might hear AT hollering "Yo bitch", but thats him speaking spanglish
wasnt feeling this one
We aint on the same page, I don't even speak with cats this bad
I'd put it in terms you could understand but I cant type with a lisp, fag
lol
Ya tourny runs are terrible, you get beat in the worst way
If AT raped "The Gauntlet" then he must've tried some Marv J wordplay
ok
This dude aint eye level with king, of course this don't sound fair
Bitch you're waiste level at best...so um, while you're down there.....
ok also mildly gay
Over...I'ma KO you and there isn't any doubt bitch
I'm only here so no one wack champed FL...
...You're only here cuz Per$ forgot all about this.
good closer
pretty good battle imo. King had a few harder hitting punches but wasnt as consistent as he usually is. A.T. homie you were pretty much consistent throughtout your verse. Even tho you were very consitent you didnt have any haymakers. you checked all the blocks but you didnt excede what i know you can do. King bounced around from having descent bars to having 2 that hit very hard. A.T. i think if you would have raised the bar just a little and dropped a punch or 2 with a dope concept this battle would def had been in your favor.
v/ King
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Bitch, when you swing, the sting lacks, nobody feels a thing when king raps,
I leave u with ur head ducked more than usual...... around Arch's knee caps,
not feelin this.. pretty simple imo
Now he's in the champ match, but this fagg keeps missing with weak disses,
Cause your battle with EMC was so neck to neck, I'd swear y'all was kissing,
not feelin this much either, the concepts a lil playd n u freshened it a little but the personal in itself was weak
So now Im calling your bluff, the gig is up, the title is mine cause king sucks,
So roll with the punches or ban urself, either way... u wont be missed much,
ok
Cause King was a bitch in his past life, now he just sits around an acts tight,
Dude can't be tight lipped for shit.......... so just imagine what his ass is like
gayy.. lol.. punch didnt connect, pretty statementish
Oat's had his run... right through you in Abattoir, I know you wanna go back,
Took your place on the throne......... and now? this king sits on an Oat sack,
liking this one..
Your dad's ashamed he's got a fag for a son, I'd trade you in for a few coins,
We've all heard the expression....... but literally, you are the fruit of his loins,
weak
Bitch, you better just quit jerk, before you get all bent, ripped, and dick hurt,
Cause honestly, a battle with you is like doing dishes... it's simply bitch work.
cool closer.
Quest threatened to erase ya wins n I'd like to see him try son
Cuz he really would've done that shit if wasn't so fucking hard to find one
lol
I'll murder his family n have him tortured for three days
A bitch like you is so rare you must be worth a fucking fortune on ebay
okay.. didnt hit THAT hard though
Can't speak to women like a mac, he gets too nervous n anxious
You might hear AT hollering "Yo bitch", but thats him speaking spanglish
naa
We aint on the same page, I don't even speak with cats this bad
I'd put it in terms you could understand but I cant type with a lisp, fag
lmao
Ya tourny runs are terrible, you get beat in the worst way
If AT raped "The Gauntlet" then he must've tried some Marv J wordplay
lmao again
This dude aint eye level with king, of course this don't sound fair
Bitch you're waiste level at best...so um, while you're down there.....
cool bar
Over...I'ma KO you and there isn't any doubt bitch
I'm only here so no one wack champed FL...
...You're only here cuz Per$ forgot all about this.
okayish
Yea, I got to give this one to King.. he came clever with some hits and some were just funny... Good battle though, AT came thru though..
v/King
A.T.
Bitch, when you swing, the sting lacks, nobody feels a thing when king raps,
I leave u with ur head ducked more than usual...... around Arch's knee caps,
So now Im calling your bluff, the gig is up, the title is mine cause king sucks,
So roll with the punches or ban urself, either way... u wont be missed much,
vs.
King:
Quest threatened to erase ya wins n I'd like to see him try son
Cuz he really would've done that shit if wasn't so fucking hard to find one
Ya tourny runs are terrible, you get beat in the worst way
If AT raped "The Gauntlet" then he must've tried some Marv J wordplay
Over...I'ma KO you and there isn't any doubt bitch
I'm only here so no one wack champed FL...
...You're only here cuz Per$ forgot all about this
both came weaker then I thought they would. I am going to give this to King, he flowed nice. and he had the more personal verse I think. A.T. man, you used so many gay jokes you still had some nice lines, but a few times I was just like wtf.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
So now Im calling your bluff, the gig is up, the title is mine cause king sucks,
So roll with the punches or ban urself, either way... u wont be missed much,
Oat's had his run... right through you in Abattoir, I know you wanna go back,
Took your place on the throne......... and now? this king sits on an Oat sack,
Vs.
Quest threatened to erase ya wins n I'd like to see him try son
Cuz he really would've done that shit if wasn't so fucking hard to find one
We aint on the same page, I don't even speak with cats this bad
I'd put it in terms you could understand but I cant type with a lisp, fag
Ya tourny runs are terrible, you get beat in the worst way
If AT raped "The Gauntlet" then he must've tried some Marv J wordplay
Just had an overal better verse with harder punches.
Vote....King