~king~crunch~ vs bonespitter

[bonespitter]

you first 10 minutes
2 rounds

[~King~cruncH~]

im firsrt one round aight...... dont got much time, checkin .................................................. ..................................................

[bonespitter]

checkin in ttime is started lets go .................................................. .................................................. .....................

[~King~cruncH~]

dis kid got no flows/
ill smack u up like i do 2 these hoes//

heres how da story goes, me 5 u 0/
hit u harder then tyson in a 1 minute K.O.//

this is hockey, im puttin ya in check/
5 minute penalty 4 breakin ur neck//

y dont u jus quit, u know retire/
in a couple o years ull b wearin my atire//

dis aint rock but ill roll all over u/
suck my dick and ill blow all over u//

im bout 2 b victorious/
cause this shit im droppin is notorious//

im da king and ur not even a knight in shinin armour/
got u dazed in a haze, like a snake charmer and his mysterious ways//

dis kids got sticky fingers from playin wit his momma/
ur so wack, so jus drop all dis dramma//

dawg u dissapoint me i thought u had style/
ill eat u up jus like a dozen mild//

dis shit is venom, spider-man cant even handle my carnage/
its trash day an im takin u out cause ur da garbage//.......


hit dis one up pzl...........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&pagenumber=2

[bonespitter]

its bonespitter, gona get it right not wrong
you know me beter, call me the newest don
i knew from the start, why write your gone
i ll rip you apart, so you state that i dont flow
and what you do, your a skittle missing rainbow
you homo, i dont see an arrow, all i feel is yo sorrow
feel pity you cant beet me, you an mc, funny
your slower than a turtle running, still yet im laughin
what your probly gasping, still sittin, what ya thinkin
you think you won, still done, your stuned
one on one, your out, like ali ill knock you out
start a bout you still, finish this skid I will
boy youve been had, so throw on your kneepads
your my bitch im your pimp do it know young lad

thats it for now im at work just got busted but ill keep rhymin

[~King~cruncH~]

aight votin time uppin............................................. .................................................. ..............#1

[Under Dawg]

both verses were enormously weak

King crunch- you had some played out lines... but at least you had some decent wordplay tossed in there.. your first 4 lines flowed pretty well i give that verse of yours a 2.5/10

bonespitter- you need to work on your structure some of your lines did not seem like they rhymed cuz the structure of your verse was a little bit off.. you didnt really have any hard hitting punchlines i give that verse of yours a 1.5/10

VOTE: both emcees came weak however king crunch had a little bit better wordplay the first four lines of his battle, though elementary, came out better than the shit that bonespittter typed up

i vote for king crunch.. both of yall should pick up a pen and a pad and work on your rhyme skills a little bit more

[bonespitter]

more votes .................................................. .................................................. ..............

[~King~cruncH~]

uppin #2 uppin #2 uppin #2 uppin #2......................................
4 votes............................................. .......................

[~King~cruncH~]

uppin #3 come on vote peeps
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[Dialect OTYP]

i gotta go wit crunch on this
the oppent brought nothin and that hockey line was raw

both need work on punches and need personals

crunch had alot better structure then normal

vote crunch

[~King~cruncH~]

uppin #4
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[bonespitter]

com on need one vote vote plzz. .................................................. ........................................ ....................

you make me rather go to hell then burn

[Under Dawg]

dude i already voted in this battle.. ill up it for yall though so you dont have to keep using your ups

upped............................................. .................................................. ........

[~King~cruncH~]

uppin for the 5th an final time come on peeps vote.............................................. .................................................