There Was This Bitch Kid Named "GhettoWhiteBoy"

[FaTaL ErRoR]

there was this little white suburban fag
who swears his raps going to bring him cash
deeply inside he's soft like tissues, me n this kid
now have an issue, his crew looks half confused!
they can't spell, they swear they hot like HELL
i can tell, that each n every1 of them neva been to JAIL
they don't know whats hardcore, bitch ass niggaz
still got minds of a sophmore, he's pussy type like
kids who beef and never answer the door....
i'm wasting my time with yous, what can i say more?
i forgot you will neva make it far on this BOARD...
i'll spit a cold flow that have your whole team froozen
i'm chosen of course to start showing, that you got lefted
BROKEN, like shattered glass, remember this fact
fatal error just merked ya' ass!....



i got more for you too, just warming up for you faggot...

[LunkHead]

not to bad...flow seemed a lil choppy in some places but overall wasn't that bad of a drop. you should try addin more multies to help the flow

[Chubs™]

hmmmm....didnt like it....too short....Wasnt very good really....

Keep excelling though....~1~

[FaTaL ErRoR]

thanks for the luv ya'...

[NH]

lol not like you had to try to diss them

damn u could come worse than that and still hurt him

i know your audio so the flow will have been better for audio

nice drop fams

[Artikqlit]

That wuz ok but ur flow wuz screwed up a bit...coulda upped ya vocab nd made ur linez rhyme more...

^^not hatin cas i'm in his crew...

[Meta 5]

I feel some hate in the room... what's the beef in this topic? what u got against the kid really?