MoS iLL~~vs~~Thug WhYtE (the final round)

[MoS iLL]

I’m bout to come correct on Thug WhYtE, who does he think he is Magic
Mistaken his mic for a wand….now he thinks he can show us a rap trick
This dude’s like Kirt Kurpatrick from backstreet just a singer in the background
Me I’m a fuckin pitbull that can’t get schooled by no damn Wack-hound
I never back down from a rematch, 2 k/o’s aint shit…I’m ready 4 some more hits
His weak punches aint doin no damage….like Oakland comin at a Buc wit a blitz
what the fuck is he out his wits, I aint ashamed I lost the last 2 battles…the 3rd times a charm
Thug boy should be ashamed though, cause he has Just set off the gay alarm
Harm? Yea I think it is cause I think queers are sick for eatin other dudes jizz
I’m glad that when he sticks his lil pecker in his b/f’s ass…they can’t make kids
Aiyo Thug…..you just keep on thinkin that the shit you write don’t stink
Cause I’ll keep spittin these disses to you….even if my pen runs out of ink
I need a drink so imma end this here battle…….. pure and simple
Keep you’re day job, cause you suck plus you just got beat by a kriple (Yea, i'm in a Wheelchair)

[MC KILLA-T]

YO GO HIT MY BATTLE AND MAKE A HONEST POLL VOTE AND I'LL HIT YOURS AND MAKE A HONEST VOTE .....THATS AH DEAL.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50356


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[Auspicious]

Ight, i found this fuckin post and
here we go again.. This is tha last time.
no more fuckin rematches, if you lose
then you lose, dont fuckin whine about
it and post another battle...here it is . . .

Why must you persist to exist on my RB roster of faggots on tha hit list, stagger back, it aint worth movin forward//
When will you relize that i've surpassed lyrical magician, you can call me the Warlord//
And eminem already established that its Kris Kirkpatrick from n'sync not backstreet//
How bout u get ure facts-straight before you come at me like you pack-heat//
Was this suppose to be a freestyle? cuz it dont take a genius to tell that ure shit was pre-writ//
Its my principle to be original, this was off-the-top, thats decisional and their already askin for a remix//
Most of that shit was irrelevant to me, you just put my name in their, wuts your problem, dont you know your gunna make people think//
You want them to know you as a commited Ill rapper? Well, how commited could you be when you leave a battle for a drink?//
so i hear ure crippled, am i suppose to feel sympathy, am i suppose to care?//
How bout i unscrew a bolt loose so when ure in school the rim will roll away off your wheelchair//
Tha break down. . you have no flow, a wack style and horrible punches//
Its like knockin a crippled kid, over a garbage bin then beaten him wit his cruches//
You thought battlin me as a newb, would be a close bet//
Here's sum advice, stop askin people for votes who cant even vote yet//
You put up tha post, expectin me not to say something//
You were prepared for something you couldn't prepare for his records screamin, "Gut me, i'm nuthin more than rottin lunch meat, who cant compete wit defeat, it just over-powers me//
You tried three times, and three times no good, your soft//
You could rapped in front of a group of 4th graders and you still woulda got booed off..... end

UPPIN 4 VOTES............................................. ...... - one

Uppin 4 votes

[Auspicious]

UPPIN 4 VOTES.....come lets not sleep on this
I wanna get this over wit so hit this up
and I'll return the favor ............................. -one

[Feeble Minded.]

thug white lyrically raped tortured and murdered your every mistake mos ill.............he even turned the "i gotta go get a drink" line on you.

vote= thug white

thug...vote on feeble minded vs quotient when it is done..thanks...

[Auspicious]

thanks.....make votes official tho!......
UPPIN............................................. ............... -one

[Feeble Minded.]

what do you mean poll vote??? if thats what ya mean, i just did...anyway, remember to vote on quotient vs feeble once it is over................

[Auspicious]

yeah, when i wrote that post their was still
no votes, but i got it so its all good. thanks
.................................................. ............. -one

STILL UPPIN

[*MoF*]

ok thug was better!
he wrote more so he had more punches.........
both styles were okay!
VOTE: THUG

[Auspicious]

hey man appreciate the vote, but
length of the ryme has nuthin to do with it
but thanks,....STILL UPPPIN 4 V0TES.
.................................................. . -one

[Auspicious]

UPPIN 4 VOTES........................................
UPPIN 4 VOTES........................................
..................... - ONE.................................

[TOoNGFX]

nice lil battle,

Mos ill came strong, but his verse structure was hard to follow.
He started off with a nice line, to get the reader interested.

I’m bout to come correct on Thug WhYtE, who does he think he is Magic/
Mistaken his mic for a wand….now he thinks he can show us a rap trick/

that was a nice metaphoircal correlation. The rhyme got slow because he structured his rap as if he was doing audio, and not text. You need to use more multies throughout your verse, to keep the reader on there toes, instead of this style, were they glance through the verse, and look at the punches, instead of getting th full effect of your lyrikal onslaught.

Thug Wayne's verse has better structure, even though his punchlines weren't AS strong, his use of multi's made up for it.

Why must you persist to exist on my RB roster of faggots on tha hit list, stagger back, it aint worth movin forward//

Nice multi's, It seems as your were holdin back, I know that you can come even stronger than that, but this verse was good enough to get the victory.

my vote is for THUG WAYNE

oh yeah, return the favor, and vote on my battlez:-)

[Auspicious]

lol, thanks for ure opinion, but you cant vote
but i liked how u went into detail.......but i guess
i will still vote on ure battle..........oh yeah and by
the way, its Thug WHYTE, not wayne lol....
..........UPPIN ............................................ -one

[DarkForce]

Thug got this shit on lock....why da fuck u wanna get KO'd 3 timez by one nigga I'll neva understand.....not even close....Thug gets my vote....return da favor pleaz

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[Auspicious]

thanks....make these votes official!!!!!!!
.................................................. ....... -one