10 lines/5 bars
no feeding
no biting
no hate
no crew
no d.r.
both spit within 20 mins
WhiteNightMare
X-Sulent
10 lines/5 bars
no feeding
no biting
no hate
no crew
no d.r.
both spit within 20 mins
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R.B., send me someone with double his skill who's double as ill/
Someone who can fulfill the words they spill who's realer than a $3 bill//
This bitch just checked in to the merk hotel so bid him farewell/
His verse coulda been wrote by a demon and still wouldn't be hot as hell//
I'm equivalent to a radar gun but my lyrical speed can't be clocked/
You can't enter this staged because I have this level locked//
His style's wack, like an egg it'll crack, his rhyme's couldn't hold up if pinned with a tack/
Don't ever forget who brought this attack who snatched you from the front and put you in back//
Your flow is simplistic but mine is mystic and my mind is sadistic/
Don't fuck with someone who idealistic that's how you become just another statistic//
this kid thinks hes exelent? hes barly "mediocer"punk ass bitch wouldnt be an ace is he was playin "poker"/
sow his mouth closed so hes unable to "spit"had a bucket a tabasco sauce then X-lax just to say he droped hot "shit"/
why u even start shit,watch me bruise this dick head like a rock hard clit,when u hear this gun blast u know where u "headed" mutha fucka the only way u elevatin is if u gettin lifted by a "paramedic"/
now watch me take all the bitches and string em up like "lanters"this little bitch holds more nuts then a bucket of "planters"/(planters are a brand of peanut)
yeah i know pretty weak but w/e.....................
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alright, since this a battle between pros, ima lay off da "played out line" shit, cuz i guess i fail to realize that new ppl will use alot of stuff ppl already heard before
neways
x-sulent had the multis going but wasnt focusing on his punches
White nightmare was hitting harder wit his punches......
no hating on dis vote
Vote = Whitenightmare..
Aight...that's 1-0 for WhiteNightMare
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some of x's lines were played ie. $3 bill, tack back shit like that
x's best lines:This bitch just checked in to the merk hotel so bid him farewell/
His verse coulda been wrote by a demon and still wouldn't be hot as hell
Your flow is simplistic but mine is mystic and my mind is sadistic/
Don't fuck with someone who idealistic that's how you become just another statistic//
white you need to fix ur structure and shorten your lines
whites best: why u even start shit,watch me bruise this dick head like a rock hard clit,when u hear this gun blast u know where u "headed" mutha fucka the only way u elevatin is if u gettin lifted by a "paramedic"/
now watch me take all the bitches and string em up like "lanters"this little bitch holds more nuts then a bucket of "planters"/ <<hit real hard towards the end
vote=white nightmare for an overall better verse and harder hitting punches, keep elevating...good battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80972
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