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Thread: On Opposite Day-- Termz & Understatement

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    Termz
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    On Opposite Day-- Termz & Understatement

    Termz then Understatement.

    What if life was opposite?
    Genius received zero aknowledgement
    A world with no apocalypse
    Lie's were sworn true, zero honest shit
    Or Maybe
    bodys'd be collaged, eyes out the sockets
    the rich ran empty,and the poor had filled pockets
    And
    religion wasn't tectonic, it had contained no concept
    No crosses or lockets,no good word, mute prophets
    Perhaps
    the blind would be able to see, and the def to hear
    But those who would speak to them, voices dissapear
    Lives were reversed, you were adults before kids
    And you would have to die, before you ever lived

    Some Days
    The guy inside the mirror is the one that moves
    who chats spoofs, and ventilates in phat grooves
    So He
    He preached to the preacher, and set the rules
    Suffering Himself instead of suffering the fools
    Left Here
    buffering the tools, they use you for their means
    the stage chooses you for it's scenes; you've been
    practised by the music and ridden by the horse
    like midden reinforced,gettin felt by your remorse
    Just Know
    Your Son hasn't yet risen, It's Before the wars
    counter-clockwisened, just let time take it course
    Last edited by Maven.; October 6th, 2003 at 10:52 PM

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    They say I'm a fight risk A.T.'s Avatar
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    damn... terms... your structure was off, but I still picked up
    your flow... you vocab was decent dawgy and the wordplay was
    great... you made me think about that shit dawg...what if the
    world was backwards... damn nice spit man... damn nice...

    understatement- good flow, I like how you used your vocab...
    word play was aight, but the way that verse made me think,
    i think that made up for it... once again, a nice drop... just
    try to add more content and make your bars longer... nice drop
    dawgy.

    A.T.

    will yall check my drop... "COMPEXITY" much 'preciated if ya would.
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    I sing the body electric. Maven.'s Avatar
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    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    Termz
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    up = (

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    Wowy. I thoroughly enjoyed the effort put into the piece to ensure adjacently-flowing parts. . Surprisingly enough, the unique structure led to a unique, yet affective flow - rather than the traditional crappy structure/crappy flow. I've read enough of each of your pieces to decipher between your writing(s), but I honestly couldn't do so in this particular collaboration (at least not without reading the beginning, ). As for quotables, no one line was more powerful than the next; which, in this case, provided a formula for success.

    You could've done more with it, could've went further. . But it was worth the read, & I'll look foward to phuture collaborations.

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    This piece was something that should go in Memories. Hall Of Fame, call it what you will.

    Basically this had me thinking just how incredible a day like this would or could be. And also how everyday a little bit of this does happen.
    It would make for a lovely national holiday. But would it be a day when you would be away from work, but since it is opposite day you would be at work?...hmmm...

    "No crosses or lockets,no good word, mute prophets
    Perhaps
    the blind would be able to see, and the def to hear
    But those who would speak to them, voices dissapear
    Lives were reversed, you were adults before kids
    And you would have to die, before you ever lived"


    Well I say! Damndiddy damn. Great. Great Great Great.

    "practised by the music and ridden by the horse
    like midden reinforced,gettin felt by your remorse"


    Ohhhh, Ahhhh, Oeeeee, Auuuuu...wow....lol, great part.



    Both of you, just great.

    Fame of hall.
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    Artikqlit
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    Nice Shit From Both . . .
    Lines Ur So Short But Yet Feeled Wit Great Detail...
    Good Flow From Both . . . Excellent Wordplay Nd Imagery..
    Feel'n This . . . Could Picture Wut U Were Say'n..
    Dope. Stay Up

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    Termz
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    wow, thanks for the replies. word to bruk's hall of fame vote.

    uppin'nd one last time

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