10-15 line max blind spit
due 30 min's afta u check in(if no check-in tonight the battle will go on till both cats check-in)
no crew, dr, hate or uhh yeh
100 + to vote
check in nowwwwwww i'll check in afta u and start ya shit------
abomination
cutastraphe
10-15 line max blind spit
due 30 min's afta u check in(if no check-in tonight the battle will go on till both cats check-in)
no crew, dr, hate or uhh yeh
100 + to vote
check in nowwwwwww i'll check in afta u and start ya shit------
yo abomination......go poll on my battle with brotha lynch please...think u forgot...............i'll hit this up when verses are done
checkin in............i'll poll vote later.....dont worry
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aight i'm in let's rock this ishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
my flow illuminates through ya soundwaves, concaves ya chest inward
call the ambulance already, cutastraphe is injured//
off the first set, no chance at all like you playin roulette
bitch you'll get hypothermia and drown, wipe ya cold sweat//
ya fearin me, ya aint got the confidence to contend with this
your rhymes are soft and suck like when gays french kiss//
you dont need drugs ta die, your performance is your depressant
ya starin ya demise down, you aint gonna survive my torment//
your rhymes are hideous, ya cant rap, stop, ya givin me the stomach flu
ya brains in the wrong mindset, shit jesus cant even save you//
my words inflict pain, 1 million more incisionz than a close shave
do ya self a favor, just roll into your own grave//
there ya go............ur turn
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yo simple and plain, ya aint nuthin but a bitch in sum-pain/
thinkin abomination, is any brain confrontation-i'm rippin him sane/
just to get a play on words, ya still gay as ya last verse/
won't have the same record for long, i dun't even like the same-rappers/(he put his top 5 emcees in hiphoplounge)
what kinda of a hood is pahoa, ya probly dun't even live in the slums justa anutha street-protozoa/
who cums incomplete more then grading tests on impotent- quotas/
kinda odd ya responded so quickly, but i won't stop if it's risky/
abominate? too bad the only thing ya can-block is a frisbee/
droppin and swiftly, cut will tear ya heart out raw/
the best ya culd do is add my verse to part of ya jaw/
didn't think bout disownin my son, so i'll father ya more/
the harder i go with the flow, keep it on point as ya kno/
while ya just borin in shows, and culdn't shine-haulin the chrome/
okay guys the shits done.......lets get some votes in on this one......dont sleep on this one.......................
dun'ttttttttttttt sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppp yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
okay guys...not bad battle
uhmmm aboniation i liked you opener but it went downhill from there....
my flow illuminates through ya soundwaves, concaves ya chest inward
call the ambulance already, cutastraphe is injured//
compared to:
you dont need drugs ta die, your performance is your depressant
ya starin ya demise down, you aint gonna survive my torment//
your rhymes are hideous, ya cant rap, stop, ya givin me the stomach flu
ya brains in the wrong mindset, shit jesus cant even save you//
cutastrophe had some okay lines throughout witch less whack fillers.....
kinda odd ya responded so quickly, but i won't stop if it's risky/
abominate? too bad the only thing ya can-block is a frisbee/
^^^i liked...and others were not as bad
so close battle but cutasraphe wins by a hair because of a bit more creative punches and less filler,,,,
vote cut
pleasse vote on the battle in my sig i dropped an honest vote peace
upppinnnnnnn for summmmmmmmm votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss-------------please vote thanxxxxxxxxxxx
a yo keep this one at the top dont sleep on this
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uppin agaaaaainnnnnnnn-----i mean shiit-i seen sum wack battles gettin more votes then this one--and this one isn't wackkkkkkk-----so voteeeeeeeeee
alright i see it like this
close battle not bad for both of yall that was enjoyable
personals-tie
opener-abom
closer-cutas
wordplay-tie
personals-abom
vocab-abom
consisteny-cutas
both were good but abom could have done better u had good lines suppoted by weak shit makin alright bars work on ure fillers and u shud elevate
peace
i will expect honest for my shit since i was pm'd
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flow- C
punches- tie
wordplay- tie
structure- A
vocab- A
creativity- C
metties- C
multies- tie
Cas wins due to winning most categories... very nice battle...
mad props to both...
~Ashy~
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