Johnny C. vs. LM

[Johnny C.]

Rules all set............................................... .................
.................................................. .......................time for mah verse!

[LM]

Yo remind everyone of the rules............................................. ....................................

[Johnny C.]

aight............................................. ................................................
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30 min.
14-16 lines
I spit mah shit 1st.

[LM]

The rules are:
14-16 lines
Usual rules bout d/r and shit
He spits first......................................

[LM]

Any body who wants to vote. Thank you but explain and hit this up aswell cos It's level at the moment:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86967

[Johnny C.]

You're a stupid-ass, dumb-fuckin kid, wit no flow/
Oh, but ya can't win to me now, cuz ya won't show/
U don't know-- how 2 beat me in this battle/

Son, i got a gun, it's an uzi; it's pointed at you/
U gonna get attacked, too/
Cuz i know yer rhymes are whack, dude/
Kid, ya otta know that yer rap's are talkin bab-ble!/

Do u really wanna hear the shit that
I've heard of YOU?!//
Cat, you've been fucked in the ass so much, you
Kan't play "skip 2 mah loo!"//
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
I'm gonna rip off yo appendages/
give u severe hemorages/
an then I'll allow u 2 jump off
ANY ledges!/
wut about rap?
yer in love wit dis shit!
but the only reason 4 that is u think tha mic is a dick!

[Johnny C.]

tear it up, dawg.
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[LM]

OK here we go:

I guess I've gotta murder you for a second time/
Fuck it...if you Pm me I'll give you tips on how to write a dope rhyme/
But if you think your already the shit then OK, whatever, fine/
But realise that your committin serious lyrical crimes/
It's a miracle how you can say shit about me bein wack, you like to cook you faggot/ (profile)
Now out the two of us, dont ever say that your the baddest/
And I know why you spat first/
It's so you dont feed off my verse isnt it Mr Johnny C./
Mr L got lucky, Mr L didnt merk me/ Mr I'm not sure I can ryhme like Lee/
Don't you get it, you wont ever beat me/
All you can do is hope that one day you will be me/
I dont care what you say...I've merked you today AND yesterday/
You callin me out is like disrespectin me/
So I had no choice but to merk your ass again disrespectfully/
If I am wrong in anyway please correct me/
But I predict another 5-0 victory for me/.



Peace!!!

Hit this up too:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86967

[LM]

Explaination:

Lee/L = Lee is my name but L is shorter thats where my Mr.....line came in


Peace!!!

[Johnny C.]

aight, that wuz tight.....
but did ya see mah subliminal thought... i guess not.

damn dawg that wuz a helluva lot better than the last one u passed un-to me... good job!
i heard that disses get points (from our last battle), so i TRIED 2 get this 1 chock-full o' karate-chop-action!

AIGHT, THUGS, TIME TA VOTE!
LM FOR THE PUNCHES... OR JOHNNY FOR THE PUNCHES,THE FLOW, AND THE NICE SIDE-BANNER!

[Implex]

ok let me be the one pop the cherry...
well this battle was wack, neither of yall said anything worth repeatin... johnny c. ur sturcture is horrible, u got no wordplay cept for that bitin ass 'skip to my loo line', ur lines arent even played, they just suck... LM u didnt do any better, id rather not vote but i might as well and shit...

wordplay - john john, just cuz he mad a feeble attempt at bitin somethin, but he still tried
punches - equal, neither said anything personal or nothin
multis - LM cuz he had some... kinda
Metas - i dont even know if there is any...

overall VOTE - Johnny cuz he did bad but LM won the first time and came weak as fuck on this.... and dont think im hatin or anything... i dont hate on shit except haters

[LM]

Man we both went ten times better than what we did on our last battle. Good work dawg.....................................

[LM]

Thanks for votin Hardcore.......................................... .............................


Peace!!!

[Johnny C.]

i just got mah 1st vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

[Johnny C.]

so much 4 yer "...(5-0) victory..."
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