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    DiVersE in Da CLuB -- > Snippet

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/bl...nmentmusic.htm

    ^DiVersE in Da CLuB --

    Just my 2 verses 4 a collab off my album, hasn't been mastered yet, so quality could be better... jus' let me know HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER....

    drop a link , i'll peep your shit with the same ammount of feedback u give... 1
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    hot shyt.......werd-play on point....vocab is str8..hrd to undestand at sumtimes..but definately a club banga and album material.....keep it up

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    HOLLA... thx bro... keep tha shiznit comin' bizznic's... lol..
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    this track is good..lyrics were good
    quality was good..could be better..but i understand wid the mastering shit
    flow was on point..is there gonna be a hook in the blank spot on the track..i was wondering..cuz like u take a brake for a lil while..but other than that..nice job

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    yes there is gonna be a hook and another verse before that by PhiL-E... 1.. good looks
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    c'mon people this is jus' a warm up to what i'm bringin' next.. holla

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    uppin' again...
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    hard for me to explain. This was a cool production and you came with good energy, wasn't feelin the first verse all that much but the second verse i thought was tight. The way you dropped the multi's and shit. Your mic presence is much better on this track than the previous shit i heard, sounds like your gettin' tighter. You could enunciate your words a lil' better for better clarity of what your saying at all times, but then that could be the lo-fi play i'm gettin'. Anyway.

    Overall-this was a nice drop and after you master it it looks like it will be strait.

    Feedback on my cut: Finishin' Moves (updated)

    Ghost...........

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    This shit is dope fam but you need to lower your voice and fix your doubles a lil bit...but for the most part it is sick...the beat is straght everything is good....HOlla back

    Peep my shit out http://www.soundclick.com/lilbrick

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    This is a'ight. I really can't say nothin bad about it... the second verse was a lil better then the first. But yea keep it up
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    holla, told' y'all... you ain't seen nothin' yet... wait 4 the next track... good look's tho... 1
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    shit bang.. only thing. you need addlibs and sound effects through out your verses. cuz its kinda dull just hearin the verse.. make me feel the shit... the second verse lyrics i wasnt reallin feelin. i say you redo it for your lp. anyways. goo shit.

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    lol u asked where igo the beat from and u got it ... lol...........anyway, this is aiight, pretty nice flow... delivery has emotion but u dont sound real comfortable on the mic yet.... i dont know..that always comes..... ok i thought this was over... theres just no hook.....the flow is nice again....some adlibs a lil off in some spots......ok its stopped... tyea this was pretty nice, just needs a hook... and better quality

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