Toner vs Skeemz

[Toner]

10 linez
NO bitin
No whack votez & all must be explained
Blind spit.

Checkin IN

[Toner]

It's inevatable..............

Dead rapper walkin.....Check this lyrical execution...Electricution
A solution to all linez that are gruesome...Skeemz no threat...jus a nuisance,
Peeped ya shit...ya like to get metaphroical...yo shits diabolical,
I dismiss any shit ya spit...like your whole verse was retorical,
No bio to aim at so I'm jus gonna rip out ya tongue..An crush ya lungs,
Your whole ego's bogus like Prop G.. An excuse to drop bombs,
This kid PMed me beggin to only drop eight...Style of a heavy weight?,
Your whole attitude got me Irate...Do I fire to kill or jus to sedate,
Either way watch me defocate...Your feeble life force I'll eradicate,
Who immataes an who inovates...this verse suggest who segrogates.

Peace

[Toner]

Yo don't be runnnin kid, jus drop a verse or get D'Qd or some ting.............................................. .........

[Skeemz]

I’ma leave dis fake tony hawk missin in action like cristopher reeves//
No personals? Ya belong wit Aladdin cause u da king of thieves//
ya rap career is like a phone dats off…dead u dont hear no "tone"//
My rhymes are nuttin heat scolding toner till he’s skin and bones//
I got tone feelin exposed and naked I’m fully equipped wit nines//
This fagat toner’s punches is like his daily status always “offline”//
Dis tha nail in tha coffin ya 3rd time wasn’t a charm dis aint either//
Take a breather…Son! inhale and exhale my flames of lyrical ether//
“Tone” its bout time to “call” ya d/r’s and they’ll still vote me//
ya not no emcee… cause skateboarding is this queers #1 hobby//


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In His profile he says he's a skateboarder

[Laureate]

OPener: Tie
Closer: Toner
Personals: Tone
Punches: Tone
Flow: Tone
Win: Tone
Hit this battle up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92553

[Skeemz]

wtf kind of vote was that i no 4 sure he did not have me in personals,punches,or flow...but ur in in titled to ur own opinion

Uppin 4 votes............................................. ..

[J~Dubs]

punches:=
flow*sk...was strenchin most of his
personals*sk....killed this subject
opener*=
closer*sk..lmao some funny ass shit
complexity*=
vocab*Toner...u lots of big words
Wordpplay*sk.....that otha cat use his words wrong

Vote*sk...........
Toner half u shit aint make sense u dont no how to use words.. ur juss tryna use big words witch is good juss make sure u no what they mean...juss a tip holla

[Toner]

WTF, of course I know what words I'm usin' fool-every one of them.....This is comin from a guy who spelt which wrong?!!!!!

[Skeemz]

^^dub did kinda have a point but anyways uppin 4 votes
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[pedro nok]

good battle.....................Shit Tone......You elavated son in a quick space, see your new structure workz for ya....punches strong 2.......

Tone Mark=7.5/10

Skeemz..........good shit but concentrated on "tone" and phones 2 much..........Mark=6.75/10

Tone wins marginally

[Toner]

Uppin fo votez............................................. .................................................. .....1st

[Da_Legend]

flow = none
structure = none
multis = toner
punches = skeem (aint all dat but wuz more aggressive)
creativity = both
consistency = toner

vote = toner

slightly got this over skeem

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92651

[Chrit.]

Toner takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- Toner

[Toner]

Uppin fo votez............................................. .................................................. .................2nd

[El Chapo]

nice battle but ya no doubt toner got this his vocab was hotter and i liked his flow skeemz was aite but just had missing someting for some reason didn't like it~1