battle whiteRwrong v mc pinacle

[whiteRwrong]

7-10 lines
normal rules
times 2
you,me,you,me
its on you round 1......

[whiteRwrong]

yo yo MC penis,
I mean pinacle you bout to get dissed by the
"great white Miracle"!!!
check it yo yo its round 1,
sittin in da california fuckin sun,
why you turn around and start ta run,
my flows as tight as a virgin nun,
dont be afarid of ur daddy son,
wheres all ur comebacks---what ya aint got none
ur raps played out like a giligans island re-run,
ok ill stop--im fuckin done, you got knocked out in

ROUND 1

[whiteRwrong]

Originally posted by whiteRwrong
yo yo MC penis,
I mean pinacle you bout to get dissed by the
"great white Miracle"!!!
check it yo yo its round 1,
sittin in da california fuckin sun,
why you turn around and start ta run,
my flows as tight as a virgin nun,
dont be afarid of ur daddy son,
wheres all ur comebacks---what ya aint got none
ur raps played out like a giligans island re-run,
ok ill stop--im fuckin done, you got knocked out in

ROUND 1

[spokenoh]

sorry bout that..heres my verse

whats this name, whiteRwrong?/is it a testimony that you're lyrical skills are strong/

so, act out of your place and you'll submitt to these verbal lacerations/i'll rip your whiteness so hard, it'll make your ass look Asian

man, nothing can compare with my intricate thoughts/I'll manifest into bacteria and your rhymes will rot/

im a newbie to rapbattles but i aint gonna be simplistic/my flow owns an undescribable aura, an eerie mystic/

and whenever i commend a mic, the composition withers/the forces of nature even cringe when i deliver/

[spokenoh]

sorry bout that, didnt even know we were battling, upppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes, someone please vote...........

[And Death]

METAPHORES - MC PINACLE
VOCABULARY - MC PINACLE
PUNCHLINES - MC PINACLE
STRUCTURE - neither
CREATIVITY - MC PINACLE
PERSONALS - MC PINACLE
OPENING - MC PINACLE
CLOSING - MC PINACLE
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - MC PINACLE

Return the favor:
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[spokenoh]

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[spokenoh]

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[spokenoh]

why isnt people voting?fuck.................it would take 5 minutes to vote and explain why.............will somebody vote, please?????????????????????uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppp ppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes(4th time uppin)

[Ike_Anrap]

pinnacle got this battle..easily..he punches was better and was more advanced than whiterwrong..white didnt really diss pinnacle..and thats what you suppose to do in a battle..so pinnacle gets my vote..

hit up the battle in my sig..thanks

[spokenoh]

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[menolin]

openerinncale
closerinnacle
punchesinnacle
wordplayinnacle
enjoyability:tie- pinnacle was good, the other 'lol'
structure:none, both were wack
overallinnacle

aiight

keep elevatin you 2.

peace

[spokenoh]

um, thanks for tha vote but you forgot 2 poll it.......................100 charactersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssss

[_MATCHyou_]

lil choppy on all ends but i think pinacle took it, both need to attpem to restructure, so easy to read and flow, its really choppy still

[deser_eagle]

METAPHORES - MC PINACLE
VOCABULARY - MC PINACLE
PUNCHLINES - MC PINACLE
STRUCTURE - neither
CREATIVITY - MC PINACLE
PERSONALS - MC PINACLE
OPENING - MC PINACLE
CLOSING - MC PINACLE
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - MC PINACLE