these eyes don't see color

oh yeah ma it's also on audio but i ain't got soundclick or nothin so i cant give a link but i'm workin on gettin it on myspace then when i do i'll send you the link aight

meh this was good in your own way i seen where you was coming from but i think you should come with more stronger meaning ya know good verse pz

thanx for the feed man

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271726

hit up my OM thanx

already did man

uppin

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Originally Posted by Larone.

meh, try n come with come with more complexity, this was ok but to basic..

werdz.

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word.

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Originally Posted by big j da fat boy

aight ma thanx for the feed. i was gonna send the verses to you tonight, but since you found them i don't now but just pm me when they done aight ma peace out

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aiite thats cool.. i'll post it up wen its dun k....... :2thumb: 1

the flow was aight the vocabualry is what you need improve on the most
the whole thing was long as fuck but it was aight i liked it 4 the most part wasn't shit really wrong with it but the fact that u need to work on better vocab the creativity wanst too bad you brought the topic out well but still could B better so elevate

aight thanx man will work on vocab peace out

uppin