it was weird I did'nt really understand how it flowed and the structure confused the shit out of me...I guess it might be okay if you made it legible...but keep dropping lil homie
it was weird I did'nt really understand how it flowed and the structure confused the shit out of me...I guess it might be okay if you made it legible...but keep dropping lil homie
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This Wasnt That Good At All...
And For Such Short Lines The Flow Should Have Been Alot Smoother...
Here's The Verse By Verse Break Down:
Well if it's like crack & smack, then WE must hit it
we totin shit, hopeless cunts, is all we gon get with
disastrous sound nigga, when we’re on it
all fly girls, cripples and hoes, run from it
textcee's in my circumference, is comforted son
our growth been stunted from this, you don't want it
(What nigga?) My whack thoughts take a concept & son it
who the ultimate? DM? I wouldn’t bet a buck on it
Most Of That Was Stupid As Fuck...
If You're Trying To Diss Then You Failed, Sorry...
No Punches, The Flow Was So Off...
You Didn't Even Use A Two Sylabol Multie Ending...
Just Blah, Wasnt Feeling It...
Aiyyo I drop drool on cocks dude my lovers want it
rock guys so nice I leave they cock juice runnin
all you gay pride dickriders better rally at our summit
it's me and Feeb among your skeets, outnumbered
cross UK plains, stalkin big gays, they get hunted
eyewitness account, saw they 501 zip unshuttin
just lickin to the side, I didn't really see nuthin
then BLAOW, blew all over my face when nuttin
Are You Serious???...
Well, Atleast The Flow Was Decent In This One...Kinda...
Blaaaaaaaaaah You Know What...
Not Spending The Time Ona Full Break Down...
I Understand You Were Tryna Clown Then And Whatever...
But It Wasnt That Good At All...
It Was Such A Failed Attempt At A Unique Diss...
I Dunno, You Get Some Credit For Tryna Be Creative...
But Still, You Didnt Really Impress Me...
And I'd Apreciate The Returned Favor:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166626
Thanks Mayn, And Im Not Hating...
Just Leaving Opinions, Stay Up...
.One.
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
god lighten up people...
i thought it was funny. Nothing great but still good enough to be funny
Atticus I'd like to see you try to keep an original rhyme scheme & some sort of wording on a track that talks about anything but rapboards & gayness.THIS WAS A KNOCK OFF OF AN ACTUAL SONG.Short lines my ass.
You talk shit about multies & can't even spell syllable correct.
& as far as flow..have you heard the song? I'd be tempted to make this audio just to show you how wrong you can be...text FLOW *smh*
you'd do great at rapmusic.com
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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I Wouldnt Be Able To Hear It...
I Have No Speakers And My Comp Cant Handle The Player Programs...
And Im Not Even Hating...
Just My Own Personal Thoughts...
And Dont Even Hate On My Writings...
You've Never Even Seen Them...
My Shit Is On Another Level Then This Bull Shit...
And Thats Whats Up...
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