Championship Match: Kenny (7-0) Vs. Neplus (5-2)

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Kenny the G (7-0)

Vs.

Neplus Ultra (5-2)


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[Truc]

we meet again

18-22?

[Kenny the G]

hey. i'd say lets kick off the re-opening of LLL w/ a good match. if i drop first ill probably do somewhere around 30


*****voted on all 3 open battles*********


...what a shame

[Truc]

sounds good

[Kenny the G]

you're still a nobody. it's time too elevate from wack
we'll know where atlantis is before nep's ever put on the map
ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
still an outsider, but it's not your fault in a sense
true skill's the key ..that's why your drops are outdoor events
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
my keystyles'll merk you & put you on the spot my friend
knowing u cant come off the top, cuz its a place that ya never been
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value
cry won the contendership. u wont feel so lucky in a second
dont view this as a free title shot, just a free loss on your record
truc your delivery sucks. and if i said it it's true
dont get me started, cuz my adrenaline's flowing better than you
you might wanna fall back, i abuse dudes like u for fun
cuz i have a mean streak just about as long as your losing one

[Truc]

Kenny the G loses 5-0

Sound winning 6-1

http://www.netcees.com/forums/showthread.php?t=62069

But...

The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying
Took you 3 years til the league was dying to reap this establishment
Congrats you finally champed LLL, causing everyone to leave from embarrassment
I beast this shit, forcing anyone to hear you rap is a wicked sin
This match is a Showdown, like the outcome of any gig you do 5 minutes in
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
Scraped out a lucky win, thinks he'll beat me twice with a verse
So now he thinks he's got a head start.. but thats just what i'm slicing off first
Your lines don't hit, mine wreck. now assemble some crutches
Let the flamethrower loose & cause a Backfire so horrible it'll resemble your punches
I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week
5-0 Mafioso murdered you. me I choke necks & crush spines
Cuz LLL is a battlefield, and your STILL losing to mediocre heads in Frontlines
It's crunchtime, people think he's fallen off? fuck that he never once was ill
But seriously I ain't gonna Liken.. you to a champ or anyone with skill



Good Luck.

[Hush]

K,G
you're still a nobody. it's time too elevate from wack
we'll know where atlantis is before nep's ever put on the map
ok thats pretty cool..i woulda worded that setup slightly diff
ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
hahaha dope
still an outsider, but it's not your fault in a sense
true skill's the key ..that's why your drops are outdoor events
eh, any key/lock/door concepts I cant get behind
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
hmm aight thats pretty fresh, never saw that
my keystyles'll merk you & put you on the spot my friend
knowing u cant come off the top, cuz its a place that ya never been
aight, thats regular but wording is clean
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
HA!! yea
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value
hmm stretch for me, good try
cry won the contendership. u wont feel so lucky in a second
dont view this as a free title shot, just a free loss on your record
filler?
truc your delivery sucks. and if i said it it's true
dont get me started, cuz my adrenaline's flowing better than you
hahahah aight
you might wanna fall back, i abuse dudes like u for fun
cuz i have a mean streak just about as long as your losing one
nice, good close

Truc
The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying
thats fresh
Took you 3 years til the league was dying to reap this establishment
Congrats you finally champed LLL, causing everyone to leave from embarrassment
ehh, just dont appeal to me
I beast this shit, forcing anyone to hear you rap is a wicked sin
This match is a Showdown, like the outcome of any gig you do 5 minutes in
hmm straightfoward, executed diff maybe it woulda hit harder
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
thats cool
Scraped out a lucky win, thinks he'll beat me twice with a verse
So now he thinks he's got a head start.. but thats just what i'm slicing off first
nawww, too cliche/stock for me..wording didnt help
Your lines don't hit, mine wreck. now assemble some crutches
Let the flamethrower loose & cause a Backfire so horrible it'll resemble your punches
alil forced, but I can fuck w/ it
I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did
hmmm iffy, but I seen a TON of sound np's..concept used diff may have been dope
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week
lol cool
5-0 Mafioso murdered you. me I choke necks & crush spines
Cuz LLL is a battlefield, and your STILL losing to mediocre heads in Frontlines
haa thats cool too, I like this personal jabs
It's crunchtime, people think he's fallen off? fuck that he never once was ill
But seriously I ain't gonna Liken.. you to a champ or anyone with skill
naw that dont make sense, its a force on the wp. to me it gotta work both ways


man this is close, both had dope shit, both had some way offside misses for me...truc may have had lotb w/ his opener, an some of those personal jabs stung, but I felt ken had too many fresh well executed ideas, an took it on a consistency basis

v/ken

[_Lyrics]

you're still a nobody. it's time too elevate from wack
we'll know where atlantis is before nep's ever put on the map
ok
ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
lol
still an outsider, but it's not your fault in a sense
true skill's the key ..that's why your drops are outdoor events
ehhh decent
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
ok
my keystyles'll merk you & put you on the spot my friend
knowing u cant come off the top, cuz its a place that ya never been
pretty good
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
weak
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value
nahh too straightfoward
cry won the contendership. u wont feel so lucky in a second
dont view this as a free title shot, just a free loss on your record
idk i wasn't feeling it
truc your delivery sucks. and if i said it it's true
dont get me started, cuz my adrenaline's flowing better than you
ha this was ok
you might wanna fall back, i abuse dudes like u for fun
cuz i have a mean streak just about as long as your losing one
played...

a couple lines in there i was feeling toward the beginning, but some of it I didn't feel. in the set up, it just seemed too straight forward, not to say you should have went crazy complex but a punches surprise factor is what im looking for. flowed well all the way through and a couple lines like the rb trample and adrenelin flowing better than line...

vs

The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying
ok
Took you 3 years til the league was dying to reap this establishment
Congrats you finally champed LLL, causing everyone to leave from embarrassment
lol
I beast this shit, forcing anyone to hear you rap is a wicked sin
This match is a Showdown, like the outcome of any gig you do 5 minutes in
wasn't feeling
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
ok
Scraped out a lucky win, thinks he'll beat me twice with a verse
So now he thinks he's got a head start.. but thats just what i'm slicing off first
nahh
Your lines don't hit, mine wreck. now assemble some crutches
Let the flamethrower loose & cause a Backfire so horrible it'll resemble your punches
ok
I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did
wasn't feeling..
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week
lol
5-0 Mafioso murdered you. me I choke necks & crush spines
Cuz LLL is a battlefield, and your STILL losing to mediocre heads in Frontlines
nahh
It's crunchtime, people think he's fallen off? fuck that he never once was ill
But seriously I ain't gonna Liken.. you to a champ or anyone with skill
had potential but i wasnt feeling it...

damn most the time im thinking you had some funny concepts and pretty dope wording. flowing was good but i felt you could've improved on some concepts in there, definitely on a different consistency it was something i liked then something i didnt. but in the end its closely comparable quotables.

seemed like a close match but i was feeling better set punches and personals from truc...
v/neplus

[A. Karpis]

ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
lol, that was dope
truc your delivery sucks. and if i said it it's true
dont get me started, cuz my adrenaline's flowing better than you

vs


The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week
that was raw

Truc came with the personals, some hit harder than others. But i got Kenny winning this with a couple more quotes. Both came pretty good but i feel truc had more misses than kenny

Vote/Kenneth

[Seyance]

you're still a nobody. it's time too elevate from wack
we'll know where atlantis is before nep's ever put on the map
ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value

vs

I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week

v/Ken, just overall better verse.. nep tried coming on a real personal tip but they got lost in the mound of bad cliches. Couple of decent lines fighting his corner, but overally Kenny took this with wittier, better worded concepts..

[Rapstyles]

you're still a nobody. it's time too elevate from wack
we'll know where atlantis is before nep's ever put on the map
-cool open
ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
-okay
still an outsider, but it's not your fault in a sense
true skill's the key ..that's why your drops are outdoor events
-nice
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
-nice
my keystyles'll merk you & put you on the spot my friend
knowing u cant come off the top, cuz its a place that ya never been
-okay punch, wording was a little off
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
-ok
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value
-nice
cry won the contendership. u wont feel so lucky in a second
dont view this as a free title shot, just a free loss on your record
-cool
truc your delivery sucks. and if i said it it's true
dont get me started, cuz my adrenaline's flowing better than you
-weak
you might wanna fall back, i abuse dudes like u for fun
cuz i have a mean streak just about as long as your losing one
-cool closer


The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying
-ight
Took you 3 years til the league was dying to reap this establishment
Congrats you finally champed LLL, causing everyone to leave from embarrassment
-lol cool
I beast this shit, forcing anyone to hear you rap is a wicked sin
This match is a Showdown, like the outcome of any gig you do 5 minutes in
-weak
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
-cool
Scraped out a lucky win, thinks he'll beat me twice with a verse
So now he thinks he's got a head start.. but thats just what i'm slicing off first
-decent
Your lines don't hit, mine wreck. now assemble some crutches
Let the flamethrower loose & cause a Backfire so horrible it'll resemble your punches
-weak
I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did
-nice
You battle too much, once i've dropped your gone, geek
But we'll see Kenny breaking records.. most champ matches lost in ONE week
-k
5-0 Mafioso murdered you. me I choke necks & crush spines
Cuz LLL is a battlefield, and your STILL losing to mediocre heads in Frontlines
-straight
It's crunchtime, people think he's fallen off? fuck that he never once was ill
But seriously I ain't gonna Liken.. you to a champ or anyone with skill.
-cool closer

Damn, nice battle here... Straight solid punches, flows good, creativity n personals were up.... I liked Kennys verse a lil better though.. Imo he just came better with punches... That's all I got to say.. .
V/kenny 

[DGK]

The league knows your the best, champed without luck or trying
Cuz none of my bars are beneath you.. but THIS punchline is Underlying

I beast this shit, forcing anyone to hear you rap is a wicked sin
This match is a Showdown, like the outcome of any gig you do 5 minutes in
Last match I was backed by Rizpy, Bar.. you had dickriding geeks & whores
Hows it feel knowing your winning votes were from people I bodied weeks before?
Your lines don't hit, mine wreck. now assemble some crutches
Let the flamethrower loose & cause a Backfire so horrible it'll resemble your punches
I'll make sure everyone Hears, NC's champ left you disgarded kid
I'd even take this to Ultra Sound.. meaning i'll smash you twice as hard as he did

vs.



ya losing across the board. netcees record stamped it clear
you got ran off that site ..came back to RB & got trampled here
still an outsider, but it's not your fault in a sense
true skill's the key ..that's why your drops are outdoor events
your existence here's needless. ya got nobody buzzin
the leagues posture sucks if truc's really the fuckin backbone of it
my keystyles'll merk you & put you on the spot my friend
knowing u cant come off the top, cuz its a place that ya never been
whoever said you're nice, that mufuckas outta his mind
he got some nerve gasing you, it shoulda been the chemical kind
last time u lost to me & cried like a bitch. well boo-fuckin-hoo
how the fuck were you robbed? ..ya verses have nothing of value
you might wanna fall back, i abuse dudes like u for fun
cuz i have a mean streak just about as long as your losing one


V/ N

even though Ken had more quotables gonna give it to Nep cause i liked his wording and concepts slightly better. close battle, some of the punches on either side were played if i didn't quote em. decent battle, really consitent on both sides imo

[Kenny the G]

....

[Rapstyles]

rtf.

[Truc]

lol kenny close it if you want

i think you won this one.

more feedback would be nice to read though