The Archetype (8-1) vs Knux (8-2) KNUX WINS

[Knux]

LLL Season 15- Week 11

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
16 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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[Knux]

Arch is deducted 1 vote for voting on 4 battles last week

[The Archetype]

16...

[Knux]

16...Arch took a small ext

[The Archetype]

Well..

Now that LLL is as good as ever it's become Knux's baby in essence
He loves the league is taking off... since no bitch has ever done that in his presence
The mod spot was vacated and Knux filling it is the hardest thing he's facing
But the kid has no problem replacing Quote's... he's been doing that in his verses since registration
Kid's been trying to live with his girl but every night I make her squeal
So she's blocking that move like it was the Chris Paul to Lakers deal
His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce
I can't believe he struggled last week. Now no one believes this geek is hardened
The way Knux barely got passed Alphabet it's like he was repeating kindergarten
I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks
Birds of a feather flock together. So Token leading your crew matters queer
So after losing to me you'll flee to Netcees claiming you're too busy to battle here
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense


...blah...

[Knux]

Originally posted by The Archetype
fuck knux... he's a week in lol

Ok..

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
Fuck this cunt.. You n Ab shud get hitched, send me the marriage vid if its no trouble dude
Cuz we all wanna see you guys tie the knot……right before you kick the chairs out from under you
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone
What kinda shit is he on?...A fan of incest, if ur talking gay this nerds in question
So I’d say this league separates the men from the boys, but for him that’s just a ruined jerk off session
Leave u burned like the rest kid… thinkin he’s top tier but when his luck runs out son’ll fold
& while ur spot got u thinkin ur Hierarch.. nobody’ll ever list you at the top of one of those

Orignally posted by The Archetype
phly was my favorite battler to read... even w/o champing, talent wise, he was one of the best...

Relax bro, you jock legends hard.. should focus on your own shit to make sure u don’t hit the floor
Cuz my verses leave vets dropping like phlys … while you do that to his to ride dude's dick some more
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one

16.

*Beyond is blind in one eye

[Lethargic]

Arch

Now that LLL is as good as ever it's become Knux's baby in essence
He loves the league is taking off... since no bitch has ever done that in his presence

Decent

The mod spot was vacated and Knux filling it is the hardest thing he's facing
But the kid has no problem replacing Quote's... he's been doing that in his verses since registration

Decent

Kid's been trying to live with his girl but every night I make her squeal
So she's blocking that move like it was the Chris Paul to Lakers deal

Okay

His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce

Okay

I can't believe he struggled last week. Now no one believes this geek is hardened
The way Knux barely got passed Alphabet it's like he was repeating kindergarten

Nice

I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks

Ouch, lol

Birds of a feather flock together. So Token leading your crew matters queer
So after losing to me you'll flee to Netcees claiming you're too busy to battle here

Not hard hitting, but funny, lol.

Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense

Lol, great closer

Knux

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months

Lol, nice

Fuck this cunt.. You n Ab shud get hitched, send me the marriage vid if its no trouble dude
Cuz we all wanna see you guys tie the knot……right before you kick the chairs out from under you

Decent

Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*

Okay

Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone

So wrong, lol

What kinda shit is he on?...A fan of incest, if ur talking gay this nerds in question
So I’d say this league separates the men from the boys, but for him that’s just a ruined jerk off session

Damn

Leave u burned like the rest kid… thinkin he’s top tier but when his luck runs out son’ll fold
& while ur spot got u thinkin ur Hierarch.. nobody’ll ever list you at the top of one of those

Ehh, kinda forced. Hierarchy is the list, Hierarch is the individual at the top. It's still an okay punch though.

Relax bro, you jock legends hard.. should focus on your own shit to make sure u don’t hit the floor
Cuz my verses leave vets dropping like phlys … while you do that to his to ride dude's dick some more

Decent

I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one

Nice Closer


Great battle guys, it definitely was a good read. If Arch had gone harder in those 2 bars after his two opening bars, this could've been a seriously close match. As is though, I've got Knux taking it.

Vote - Knux

[Bongkers]

Now that LLL is as good as ever it's become Knux's baby in essence
He loves the league is taking off... since no bitch has ever done that in his presence
decent
The mod spot was vacated and Knux filling it is the hardest thing he's facing
But the kid has no problem replacing Quote's... he's been doing that in his verses since registration
seen the concept before, not bad
Kid's been trying to live with his girl but every night I make her squeal
So she's blocking that move like it was the Chris Paul to Lakers deal
okish
His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce
dope flip lol
I can't believe he struggled last week. Now no one believes this geek is hardened
The way Knux barely got passed Alphabet it's like he was repeating kindergarten
weak
I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks
lol decent
Birds of a feather flock together. So Token leading your crew matters queer
So after losing to me you'll flee to Netcees claiming you're too busy to battle here
decent
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense
dope..

v


Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
nice
Fuck this cunt.. You n Ab shud get hitched, send me the marriage vid if its no trouble dude
Cuz we all wanna see you guys tie the knot……right before you kick the chairs out from under you
nah i used the exact same concept a few weeks back
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
nice.
Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone
ehh, a little basic
What kinda shit is he on?...A fan of incest, if ur talking gay this nerds in question
So I’d say this league separates the men from the boys, but for him that’s just a ruined jerk off session
wording coulda been better still funny tho
Leave u burned like the rest kid… thinkin he’s top tier but when his luck runs out son’ll fold
& while ur spot got u thinkin ur Hierarch.. nobody’ll ever list you at the top of one of those
decent flip
Relax bro, you jock legends hard.. should focus on your own shit to make sure u don’t hit the floor
Cuz my verses leave vets dropping like phlys … while you do that to his to ride dude's dick some more
lol decent
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one
damn, this was dope to me and lotb.


Cool battle.. I really don't think Arch went as hard as he could though.. felt like some of your concepts were a lil lazy this time around you had a few solid hits in there though.. knux you did well you had some fresh concepts but you had a few misses too.. on quotes i got it as

His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense

vs

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one

V - Knux.

[Vinzr]

Now that LLL is as good as ever it's become Knux's baby in essence
He loves the league is taking off... since no bitch has ever done that in his presence
His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce

I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense


vs

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone
What kinda shit is he on?...A fan of incest, if ur talking gay this nerds in question
So I’d say this league separates the men from the boys, but for him that’s just a ruined jerk off session
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one

Gotta give this one to Knux to be honest, he just came with some fuckin' dope and creative punches here, a lot were almost about the same thing but still were made creative

v/ Knux

[The Gwapfather]

His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce
I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense

vs

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one


OVERALL:

Pretty cool battle here, both showed signs of some of their better work, but had a few that didn't hit, not really misses, but just lacked any sting, both were tied in quotables, felt Knux had the lotb, was almost the only thing that decided the winner here, Knux just kind of edged it imo..



VOTE: KNUX

[Meks.]

this was apretty good battle...both had some good w/p's a few personals and overall some pretty dope hits.. both had good closers, on 2nd reead it was knux punxhes that ended with more of a sting and a harder hit..

chris paul lines wasnt bad, but i dunno didnt hit hard, just one of those things that "made sense" and that was it. a few punches ended up that way and came off statemen-ish. filling in quotes i wasnt feelin almost in the same regard.. netcees was kinda meh, other than that shit was decent and a few dope ones like the closer was ill.

knux, came wit some hateful jawns.. i liked the 16, didnt notice the tie the knot as played, blind i was a maybe not very hard tho, jerk off session was ill wording was stretched half off, hierarch u coulda done better, phly was meh, half played concept yet decent play on last week, closer killed it for me..

v/Knux

[Meters]

Arch

Now that LLL is as good as ever it's become Knux's baby in essence
He loves the league is taking off... since no bitch has ever done that in his presence
(not complete enough for me)
The mod spot was vacated and Knux filling it is the hardest thing he's facing
But the kid has no problem replacing Quote's... he's been doing that in his verses since registration
(not bad, kinda plainish at this point though)
Kid's been trying to live with his girl but every night I make her squeal
So she's blocking that move like it was the Chris Paul to Lakers deal
(kinda statementish)
His fat bitch is always ride or die but she can't prove this dork is not soft
So when my fists leave him battered... she'll just be waiting with the fork and hot sauce
(very spit like punch, played though)
I can't believe he struggled last week. Now no one believes this geek is hardened
The way Knux barely got passed Alphabet it's like he was repeating kindergarten
(slick wording, cool)
I can't believe kids think you're top tier. Against any vet you end up bruised, Freak
Soon you'll be ready for PrimeTime... cuz on your current slide you'll be facing him in 2 weeks
(liked this, still kinda genericish)
Birds of a feather flock together. So Token leading your crew matters queer
So after losing to me you'll flee to Netcees claiming you're too busy to battle here
(eh, okay)
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense
(haha, pretty cool)

Knux

Leave my name out ur mouth, focus on getting laid.. u hava E-lover u haven’t thrusted once
This nerd’s to busy trying to blackball me to realize he hasn’t had his touched in months
(cool)
Fuck this cunt.. You n Ab shud get hitched, send me the marriage vid if its no trouble dude
Cuz we all wanna see you guys tie the knot……right before you kick the chairs out from under you
(playedish but good personal sting)
Seen ya “HOF Nom’d” battle, you robbed Beyond n King..Had dudes questioning why you won
& how could we turn a blind eye to the fact that you pretty much got bodied by a guy with one*
(not bad)
Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone
(haha, well then)
What kinda shit is he on?...A fan of incest, if ur talking gay this nerds in question
So I’d say this league separates the men from the boys, but for him that’s just a ruined jerk off session
(not bad)
Leave u burned like the rest kid… thinkin he’s top tier but when his luck runs out son’ll fold
& while ur spot got u thinkin ur Hierarch.. nobody’ll ever list you at the top of one of those
(ok)
Relax bro, you jock legends hard.. should focus on your own shit to make sure u don’t hit the floor
Cuz my verses leave vets dropping like phlys … while you do that to his to ride dude's dick some more
(eh, alright)
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one
(nice)


pretty close, nice battle. v- knux

[Evolve]

I can't believe he struggled last week. Now no one believes this geek is hardened
The way Knux barely got passed Alphabet it's like he was repeating kindergarten
Birds of a feather flock together. So Token leading your crew matters queer
So after losing to me you'll flee to Netcees claiming you're too busy to battle here
Bitches flock to me. Knux forces them for sex or else his wealth is spent
See... I get head and butt... if he gets both together the broad is fighting in self defense

vs

Hide your son, this guys a pedo…..Arch whacks off to teens, he doesn’t see it as wrong
U vs Toke reminds me of ur craigslist encounters….cuz if he posted 16 ur belt wud b gone
Leave u burned like the rest kid… thinkin he’s top tier but when his luck runs out son’ll fold
& while ur spot got u thinkin ur Hierarch.. nobody’ll ever list you at the top of one of those
I’m quick to gore..haymakers fast to drop you, one to many shots’ll keep u from living son
These blows hit hard enough to Altar Speech….. and’ll eventually leave your family giving one

DAMN, such a hard battle to vote on. Both came pretty dope in all opinion. Definitely both came fluently. The quotobles were even so I HAD to judge it on the LOTV, and even that was hard to judge because what I bolded in the quotes were each LOTV's, but Im going to have to go for Knux the Alter Speech bar was dope and I just thought he slightly edged it with Arch's self defense line. Great Battle Guys!

V/Knux