It's Time (Prod. Adamackbeatz) - Laganto

[laganto]

Wat up RB. Got this new club banger called It's Time. I had been looking on here for someone to do the hook, with little luck, but I found a chick on fiverr to do it. Not exactly the sound I was looking for but I think it works well.
Anyway, this is about letting go of the rules of society and just having fun.
Enjoy.
[SC]https://soundcloud.com/laganto/its-time-prod-adamackbeatz[/SC]

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[Pair-A-Dyce]

Okay, where to start, eh?

I'm not sure what she did for the hook is really meshing with the beat, its not powerful enough since there is just one vocal track. Also your part on the hook is distracting, it doesn't fit. When the second hook comes in, its off beat.

You sound really uncomfortable on the mic. Your voice is very muffled so you need to work on enunciating clearly. Also work on your rhyme patterns, you rap off-beat a lot.

Now I haven't even said anything about the quality, which is not good, but you need to work on the rest first before you think about that. Better equipment and improved mixing will go a long way but work on the skill first.