Yoda vs Phlegm [Phlegm wins 5-0]

[phlegm]

10 lines due tomorrow

[phlegm]

Look Look

ur just a little green guy, knee high peon Yoda
and ima do that when i pull out the incredible hulk on ya
one punch and it's nighty night, turn off the lights
u'll need the electrical company to switchboard, like u should after tonight
best run and hide. no showing is your best option
cuz when i leave u stretched opposite me, it'll look like i was shadow boxing
yoda ain't a jedi master, he can barely pick up a Penn
and he sure dont know how to use it, unless its playin with Balls around the Net
make sense y this online Fruitcake wanna battle Phlegm
he read the definition of how it gets stuck in the neck like adams Apple did

[Yoda]

Yo mucous

You tend to lift heavy bars, bud you should've know that you're a weakling
even the bonds in your body protest in unison, probably because you're the weak link

So the next time you brush, make sure where you teeth is
Cuz when I throw lethal punches, all that calcium is either phlegm or feces

Oh frightened now you'd be thinking to put me up in the fiends list
Yeah I'm quite the Grims Reaper who scarred and diseased/deceased youre mamas fetus

Her umbilical cords were listening to the funeral chords from dusk to morning
Had a choir slice it like a ninja sword,an overly attached attention whore in the mourning

So When you see this, I think I might just pluck the fuck out both your iris
cuz the only time you see is when - eye piece(I Piss) on your eye lids

[Yoda]

Links :

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8494780
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8495107

[Hush]

Phlegm was a bit better
Concepts and wording was stronger


Yoda that shit was forced dude

Try to simplify

[phlegm]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES

[phlegm]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...hGod-vs-Wisdom

[Spree]

ur just a little green guy, knee high peon Yoda
and ima do that when i pull out the incredible hulk on ya

Vs

Nothing

This battle was weak IMO. Phlegm had better punches here
Yoda was to forced and had nothing real hard

[phlegm]

Yuppp

[Tic]

one punch and it's nighty night, turn off the lights
u'll need the electrical company to switchboard, like u should after tonight

vs.

Nothing

Phlegm that one line was cool, but otherwise I wasn't really feeling much, tbh. Work on your concepts a bit and read some more battles. Yoda Idk what to say man...your verse was pretty weak. Read a lot of battles to see how to form punches and how concepts are formed. Do that and keep practicing. You will get it.

V/Phlegm

[phlegm]

Up for more votes

[phlegm]

Up y'all

[Packed Graves]

Phlegm you have the idea of battling but need to work on direction & concepts which will come to you over time. You didnt really have a quoteable line in my eyes but had the better verse.

vs

Yoda you need lots of work, try & look at others around the boards material(dont use it) but teach your self. If not ask some one for help dont be shy, if you like battling & are into it try to stick around & get better.


vote- Phlegm

[KnowP]

one punch and it's nighty night, turn off the lights
u'll need the electrical company to switchboard, like u should after tonight


vs


ehhhh nothing worth quoting



yoda needs to be more creative with his concepts. think of some new and fresher material. maybe hit the cypher and read some LLL matches to see how to construct a decent punchline. phlegm keyd this up quick cause ive seen him drop some fire thus recently soo he skates by in this one with only one nice hit.


v. phlegm

[phlegm]

Thanks for the feedback and votes everyone, much appreciated. @fresh @Wordz AhGod. can u close this 5-0 phlegm