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@Smog
illustrious.
Smog
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@Smog
checkk.
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I don't admire u, respect nor think ur dope wit a pen,
ILL lust tree'a us? That just sends a vibe u wanna fuck multiple men,
I never challenge the weak, I seek talented peeps,
He peeped my record skipped bitch slapped n pm'd me--->"Ayo u down ta battle me geek?"
U like the rest, striving fo a great record, please dont try n front kid
Cuz I got u open to the fact ur wins come from peeps below five hundred
I get pussy at ease, got these hoes locked in placed,
So this pimple bust ur head open, u just poppin those off ur face,
I live my life to the fullest, full clips loaded for stupid bastards,
U spend urs behind a screen, nothin but net n that don't mean shootin baskets,
yo...
Dude aint nice with words, his ppl don’t feel his shit, what a pity
A dirty cloud is the only time you’ll see Smog on top of his fuckin city
I gotta clean nose & my hoes always lookin fresh rockin’ nice pearl
This loser’s life is like Man On Fire the way he’s rollin thru mexico lookin for white girl
Fuck outta here maggot, you don’t deserve to spit a verse with elites
Bringing Heat? Only after I drag him thru the road so long he’ll leave streets burnin’ for weeks
I’m a “samurai” when it comes to bangin bitches, I got ur girl in the bed & she’s moanin
She aint into action movies, but after I give her action she’ll be feenin for 47 Ronin
Your concepts went ghost on you, that’s the only way you’re close to haunting me
& ur verse will never be bigger than mine, unless you changed the size of font to 3
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I don't admire u, respect nor think ur dope wit a pen,
ILL lust tree'a us? That just sends a vibe u wanna fuck multiple men,
not feelin this had potential though.
I never challenge the weak, I seek talented peeps,
He peeped my record skipped bitch slapped n pm'd me--->"Ayo u down ta battle me geek?"
kinda of hatin on your self and calling him talented
U like the rest, striving fo a great record, please dont try n front kid
Cuz I got u open to the fact ur wins come from peeps below five hundred
nah
I get pussy at ease, got these hoes locked in placed,
So this pimple bust ur head open, u just poppin those off ur face,
good. but been used before
I live my life to the fullest, full clips loaded for stupid bastards,
U spend urs behind a screen, nothin but net n that don't mean shootin baskets,
lol this could have been better but still made me laugh
overall - you gotta work on thinking of fresh lines.. think outside the box. put some creativity in your wordplay. the pimple line was your best line but its not fresh as all.
vs.
Dude aint nice with words, his ppl don’t feel his shit, what a pity
A dirty cloud is the only time you’ll see Smog on top of his fuckin city
basic but effective
I gotta clean nose & my hoes always lookin fresh rockin’ nice pearl
This loser’s life is like Man On Fire the way he’s rollin thru mexico lookin for white girl
lol cool line
Fuck outta here maggot, you don’t deserve to spit a verse with elites
Bringing Heat? Only after I drag him thru the road so long he’ll leave streets burnin’ for weeks
nah not feelin this
I’m a “samurai” when it comes to bangin bitches, I got ur girl in the bed & she’s moanin
She aint into action movies, but after I give her action she’ll be feenin for 47 Ronin
ehh had potential coulda been dope. but wording killed it
Your concepts went ghost on you, that’s the only way you’re close to haunting me
& ur verse will never be bigger than mine, unless you changed the size of font to 3
heard this before so no
overall - verse was decent. work on staying consistent and work on the same stuff i told smog to work on.
Dude aint nice with words, his ppl don’t feel his shit, what a pity
A dirty cloud is the only time you’ll see Smog on top of his fuckin city
I gotta clean nose & my hoes always lookin fresh rockin’ nice pearl
This loser’s life is like Man On Fire the way he’s rollin thru mexico lookin for white girl
vs..
I get pussy at ease, got these hoes locked in placed,
So this pimple bust ur head open, u just poppin those off ur face,
vote - ill
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I get pussy at ease, got these hoes locked in placed,
So this pimple bust ur head open, u just poppin those off ur face,
vs
I gotta clean nose & my hoes always lookin fresh rockin’ nice pearl
This loser’s life is like Man On Fire the way he’s rollin thru mexico lookin for white girl
This was a close battle, I think that it really could go either way, I feel like Ill had a slightly more solid verse that edged it for him , I think Smog has potential to be dope but just didn't come hard enough here
vote-Ill
2-0 BUMP
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lets get some votes..
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Originally Posted by Smog
This was close, and not in a good way. Smog I've seen you come better than this, you had a lot of statements. Ill this is the first battle I've seen from you and your execution needs a little work in spots. I'm edging this to Ill because he had 2 ok lines where Smog I feel only had 1. Had Smog executed the closer a little better he could've taken this.
v/Ill
3-0, up
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This was even battle, both need work on more punchlines mulites & creativity.
Vote- ill
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dont forget to poll ur vote.
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Ehhhh ok, but I couldn't have done better :P
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