Wk 8 madnkrazy vs Pure Energy (Mad wins)

[King]

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@madnkrazy @PureEnergy

[madnkrazy]

just 1-2 punched this guy...lol

check....

[PureEnergy]

^Lol, aiight. Check.

[PureEnergy]

12

Leh'go...

So u’ve been searching my posts, grabbed a shovel to try dig up some dirt
Ironically ur layin’ stiff in a hearse while ya chick sucks my dicks for the thirst
Verbally without mercy dissecting the madnkrazy like an insane asylum
My bars are dope u drop bars of soap cuz in prison he likes the pain inside him
He’s got sores anemic cuz his asshole always gets torn from penis
U were born in weakness so ya mother shoulda scraped out her deforming fetus
Vultures gotta lot to eat cuz all of RB can tell ya verses smell like rotten meat
Stomp a hole thru ya dome with mad n’ike prints curing krazy wit’ a lobotomy…
And a frontal lobe driller, u don’t stand up to me like homes with no pillars
So u getcha silver back wit’ this knife to ya spine since u no-showed wit’ Go Rilla
Like backward thongs I will strangle this coochie, not a chance to remove me
Yo, I don’t care my lines are stretched I still use them for hanging this newbie

[King]

@madnkrazy

[madnkrazy]

Back in this bitch, i was talking bout his girl but she's scary
so I pulled out quick...and beat her to death with a medical dictionary
Name-plays i don't got many, still i don't have to use them to win
cuz i'm lazy...i'll just take the entire verse in Frontlines from phlegm
I wasn't sure how to diss-them, but before i even begin to stress
sounds like everything an E-store for women has...Omerta Collects
Sure this dude is wack, even ball boys look less gayer then him
so lose the hat...and i think we found Bobby Abreu's twin
Damn i need a drink, so I'll take a bottle of water and exit
as i bring the energy down...like losing stock in general electric

[Smog]

So u’ve been searching my posts, grabbed a shovel to try dig up some dirt
Ironically ur layin’ stiff in a hearse while ya chick sucks my dicks for the thirst
Nah man came off as a statement..

Verbally without mercy dissecting the madnkrazy like an insane asylum
My bars are dope u drop bars of soap cuz in prison he likes the pain inside him
Lmfao.. That drop soap shit is used up in my short time here..

He’s got sores anemic cuz his asshole always gets torn from penis
U were born in weakness so ya mother shoulda scraped out her deforming fetus
Good scheme but basically just shit talk..

Vultures gotta lot to eat cuz all of RB can tell ya verses smell like rotten meat
Stomp a hole thru ya dome with mad n’ike prints curing krazy wit’ a lobotomy…
Ubgot scheme man just lack of sting

And a frontal lobe driller, u don’t stand up to me like homes with no pillars
So u getcha silver back wit’ this knife to ya spine since u no-showed wit’ Go Rilla
Coulda made this not so statement'ish

Like backward thongs I will strangle this coochie, not a chance to remove me
Yo, I don’t care my lines are stretched I still use them for hanging this newbie
Ok

Vs...


Back in this bitch, i was talking bout his girl but she's scary
so I pulled out quick...and beat her to death with a medical dictionary
Nah

Name-plays i don't got many, still i don't have to use them to win
cuz i'm lazy...i'll just take the entire verse in Frontlines from phlegm
Lol. Nah

I wasn't sure how to diss-them, but before i even begin to stress
sounds like everything an E-store for women has...Omerta Collects
Better attempt..

Sure this dude is wack, even ball boys look less gayer then him
so lose the hat...and i think we found Bobby Abreu's twin
Weak

Damn i need a drink, so I'll take a bottle of water and exit
as i bring the energy down...like losing stock in general electric
Ur best bar ..


I don't even know... Pe great scheme but lack of punches.. Mk bunch a weird stuff but ur closer was getting there therefor I hit mk by a hair here, I mean felt like the only actual punch rest of all the bars were just statements..

Vote mk

[Sharp]

And a frontal lobe driller, u don’t stand up to me like homes with no pillars
So u getcha silver back wit’ this knife to ya spine since u no-showed wit’ Go Rilla



Damn i need a drink, so I'll take a bottle of water and exit
as i bring the energy down...like losing stock in general electric


ok this was not too good, it was quote v quote for me and I thought mad had the more effective flip. simpler and not too effective but pure's bars were really cluttered... you kinda sacrificed the content and easiness to read for the sake of multis on multis

v/mad

[SiK]

Pure energy didnt cone with anything I was feeling. You had some nice concepts but they went no where

Mad had the energy down line. You also haf some conceots but your wording hurt them

Both of you have a decent idea of how to battle but you need to polish up on your punvhes. Word rhem crisp. Remember conplexity isnt the key. Its simpler bards with a good punch that is harsh and stings.


V/Mad

[Fresh]

Nothing

Vs

Nothing

Both battlers have to execute their concepts better. Wasn't feeling this battle. Mad had more of the idea how to write a verse so I've got to give it to him for having the less shitty verse.

V/mad

[ill nik-A]

wow, ummm... I didn't really see many punches, ur verses were more telling than creative, I think mads attempts were more text appropriate though needs better direction, set up/punch technique fellas, then keep in mind a concept is only as good as u word it, make it harsh, dissing and creative... im rolling with mad, stay up